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The Mid-Autumn Festival, also w ide know n as Moon Festival, is a popular harvest festival celebrated by people in Chin a and some other Asian country. Actually, it is dates back to moon w orshipping in Ch ina’s Shang Dynasty more than 3,000 years ago. In Malaysia and Singapore, it is also sometimes referred as the Lantern Festival and Mooncake Festival. The festival is holding on the 15th day of an eighth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. Usually there is a full moon in the evening sky on this day, that falls in S eptember or early October in solar calendar. Despite sharing origin, the Mid- Autumn Festival has developed different customs in different countries and people celebrate them in different regions.
Ecotourism is a new term in today’s tourism industry. It is 1. (typical) considered as an ecologically sustainable tour ism w ith a primary focus on visit ing fragile and relat ively 2.(disturb) natural areas, especially the ones w here special and unusual plants, animals and cultural heritages are the main attractions. 3. takes ecology and culture into consideration. Therefore, programs 4.(concern) the protection of some natural and cultural spots also form a part of ecotourism.
Ecotourism is develop ing at an 5.(increase) speed. According to a recent report by the World Tourism Organizat ion, ecotourism in recent years has enjoyed 6. annual grow th of about 5% w orldw ide. So far, more than 80 activit ies 7. (list) for ecotourism and they include bird w atching, hiking, div ing, photography and taking part in 8.(vary) of local cultural events.
Big cit ies are still the major places 9. attract tourists in our society today. How ever, it seems some smaller tow ns and country areas may w ell become the new destinations for people 10.(visit) tomorrow because they are rich in ecological, cultural and historical resources.
Almost everything w as fantastic in the nature camp except for a girl, Elizabeth. When I saw her sitting alone in the hot sun at lunch, I asked her to eat w ith us under a __________ tree. How ever, Elizab eth refused my kind ______ . When w e invited her to play volleyball w ith us, Elizab eth __________ our invitat ion, too. After a few more ______ refusals like that, I decided to stay aw ay from Elizabeth.
It _________ that w e w ere going on a nature __________ and our instructor paired everyone up w ith a partner. Guess w ho my partner turned out to be. It w as Elizabeth!
“What do you like to do __________?” I asked, trying to make some small __________ as w e started out. “I like to ______ in peace and quiet,” Elizabeth __________ . So w e had the quietest and most peaceful hike in the w orld ______ w e saw a bird. “I think his w ing is hurt. Poor litt le b ird,” Elizabeth said __________. “ He might be tak ing a rest over there.” I said. Elizabeth nodded. Then she w hispered, “ But w hat if he’s in __________, like my granddad?” “Your granddad?” I said. “He __________ and broke his leg the day the camp started. He’s __________ in hospital and is in so much pain,” Elizabeth exp lained. I noticed she w as __________. “I’m sorry for w hat I have done. For some reason, w henever I get really sad, I act _________ and w ant to be alone,” she added.
“I get it,” I said. “I don’t alw ays know how to __________ it w hen I’m feeling dow n, either.” “ Thanks,” she said, w iping off tears.
After that, Elizabeth seemed to get along w ell w ith us, and I think she actually __________ the last few days of the camp.
Next time, if someone is unfriendly, give him a second chance. Maybe he’s going through a _________ time.
1.A. ugly B. pretty C. shady D. w arm
2.A. proposal B. help C. pity D. order
3.A. turned up B. turned in C. turned out D. turned dow n
4.A. unfair B. unfriendly C. unfit D. unimportant
5.A. seemed B. appeared C. looked D. happened
6.A. talk B. discussion C. voyage D. hike
7.A. for free B. for short C. for fun D. for certain
8.A. mistake B. talk C. change D. promise
9.A. jog B. sleep C. race D. w alk
10.A. replied B. insisted C. complained D. screamed
11.A. unless B. after C. until D. since
12.A. sadly B. coldly C. happily D. eagerly
13.A. hospital B. pain C. danger D. trouble
14.A. lay B. sat C. ate D. fell
15.A. still B. yet C. even D. ever
16.A. smiling B. coughing C. drawing D. sobbing
17.A. nicely B. properly C. rudely D. naturally
18.A. deal B. handle C. repair D. recognize
19.A. enjoyed B. planned C. hated D. avoided
20.A. fortunate B. smooth C. unforgettable D. tough
1. You probably think you w ill never be a top student. This is not necessary, how ever. Anyone can become a better student if he or she w ants to. Here’s how :
Plan your time carefully. When planning your w ork, you should make a list of things that you have to do. After making this list, you should make a schedule of your time. First, your time for eating, sleeping, dressing, etc. . Then decide a good, regular time for studying. 2. A w eekly schedule may not solve all your problems , but it w ill force you realize w hat is happening to your time.
Find a good place to study. Look around the house for a good study area. Keep this space, w hich may be a desk or simply a corner of your room, free of everything but study materials . 3. When you sit dow n to study, concentrate on the subjec t.
Make good use of your time in class. Take advantage of class time to listen to everything the teacher says . Listening carefully in class means less w ork later. Taking notes w ill help you remember w hat the teacher says.
