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From the story of Anne Frank,I think that a best friend is someone to who we can tell everything,even our most person feelings and thoughts.Anne treated her diary as her the best friend.The German Nazis were in search of Anne and her family and they have to hide away from the chase.They didn’t dare go out even in the evenings.They had to stay indoors day or night.Anne missed the beauty of nature too much that she stayed up until eleven thirty one evening just to see the moonlight.She said,“This is the first time I had seen the moonlight since I was here.”Unfortunately,the family was discovered at last and take away.
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Wang Kun and Wang Wei are brother and sister. They have dreamed of 1.(take) a great bike trip.It 2.(be) Wang Wei who first had the idea to cycle along the Mekong River. They rode bicycles to travel along the Mekong River,3.source is in Qinghai Province.When it4.(enter) Southeast Asia,it travels 5.(slow) through hills and low valleys and the plains6.rice grows.Despite the difficulties,Wang Kun and Wang Wei 7.(determine) to begin their journey at 8.altitude of more than 5,000 meters in Qinghai Province.During their journey, they enjoyed the continuous change of the weather.Finally, they reached Dali in Yunnan Province,9.which Dao Wei and Yu Hang joined them.The four of them went on with 10.(they) great bike trip.
I stood in the yard with my son. He had a ________of bubbles（泡沫） and would dip and dip and blow and blow,but no bubbles.He _________me the bottle and loop and asked me, “Daddy, can you _________bubbles?”
I hadn’t blown bubbles in years. Though as a ________,I have successfully performed various experiments,I was having no more _________than my son. I would dip and puff（喷出）,but failed.
After several _________attempts,I changed ways._________puffing on the loop of soapy water,I gently breathed on it.My son shouted with _________as a big beautiful bubble _________and floated away.He grabbed the loop, dipped and blew,but nothing happened as it was ________. I explained to him, “Son, you can’t blow _________.You must so gently breathe on the loop.” He stopped his strong _________to create big bubbles by blowing with a lot of strength and _________my advice. Big bubbles came into being.
There are some things that you can get with cruel________,but there are other things that only _________with the gentleness of a soft breath.Too often, we try to force ________and affection from whom we like. It won’t happen. The greater force we put on it, the _________we will gain. Just like the bubbles, it bursts before it can ever _________because we put too much force on it. It can’t be forced and is more often________in the soft things of life.Blow beautiful bubbles;breathe ________.
1.A. number B. bottle C. series D. pack
2.A. handed B. rewarded C. sent D. provided
3.A. build B. play C. make D. cause
4.A. actor B. designer C. officer D. chemist
5.A. failure B. success C. suffering D. loss
6.A. simple B. fruitless C. effective D. brave
7.A. Instead of B. In case of C. Because of D. In spite of
8.A. worry B. happiness C. sadness D. comfort
9.A. broke B. appeared C. arrived D. escaped
10.A. designed B. strange C. expected D. little
11.A. hard B. early C. directly D. attitude
12.A. power B. desire C. request D. ahead
13.A. ignored B. admitted C. continued D. followed
14.A. force B. kick C. pain D. beating
15.A. change B. come C. deserve D. matter
16.A. love B. interest C. enthusiasm D. thought
17.A. worse B. more C. better D. less
18.A. break B. form C. rise D. disappear
19.A. found B. lost C. avoided D. overcome
20.A. fully B. deep C. easy D. fiercely
According to a sales report from askci.com on 2018’s Double Eleven,the national shopping day,women’s down garments(羽绒服)were among the top 10 hit products. 1.It seems the strong warmth provided by down garments has been nationally approved.Especially during a fiercely cold winter,when you tremble in the wind,who cares about being stylish?2.As living standards rise, more expensive garments filled with goose down instead of duck down, have appeared in the market. Goose or duck?
3.First,the down from mature geese is larger and thicker,which makes garments filled with goose down much warmer.Second,goose down is more flexible than that of ducks.The last difference is key for people sensitive to smells:Compared to duck down,goose down has no strange smell.4.These are the advantages that account for the higher prices of garments made with goose down.However,duck down is still a good choice if you live in place where winter is windy,yet not that cold.
5.
Although most down garments can make people look big and fat,you could choose longer ones for a slimming look.For colors,metallic colors are more stylish and pair more easily with other street-style outfits.
