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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I like the Spring Festival,during that I usually enjoy myself greatly.All the family members will get together to have a big dinner.We also visit our relatives or friends.To my great joy,my grandparent always give me some lucky money.Last year,I spent the spring Festival happily as usual,but one thing made me surprising.My grandparents didn’t give me 1ucky money at the first! It seemed that they had forgotten about them.Seeing I was puzzled,my grandpa laughed.Several minutes late,my mobile phone received a message.It was my grandpa sent lucky money to me secret through WeChat!What modern and humorous my grandpa was!

 

第一处: that改成which 第二处: or改成and 第三处: surprising改成surprised 第五处:去掉the 第六处: them改成it 第七处: late改成later 第八处: grandpa后面加who或that 第九处: secret改成 secretly 第十处: what改成how 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲了每年春节,爷爷奶奶都给我压岁钱。但是去年,起初,我的爷爷奶奶没有给我压岁钱。正在我吃惊的时候,收到了爷爷发来的微信红包。 第一处:考查定语从句。这里含有一个定语从句,the Spring Festival是先行词,介词+关系代词引导的定语从句,指物,只能用which,所以that改成which。 第二处:考查连词。句意:我们也拜访我们的亲戚和朋友。文中表示并列关系,所以or改成and。 第三处:考查名词单复数。句意:令我十分高兴的是,我的爷爷奶奶总是给我一些压岁钱。文中表示“我的爷爷奶奶”是复数意义,用名词复数,所以grandparent改成grandparents。 第四处:考查形容词。句意:去年,我像往常一样愉快地过春节,但有一件事让我惊讶。v+ed修饰人,v+ing修饰物,这里修饰人,所以surprising改成surprised。 第五处:考查固定短语。句意:起初,我的爷爷奶奶没有给我压岁钱。at first起初,该短语是固定短语,所以去掉the。 第六处:考查代词。指代上文的some lucky money,是不可数名词,用it,所以them改成it。 第七处:考查常见用法。句意:几分钟以后,我的手机收到一条信息。表示“几分钟以后”,用later,所以late改成later。 第八处:考查强调句。把It was去掉,这个句子仍然成分完整,语义清晰,所以这是一个强调句。强调句的基本结构是:it is / was + 被强调部分 + that + 句子的其他成分,如果被强调的部分是人,也可以用who代替that,所以grandpa后面加who或that。 第九处:考查副词。修饰动词sent,用副词,所以secret改成 secretly。 第十处:考查感叹句。what和how都能引导感叹句,what后面接名词,而how之后接形容词, modern and humorous是形容词,所以what改成how。
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We looked around for which table we should pay for,and then _______ a table—it seemed like an immigrant family with a few children,_______ their meals at that time.I could sense a family _______ in them and that they were having a nice time together.We called on our waitress to _______ the idea to her.

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I don’t know what happened next,how the family felt and _______ or how the waitresses _______ the situation,but I am sure it brought a few _______ to a few people including myself.

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2.A. spend    B. manage    C. spare    D. make

3.A. occurred    B. changed    C. mattered    D. disappeared

4.A. order    B. idea    C. request    D. news

5.A. turned down    B. put forward    C. settled on    D. took up

6.A. preparing    B. expecting    C. cooking    D. enjoying

7.A. bond    B. argument    C. conflict    D. pressure

8.A. prove    B. explain    C. announce    D. report

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11.A. confused    B. scared    C. depressed    D. moved

12.A. wear    B. copy    C. spread    D. force

13.A. slightly    B. hardly    C. frequently    D. obviously

14.A. connected    B. separated    C. addicted    D. accustomed

15.A. refer    B. lead    C. respond    D. stick

16.A. curious    B. regular    C. awful    D. rare

17.A. changed    B. happened    C. realized    D. gained

18.A. refused    B. reacted    C. complained    D. criticized

19.A. experienced    B. avoided    C. analyzed    D. compared

20.A. suggestions    B. promises    C. smiles    D. worries

 

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Develop your passion.2. When you are setting your goals,you always want to be passionate about those goals,because if you love what you do,you will be driven by the desire to achieve success.

3.When you have doubts about yourself,you are doing damage to your progress.Therefore,you are supposed to see yourself as a winner,and trust yourself.Feeding your mind with positives will reinforce your beliefs and sweep any doubts out of your system.

Track your progress.It is important that you take note of every improvement you make.4. Every step forward will give you a boost,and accelerate your efforts to the achievement of your ultimate goal.

Learn how to control your emotions.It is important that you use your emotional intelligence when you encounter problems in your life.You are a product of your thoughts and feelings.Any negative emotions that show up can negate(否定)the positive forward movement you enjoyed earlier.So approach any challenge with a positive attitude. 5.  Instead,strongly believe that you have all the tools you need in order to make positive changes in your life.It is in your hands to make the changes necessary and to take your life to new heights.

A.Practice makes perfect.

B.Consider confidence as a must for Success.

C.This will motivate you to work even harder.

D.They can make us lose hope and even give up.

E.Don’t feel negative when you meet with difficulties.

F.There is nothing to be gained from delaying decisions and thoughts.

G.Having an enthusiasm for something will inspire you to achieve your goals.

 

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1.What does the underlined word“they”in the first paragraph refer to?

A. The images of the mail.

B. Informed Delivery services.

C. Letters,magazines and other mail.

D. The traditional advertising—related mail.

2.Why does the US Postal Service create Informed Delivery?

A. To make people interested in mails.

B. To improve its competitiveness.

C. To be relevant to other services.

D. To make a great fortune.

3.Which of the following best summarizes Paragraph 2?

A. The fall of the US Postal Service.

B. The replacement of the mail service.

C. The potential market for the new service.

D. The challenge the US Postal Service faces.

4.Why does the author write what Victor and Jocelyn said at the end of the text?

A. To prove virtual and augmented reality is helpful.

B. To show us many users are using advertising—related mail.

C. To give examples of users’mixed reactions to junk mail.

D. To wish virtual and augmented reality advertising to work better.

 

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A. contradictory    B. ridiculous

C. controversial    D. universal

2.Why does the writer list some deaths and injuries in the text?

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B. To show keeping exotic animals can be very dangerous.

C. To prove humans can not be infected by animal diseases.

D. To tell us it’s illegal to have exotic-pet ownership in USA.

3.What’s the main idea of Paragraph 3?

A. The reasons for keeping exotic animals as pets.

B. Worries about the endangered wild animals.

C. The differences between people who keep exotic pets.

D. The disadvantages of privately owning exotic animals.

4.The last paragraph of the text is intended to_______.

A. introduce some animal protection groups

B. argue against keeping exotic animals in captivity

C. warn people of the danger of animals being caught

D. prove captive breeding can encourage exotic-pet business

 

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