假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a classmate named Angel, who is a lovely and bright girl. She is popular from all the classmates. One day, news came as Angel had got blood cancer. It really shocked everybody.
When I saw her in the hospital, I could not help cry. She was very thin and weak that it seemed only skin and bones were left. But her face was so pale, she gave us a big smile to comfort us. All the classmates and teachers began to raise money. Some called media for help. In the end, I succeeded in raising the money for the first operation. We will keep trying until Angel was cured. Many people offered as more help as they could even though they did not know Angel. I am really touched by this. There is love in everywhere as long as we seek for it.
根据必修二 Unit 3--5词汇表内容，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
1.The city is dotted with small lakes, natural and a__________.
2.Please accept this gift in a__________ of all you've done for us.
3.Learning a musical i__________ introduces a child to an understanding of music.
4.This is the s__________ where the famous director always made the films.
5.I looked forward to the __________(研究，探讨) of their theories.
6.__________(失业) is so damaging both to individuals and to communities.
7.I saw what was happening, but I was __________(power) to help.
8.Millions of people want new, __________(simplify) ways of interacting with a computer.
9.You can pay bills over the Internet. __________(addition), you can check your balance.
10.The product was developed in __________(respond) to customer demand.
Over the past 12 months the company ______ a 10 percent improvement.
A. managed B. manages
C. had managed D. has managed
He ______ in the village for three months, then moved to a nearby city.
A. stayed B. has stayed
C. would stay D. was to stay
I ______ to take a French course this summer, but I changed the plan later.
A. planned B. have planned
C. was planning D. had planned
Attempts must be made to ______ the barrier(隔阂) between the two communities.
A. break up B. break through
C. break down D. break off
