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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。 Last Sat...

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。

Last Saturday, David was taking a walk in the park near his home when he noticed a woman with a boy of about eight years old. When David passed them, he heard the woman yell, “How stupid you are! You’re good at nothing.”David stopped and looked at the little boy. The boy said nothing. He just stood there, looking upset.

David was reminded of his English teacher Mrs Brown in middle school. After he entered middle school, David lacked self-confidence because he was often made fun of by others. He was often told that he was good at nothing, which David believed. But one day it all changed.

One day, in an English writing class, Mrs Brown asked them to read a novel. They were asked to write a new chapter of the novel after they finished reading the book. A few days later, David handed in his story. He didn’t give it much thought. But the next day to his surprise, the comment “well done” from Mrs Brown came into view the moment he turned to the page where the story was written.

When David read that, he almost burst into tears. He never expected to be praised one day. He suddenly gained some self-confidence.

That day after he returned home, he wrote a short story and gave it to Mrs Brown the next morning. And again he was praised.

David became very interested in writing. He often wrote short stories and asked Mrs Brown to read them and correct them for him. Mrs Brown always correct them for him. Mrs Brown always corrected the mistakes he had made and gave him good advice to improve them. One year later, David joined the school newspaper and became an editor of it. He was no longer that boy who lacked self-confidence. He gained his confidence and was hopeful about his future.

He succeeded in entering college and kept writing. Several years after graduating from college, he had his first book published. With some more books coming out, he became famous as a writer in his country. And he owed his success to Mrs Brown’s encouragement. Without her encouragement, his life might be very different now.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Inspired by his own life story, David decided to do something for that boy.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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The mother was ashamed when she heard that.

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Paragraph 1: Inspired by his own life story, David decided to do something for that boy. He went to the woman , who immediately recognized him because she had read his books and seen his pictures. David started to chat with her. He told her that what she said to her boy was not appropriate. Then he told her about the encouragement he once got from Mrs Brown. In the end, he said, “I couldn’t have become a writer if I had believed I was good at nothing.” Paragraph 2: The mother was ashamed when she heard that. She realized that she shouldn’t have called her son stupid, which would make his lose confidence in himself. So she said, “Thank you for your advice. I’ll never say such things to him again. Instead , I’ll find out what he’s good at and encourage him.” The woman then left with the boy. Looking at the back of the boy, David felt relieved, hoping his action could make some difference to the boy. 【解析】 这篇书面表达是读后续写。 要认真审题,把握文章中心,明确写作要点和所使用时态。本文要求根据已知线索(。上周六,大卫在他家附近的公园散步时,发现一个女人和一个8岁左右的男孩在一起。大卫经过他们的时候,听见那女人喊道:“你真蠢!“你什么都不擅长。”大卫停下来看了看小男孩。男孩什么也没说。他只是站在那里,看起来很沮丧。这时大卫想起了他中学的英语老师布朗夫人。上中学后,大卫缺乏自信,因为他经常被别人取笑。但是一次的写作课彻底地改变了大卫。在布朗老师的不断的鼓励下,大卫他不再是那个缺乏自信的男孩了。他获得了信心,对自己的未来充满了希望。之后他成功地进入大学并继续写作。大学毕业几年后,成为了国内著名的作家。他之所以成功,是因为布朗夫人的鼓励。如果没有她的鼓励,他的生活现在可能会大不一样。)找出可续写线索。1.作者决定帮助谁? 2,如何以自己的故事说服小男孩的妈妈?3,小男孩妈妈听了作者的故事之后的感受?4,小男孩的妈妈意识到了什么?打算要做什么?5,作者感到了什么?续写部分用一般过去时兼用一般将来时。注意:(1)故事的起因、发展、高潮和结局是记叙文写作的基本步骤。原文已经将起因和发展交代清楚了,考生要通读全文,把握文本的脉络和串起文本的关键词,根据所给的两段段首句续写故事的高潮部分和最后的结局部分;(2)考生在谋篇布局时,必须要注意文中事件发生的逻辑性,故事的发展必须符合情节内在的逻辑。考生在布局第一段的内容时,要兼顾两段的段首句,因为第一段的段首句决定了第二段的走向;同时也应注意划线词语与主题的关联,(3)写作手法上应以叙述为主,描写上倾向于心理活动、动作描写,情节的发展要合乎逻辑地推进。第一段续写部分,考生应该写作者是怎么帮助小男孩的;而第二段续写部分应着重叙述小男孩母亲意识到了自己的错误,决定为孩子做些什么事情并表达对作者的感谢。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
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