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Dear Editor,

Recently our school has set up a rule that no student allowed to take their mobiles into class, which has aroused a lot of discussions among we students.

Many of the students feel strong against the rule, arguing that the mobile had become a necessary part of our life. They also consider that a must for us to get relaxing from our busy studies.

When it comes to me, like some other student I hold a different opinion. While a mobile phone can help us get some relief, with it we can be more devoted to our studies, but spare more time to communicate with those around us. Therefore, I believe in this school rule is beneficial to every student.

Yours,

Li Hua

Crossword puzzles and exercise are just a few of the habits that improve memory best. But to 1. (true) give your brain a push, you might want to take a simple tip to heart-and it’s nothing you learned in school.

So far, researchers from Waterloo University in Canada 2. (discover) what may be the easiest way to improve your memory ever. Their research, recently 3. ( publish) in the journal Memory, suggests that reading out loud to yourself can increase your recall skills 4. up to 15%.

In the study, scientists asked 95 participants to test four 5. (method): reading, silently, hearing someone else read, reading aloud and listening to a recording of oneself reading. Their result? The people 6. read the information out loud showed the best retention(保持)rates—about 15% 7. (high) in learning speed, in fact. You may want to add these brain-boosting foods that can improve memory to your diet, too.

“Read 8. needs to be remember out loud, and you’ll remember it better. Yes, it’s shat simple!” psychologist and study co-author Colin Macleod said.

So next time when you ‘re preparing for a big exam, spend some time 9. (read) loud. Trust us. It might make you 10. genius.

All of us in Monte Vista Christian School know we’ll one day have graduation photos for the yearbook taken. As the time ________ , the girls start to have a ________ about what they’ll wear and where to take the photos, while the boys, ________, hardly talk about it. As for me, I ________ for my photos to be taken by the sea.

When I arrived there, I met my photographer, Annie. She asked me to make some poses and I ________ her advice. After that, I asked if she could make me look ________ by takings photo in a different way, ________ I’m less than 1.6 meters tall. To my ________ she responded, “I will make no ________ to make you look like someone you’re not. You look good in your own way.” She ________ that she wouldn’t try to edit the photos either.

I was shocked by what she said. Girls always ________ to look perfect by using different visual angles. When you go to a photo studio, photographers always try to hide your ________ by telling you to stand in a certain way. And picture editors can easily ________ your look by making you appear any you want to. ________, that’s not the case here. Seeing I was _________, Annie explained: “Everyone has his uniqueness. You need to _________your own beauty. You cannot live in a world of ________photos.”

It was the first time that I had met a photographer who doesn’t ________ photos at all. After the shoot, I saw the photos — they are ________ special and natural. But what’s even more special are Annie’s ________, which will always stay in my heart.

1.A. flows    B. shrinks    C. approaches    D. develops

2.A. request    B. discussion    C. reason    D. complaint

3.A. by accident    B. in addition    C. in advance    D. by comparison

4.A. arranged    B. applied    C. searched    D. accounted

5.A. considered    B. declined    C. consulted    D. followed

6.A. prettier    B. taller    C. thinner    D. stronger

7.A. unless    B. though    C. while    D. since

8.A. delight    B. relief    C. astonishment    D. satisfaction

9.A. attempt    B. choice    C. promise    D. decision

10.A. swore    B. added    C. explained    D. admitted

11.A. pretend    B. manage    C. pay    D. desire

12.A. imperfections    B. shortcomings    C. personalities    D. preferences

13.A. expose    B. recover    C. recognize    D. change

14.A. Therefore    B. However    C. Otherwise    D. Anyway

15.A. annoyed    B. discouraged    C. confused    D. embarrassed

16.A. foster    B. describe    C. admire    D. advocate

17.A. vivid    B. colorful    C. popular    D. artificial

18.A. organize    B. polish    C. cut    D. exhibit

19.A. really    B. roughly    C. partially    D. causally

20.A. attitudes    B. actions    C. words    D. skills

It can be definitely terrifying to fall through ice on a frozen lake. 1.In fact, there is more time to help you survive than you think.

As you first hit the freezing water, you will almost breathe quickly at once. Remember to get control of your breathing and not to move around. 2.This means that it takes about one minute to gain control of your breathing, ten minutes to move before you get too cold. The final one is to remind you that it will take one hour before you become unconscious.

Take that first minute and fully focus on your breathing. Slow it down, and then look around to see if you can locate the thickest area of ice. When you locate the ice, stretch your arms over the surface, and then begin to flutter-kick(上下打水)until your body becomes horizontal with the surface. 3..

It is possible that you can live for several hours after passing out. This, however, does require some planning. You only have about 10 minutes before your muscles and nerves become too cold to work. Besides, what if you feel too weak to go on and you cannot get out?4.The point is to encourage your coat to freeze to the ice, so that if you lose consciousness, you will keep your head out of ice.

5..

A. Remember that you should always stay off ice that’s only 3 inches.

B. Place your arms over the surface of the ice and remain still.

C. It can help to remember the “1-10-1 principle”.

D. However, if you remain calm, it can save your life.

E. Remove any clothing or heavy objects that are weighting you down.

F. Thus you will remain visible for rescue, even if you pass out.

G. Kick hard and use your arms and hands to climb out of the water.

Last week, Education Secretary Arne Duncan declared war on paper textbooks. “Over the next few years,” he said in a speech at the National Press Club, “textbooks should be abandoned.” In their place would come a variety of digital-learning technologies, like e-readers and multi-media websites.

Such technologies certainly have their place. But Secretary Duncan is threatening to light a fire to a tried-and-true technology—good old paper—that has been the foundation for one of the great educational systems on the planet. And while e-readers and multi-media websites may seem appealing, the idea of replacing an effective learning platform with a widely hyped (炒作) but still unproven one is extremely dangerous.

An expert on reading, Maryanne Wolf, has recently begun studying the effects of digital reading on learning, and so far the results are mixed. She worries that Internet reading, in particular, could be such a source of distractions(分散注意力) for students that they may cancel out most other potential benefits of a Web-linked, e-learning environment and while it's true that the high-tech industry has sponsored substantial amounts of research on the potential benefits of Web-based learning, not enough time has passed for longitudinal(纵向的) studies to demonstrate the full effects.

In addition, digital-reading advocates claim that lightweight e-books benefit students' backs and save schools money. But the rolling backpack seems to have solved the weight problem, and the shocking costs to outfit every student with an e-reader, provide technical support and pay for regular software updates promise to make the e-textbook a very pricey choice.

As both a teacher who uses paper textbooks and a student of urban history, I can't help but wonder what parallels exist between my own field and this sudden, wholesale abandonment of the technology of paper.

1.Which of the following statements is TRUE according to the passage?

A. Multi-media websites and good old paper are kinds of digital-learning technologies.

B. Digital learning technologies will replace the paper textbooks sooner or later.

C. E-readers and multi-media websites are learning methods that are proved effective.

D. A tried-and-true technology is paper textbooks, long used in educational system.

2.What is the drawback of paper textbooks according to the passage?

A. Their weight.    B. Their price.

C. Their content.    D. Their appearance.

3.What worries Maryanne Wolf is that ________.

A. paper learning can provide more potential benefits

B. students may not focus on learning by digital reading

C. digital reading can't provide potential benefits for users

D. the results of digital reading effects are understandable

4.What is the author's attitude towards digital-learning?

A. Disapproving.    B. Supportive.

C. Positive.    D. Objective.