A. How to be stylish?
B. All you need is warmth.
C. Where to choose your down garment?
D. Not everyone prefers wearing down garments.
E. They have been popular for many years in China.
F. What’s the difference between the down from these two creatures?
G. Ducks do not eat clean diet, which could give their feathers a strong smell.
In my memory,winters always used to be really unpleasant. You had to dress like a bear just to keep warm when you went outside.You were often cold,wet and no more than one step away from the thin ice on the lake.If you worked over time and went home in the dark,you would arrive home to an ice-cold house. And that would mean turning on the heating and waiting.
Fortunately, things don't have to be so challenging any more.Technology,engineering and design have developed,giving us new solutions to old problems.It means dealing with winter needn’t be like skating on thin ice.
With a smart thermostat(恒温器), our homes can be toasty when we need them to be. Many models go with smartphone APPs that allow you to regulate temperature from a distance, so we can warm up the house before we arrive home. According to techradar.com, a large technology news and reviews website, Tado's model has a voice control function,while the Nest “learns” your habits and heats the house for you.
Clothes have been given an upgrade,too.Electronic heated jackets and trousers heat up when you turn them on.What better way to keep warm in the dead of winter? At the touch of a button,or through an APP on our phones,the clothes produce heat from materials placed inside.Many models offer three levels of heating which stay warm for over 12 hours.
Finally, there is the headgear(头部装备) - Hats that have speakers which are included in the cloth using Bluetooth technology,so we can listen to our favourite music or,in some cases,have a phone call using the in-built microphone.All while keeping the head warm and avoiding coldness.
For many, the thought of winter used to be enough to make their blood run cold.But using technology,life needn’t freeze up.There’s no reason why winter can’t be really,really cool.
1.What does paragraph 1 mainly tell us about?
A. Winters are very cold in the author’s hometown.
B. The author’s feeling about winter.
C. There was heating in people’s houses in the past.
D. The author’s impression of the winter in the past.
2.What does the underlined word “toasty” mean in paragraph 3?
A. Relaxing. B. Comfortable.
C. Cool. D. Hot.
3.What can we know according to the text?
A. Some models can set the temperature of the house before people come home.
B. The Nest can only warm the house when you press the button.
C. Jackets and trousers can be heated up by our phones.
D. The heating of the clothes do not last longer than 12 hours.
4.Which can be the best title of this passage?
A. Winter Is Coming
B. Development in Heating Technology
C. A Modern Winter
D. Technology Makes Better Life
Photography（摄影） is a very popular art form. Anyone with a camera – or a mobile phone – can practice it.A picture communicates in a way that words often can’t. As the photographer Destin Sparks put it, “Photography is the story I fail to put into words.” And there’s no better chance to practice the art of photography than during our vacation time.
Holiday photos have been a part of the culture of travelers for a long time.For decades, vacationers have made sure they’ve packed a camera along with bathing suits, Hawaiian shirts and sunglasses. A camera is an important holiday item.But over the last 10 years,photography has become much more popular.It’s easy to capture ( 捕捉 ) still and moving pictures of places of interest, and it’s also easy to show off these pictures on social media.Armed with their smart phones,tourists, this year more than ever, are capturing the beauty of our planet.
Of course,travel companies have caught on to this. Trekksoft has an example of photo-tourism from the United States, a land with a vast choice of beautiful locations. Antelope Slot Canyon Tours in Arizona specializes in tours of the state’s famous canyons（峡谷）, which gives photographers the chance to capture them on camera.
Most of the tourists are able to make beautiful images with just their mobile phones. Still, help is on hand from the tour guide for those who aren’t great at using their cameras.These tour guides have taken a course in photography in case the skills they’ve learned would help their customers.
1.According to the writer, which of the following can be the best time to practice photography?
A. The time when people are traveling around.
B. The time when people have no words to say.
C. The time when you have a tour guide to help you.
D. The time when you have a mobile phone with you.
2.Why has photography become much more popular in the past ten years?
A. More and more people have cameras.
B. The planet is becoming more beautiful.
C. Visiting places of interest becomes easy.
D. Posting pictures on social media becomes easy.
3.What does the underlined word “this” in Paragraph 3 refer to?
A. The beauty of our planet.
B. The tourism in the United States.
C. The popularity of holiday photography.
D. The technology of photography.
4.What is special about Antelope Slot Canyon Tours?
A. Its wide choices.
B. Its photo-tourism.
C. Its best tour guide.
D. Its great photography course.
