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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In order enrich students’ school life, many schools offer all kind of after-school activities. I think that participated in after-school activities is beneficial to students. Therefore, every the student should take part in at most one after-school activity. That you choose is up to you. Any after-school activity that actual attracts you is OK, for example, a drama. After-school activities not only helps you relieve stress, and broaden your minds. Above all, they are good with character building through time management, teamwork and strong competition.

 

1.order后添加to 2.kind→kinds 3.participated→participating 4.去掉the 5.most→least 6.That→What 7.actual→actually 8.helps→help 9.and→but 10.with→for 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。讨论学校提供各种各样的课外活动以丰富学生的学校生活。 1.考查介词。句意:为了丰富学生的学校生活,许多学校提供各种各样的课外活动。固定短语in order to“为了”后跟介词to,故添加to。 2.考查名词的数。kind为可数名词,由all修饰为复数概念,故用复数形式kinds。 3.考查非谓语动词。本句已经存在谓语动词且句中没有连词,故用非谓语且与逻辑主语构成主谓关系,故用现在分词participating。 4.考查冠词。句意:因此,每个学生应该参加最多一个课外活动。Every student“每一个学生”,中间不需要冠词,故去掉the。 5.考查形容词。句意:因此,每个学生都应该至少参加一次课外活动。固定短语at least“至少”,故most改为least。 6.考查主语从句连接词。句意:你的选择取决于你自己。本句为主语从句,且从句中缺少宾语,指代事情,故用关系代词what。 7.考查副词。句意:任何真正吸引你的课外活动都可以。attract为动词,需要副词修饰,故改为actually。 8.考查主谓一致。主语activities为复数,且描述客观事实,故用一般现在时动词原形help。 9.考查连词。句意:课外活动不仅可以帮助你减轻压力,而且可以开阔你的视野。固定结构not only….but (also)“不仅……而且……”故and改为but。 10.考查介词。最重要的是,通过时间管理,团队合作和激烈的竞争,他们有益于塑造性格。固定短语be good for“有益于”,故with改为for。
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We exchange warm hugs, smiles and a million “thank you”. This hobby that has so at- traded me has opened my heart and brought me out of my cocoon (). Now, I don’t mind 4. (start) a conversation with a stranger, wishing him or her well and gifting a breastpin because I know that this little piece of art will do 5. (it) magic of breaking all barriers. We unite and share many 6. (story). And next time our paths cross, we greet 7. smile, which is enough 8. (brighten) the day.

This morning, I received 9. heart-warming post on Instagram (照片墙) from a friend who I 10. (give) a blue and white spotted breastpin before. She shared it along with the shells collected from the beach. She loved sea shells and the colors blue and white. So, here’s why I make breastpins.

 

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“The total 36 hours of Hurricane Maria in Puerto Rico was ____ the scariest event we’ve ever gone through. Our house sits on the north-west coast of Rincon. In the ____, over 100 mph winds changed direction causing a great amount of water flooding our ____. The only place lett dry and safe was our kitchen floor, where we were ____ to ride out the rest of the storm. It has been 50 days since the ____, and we are still without power and water. During our regular afternoon showers, we are glad to ____ rainwater but are quickly reminded of the people living without roofs, and how ____ it must be for them. Our emotions are consistently in a state of ____.

Recently, our good friends told us about a video interview they were doing with Watts of Love, a solar light company. The company generously gave us a headlamp for our personal ____ and a box with 50 headlamps to distribute throughout our town. Rincon was completely blacked out so making a simple walk through a parking lot to our car is ____. We used to rush to get things done before ____, but now I continue daily chores in the dark. What ____ our lives most was being able to share this gift with others. We ____ the lamps house by house to the people in the mountains who needed them most, as even batteries and candles are ____ there. Even though ____ have come slowly, people have been out of work and can’t afford to ____ their electric bill. I, ll always be ____ to Watts of Love for allowing us to pay it forward and be witnesses to the smiles that ____ can bring.”

1.A. moving    B. terrifying    C. universal    D. necessary

2.A. methods    B. words    C. opinions    D. editions

3.A. undoubtedly    B. uncertainly    C. unsteadily    D. unluckily

4.A. system    B. history    C. recovery    D. darkness

5.A. school    B. garden    C. house    D. studio

6.A. requested    B. taught    C. forced    D. expected

7.A. performance    B. progress    C. rescue    D. storm

8.A. research    B. observe    C. apply    D. collect

9.A. awful    B. punctual    C. amazing    D. puzzling

10.A. relief    B. sympathy    C. pleasure    D. calmness

11.A. interest    B. purpose    C. attempt    D. problem

12.A. convenient    B. ridiculous    C. dangerous    D. awkward

13.A. sunset    B. schedule    C. deadline    D. daybreak

14.A. ruined    B. changed    C. proved    D. witnessed

15.A. took off    B. brought out    C. got through    D. gave away

16.A. rare    B. expensive    C. adequate    D. equal

17.A. reports    B. survivors    C. supplies    D. complaints

18.A. imagine    B. receive    C. choose    D. undertake

19.A. devoted    B. familiar    C. grateful    D. accustomed

20.A. nature    B. light    C. future    D. harvest

 

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    How much do you know about colors? The colors that you select create a distinct atmosphere in the room. 1.

Pick the color for your room and you can create whatever you feel like. The color will also help you to enlarge the space or making it more inviting, which will also make differently all about it.

However, the trick is to select the right version of that particular color. There are different hues (色调) for blues, for instance. 2. Here we have presented a guide that will let you gain a deep insight about the colors.

