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英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修...

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误,每句最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

   增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

   删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

   修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

   注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

         2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。

         3. 必须按答题要求做题,否则不给分。

My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There is a time when I swam like a rock.

                                                

This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of me at a nearby pond. I slipped

                                                     

into it. Had my friends not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then,

   

I have come to know importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend any training class

               

and learned it all by myself. I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look

                                                           

awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.

 

 extreme应改为extremely。  is改为was。  fme改为mine。  friend改为friends。  importance为特指,需加定冠词the。  改and为but。  look 改为looks。  difficult改为difficulty。  去掉from。  Satisfying改为为satisfied,满意的。 【解析】  文中第一句,extreme应该为extremely,副词可用在名词前修饰名词,表示名词的程度,extreme为形容词故应改为副词extremely。  第二句中,根据从句内容叙述的是过去发生的事情,可知主语描述的是在过去有一个时期,故is改为was。  第三句中a friend of me,要表达的意思是我的一个朋友,of后面用名词性物主代词,故改为mine。  Had my friends not come to my rescue,上文提到when I was fishing with a friend of me,是和一个朋友去游泳,故此处friends应改为单数。  I have come to know importance of learning to swim。这句话中是特指游泳的重要性,故importance为特指,前面需加定冠词the。  I didn’t attend any training class和learned it all by myself,前后为转折关系,故改and为but。  Though the way I swim look awkward.此句中主语是the way这个方法,主语为抽象名词,谓语动词用单数第三人称形式,look 改为looks。  I have no difficult swimming at all now. difficult为形容词困难的意思,此句所表达意思是,现在我游泳一点困难都没有了,困难为名词,故改为difficulty。  at least it can keep me from floating.根据上文意思可知本句要表达的意思是让我保持漂浮状态,故去掉from。  I feel quite satisfying. Satisfying令人满意的,指的是物。应该为satisfied,满意的。 考点:考查在句子中中灵活运用词汇、语法的能力.
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      53   Think about whom the site is for and what you want to say. Next, gather up the material that you want to put on the site.

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  B.citizens today in Shanghai drink the best quality of water in the world

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