Study regularly. When you get home from school, go over your notes, review the important points that your teacher is going to discuss the next day and read that material. 4. If you do these things regularly, the material w ill become more meaningful, and you’ll remember it longer.
Develop a good attitude tow ards tests . The purpose of a test is to show w hat you have learned about a subject. Tests help you remember your new know ledge. 5.
If you w ant to know more about how to be a top student, please w rite to me!
A. No games, radios, or television.
B. Maybe you are an average student.
C. This w ill help you understand the next class .
D. Make full use of your room to study independently.
E. Don’t forget to set aside enough time for entertainment.
F. No one can become a top student w ithout doing a lot of tests .
G. The w orld w on’t end if you don’t pass a test, so don’t be overw orried.
Ever since Donald Trump w as elected President of the US , the entire Trump family has been put under a microscope.
In China, the spotlight has been main ly focused on Trump and his daughter Ivanka. She is described on WeChat as an extremely inf luent ial ro le model w ith strik ing beauty, a successful career, and happy family. She leads a dream life that a million g irls w ould long for. Yes, she w as born w ith a silver spoon in her mouth. But she got w here she is by herself.
There’s alw ays going to be articles that say people born into w ealthy families are better looking and have a better family background than you, but these people do w ork harder than you.
There is a tendency in the med ia now adays to encourage elit ism(精英主义). They are trying to brainw ash young people into think ing that they should invest an enormous amount of time and money in bodybuild ing and appearance improvement. They make you believ e that if you do as they say, you can improve the quality of your life and join the upper class.
But w hat’s the dow nside of being average or common? Do you really need to go to the gym five days a w eek unless you are a gym crazy? Do you really need to break your neck and sacrifice to earn your first pot of gold only to w orry constantly about how to enter high society later?
Don’t let the idea of elit ism get to you. Everybody has a right to live the life they w ant. Human beings should not be judged as a success or failure based on w hether they are a part of the upper class or not. As long as you lead a happy and comfortable life, w hy bother to chase after other people’s shadows? Choose your ow n life path and go for it.
1.Which of the follow ing about Ivanka is NOT mentioned in the text?
A. She w as born in a w ealthy family.
B. She has a successful career.
C. She made it due to her father.
D. She is pretty beautiful.
2.What is the author ’s attitude tow ards the tendency in the media to encourage elitism?
A. Unconcerned. B. Negative. C. Doubtful. D. Approving.
3.What may be the best title for the text?
A. Run After Stars’ Shadow s B. Elitism and the Upper Class
C. Trump and His Daughter Ivanka D. Follow Your Ow n Course in Life
Is “plogging” the most 2018 fitness trend yet? They brought us hygge, lagom and fika, but now a new Scandinavian trend is coming, and it couldn’t be more 2018.
Hailing from Sw eden, “plogging ” is a fitness craze that sees participants pick up plastic litter w hile jogging—adding a virtuous, environmentally driven element to the sport.
Plogg ing appears to have started around 2016, but is now going global, due to increasing aw areness and fear over plastic levels in the ocean.
The appeal of plogging is its simplicity, and the feeling of getting fit w hile supporting a good cause. By adding regular squats and carrying w eight to jogging, w e can assume the health benefits are increased.
Running and good causes have alw ays gone hand in hand—just think of all the fundrais ing marathon runners do. But there couldn’t be a more on-trend w ay of keeping fit than plogging.
“Anyth ing that’s getting people out in nature and connecting positively w ith their env ironment is a good thing,” says Lizzie Carr, an environmentalist w ho helped set up Plastic Patrol, a nationw ide campaign to rid our in land w aterw ays of plastic pollut ion. “There’s been a real shift in the public mindset around plastics, helped by things like Blue Plan et high lighting how catastrophic the crisis is,” she says. “We need to keep momentum high and the pressure up, and empow er people through initiatives like plogging and Plastic Patrol.”
The Plastic Patrol app allow s users to map plastic anyw here in the w orld by collecting disc arded items, photographing them and up load ing to the app, giv ing us a better know ledge of w hat sorts of plastic and w hich brands are being throw n out. “I’d urge all ploggers to get involved,” adds Carr. As w e can see, plogging has become a new fashion in 2018. How ever, plogging isn’t the first fitness trend to combine running w ith a good cause.
1.What does the underlined w ord“discarded”mean？
A. Useless. B. Abandoned. C. Exposed. D. Distinct.
2.Carr helped set up Plastic Patrol, a nationw ide campaign, in order to .
A. raise public aw areness of pollution
B. shift the public mindset around plastics
C. connect positively w ith their environment
D. make our inland w aterw ays free of plastic pollution
3.What is the passage mainly about?
A. Plogging is the best w ay to keep fit.
B. 2018 sees an environmentally friendly w ay of fitness.
C. Running w ith good causes can make a great difference.
D. The Plastic Patrol app is an effective w ay to help you run.
4.What w ill the author continue to w rite?
A. other new fashions in 2018.
B. the first healthy trends in sports.
C. other fitness w ays of running w ith a good cause.
D. the first healthy running trend w ith a good cause.