Blue

3. For kitchen, bathrooms and bedrooms it is an ideal choice. Of course it is also associated with sadness that means it may not strike note for each and everyone. It is a popular choice among people. Blue comes from the cold side of the color wheel, so it can make the room feel cold, unless and until it is south filling space. If you are attracted to blue color, think of going for purple, or mix red and purple.

Dark blue is best for a living room. Probably it is best reserved for high ceiling space. 4.

Green

Like blue, green is also a calm shade. 5. It is the shade that reflects nature and renewal. Green produces a positive energy without the feeling of overstimulation.

A. Colors can light up the mood of the room.

B. You can use it for a living room or a bedroom.

C. They won’t create similar effect and atmosphere generally.

D. Traditionally, blue is just related to calmness and comfort.

E. It is better that you select colors that are very warm like blue.

F. Dark blue will really make you feel the wall appear near to you.

G.But before diving into any decision, here’s what you need to know.

 

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    The popular wisdom for years has been that drinking in moderation (适度)—that’s one “standard” drink a day for women and two for men-is linked to a lower risk of cardiovascular (心血管的) disease. But recent studies are casting some doubt on that long-held learning. Science now says it depends on your age and drinking habits.

A 2017 study of nearly 2 million British with no cardiovascular risk found that there was still a modest benefit in moderate drinking, especially for women over 55 who drank five drinks a week. Why that age? Alcohol can influence the substance in the blood in positive ways, experts say, and that’s about the age when heart problems begin to occur.

Also, a 2018 study found that drinking more than 100 grams of alcohol per week—equal to roughly seven standard drinks in the United States or five to six glasses of wine in the UK—increases your risk of death from all causes and in turn lowers your life expectancy. Links were found with different forms of cardiovascular disease, with people who drank more than 100 grams per week having a higher risk of stroke, heart failure.

Another 2018 study found that consistently drinking a moderate amount of alcohol, within recommended guidelines, had a protective effect on the heart over time. Unstable drinking habits were associated with a higher risk of heart disease, which the authors reflected might indicate broader lifestyle changes, such as poor health or stress. Former drinkers were also at greater risk.

Overall, however, the latest thinking is that any heart benefit may be outweighed by other health risks, such as high blood pressure, certain cancers and liver damage.

Women who drink are at a higher risk for breast cancer; alcohol contributes about 6% of the overall risk, possibly because it raises certain dangerous hormones in the blood. Drinking can also increase the chance you might develop liver, mouth and oral cancers. One potential reason: Alcohol weakens our immune systems, making us more likely to inflame (发炎)—a driving force behind cancer.

1.Why does moderate drinking benefit women over 55?

A. It helps them live longer than men.

B. It reduces the chance of some heart problems.

C. It destroys the harmful chemicals in their blood.

D. It helps them recover from cardiovascular disease.

2.What can we learn from paragraph 3?

A. Drinking more than 10 grams of alcohol per week is surely harmful.

B. Solid links were found between the disease and the amount of alcohol.

C. The lifespan varies according to amount of consumed alcohol.

D. Seven standard drinks are the recommended amount of drinking in the UK.

3.Who will be at a lower risk according to the 2018 study?

A. Consistent drinkers with lifestyle changes.

B. Unstable drinkers with lifestyle changes.

C. Consistent drinkers within recommended amount of alcohol.

D. Unstable drinkers within recommended amount of alcohol.

4.Which can be the best title for the text?

A. Moderate drinking habits benefit the heart.

B. Moderate drinking weakens our immune systems.

C. Moderate drinking can prevent cancer.

D. Moderate drinking does more harm than good to health.

 

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    Everything has its root. “Holiday”, is no exception. The origin of “holiday” is easy to see, coming from “holy day”, a day of particular religious significance, often celebrating the life of a saint (圣徒), during which no work was to be done. As far back as the 11th century, “holidays”, especially the major feast days, were times of “celebration and amusement”, as the Oxford English Dictionary puts it.

The number of holidays steadily increased during the Middle Ages, until a medieval Englishman would have had the luxury of 40 to 50 days a year off work, depending on where he lived, in addition to a free day on Sundays.

During the Reformation, Henry VIII abolished most of the holidays partly because of the Protestant (新教徒的) suspicion of saints, but more practically, because, according to historian Eamon Duffy, “A large number of holidays were making the people poor by limiting agriculture.” The people took a different view and organized a protest march—the Pilgrimage of Grace—partly to protect their days off.

Though at first the religious and festive senses of holiday were combined, the word gradually came to be used for any kind of relaxing break from work. As the word was drawing away from a religious society, the number of authorized holidays was reduced, until by 1834 most workers had only four official days off a year, in addition to Sundays. Many factory workers amplified this time by staying home on “Saint Monday” to recover from what they had gotten up to the day before.

By the late 19th century, employers were compromising and offering half-day Saturdays, the beginning of the “weekend”, a term first used in 1879. In 1908, an innovative mill in New England gave its employees all of Saturday off, and the practice of their getting the whole Saturday off spread widely during the Great Depression as a way to keep employment up. It took 400 years, but finally workers could enjoy as many holidays as they had in the 15th century.

1.What was the word “holiday” originally intended for?

A. Economy.    B. Entertainment.

C. Religion.    D. Politics.

2.What’s the main reason for Henry VIII’s ending most holidays according to Eamon Duffy?

A. His people required a thorough reformation.

B. He didn’t believe in God and saints.

C. People took no interest in the agriculture due to them.

D. Large numbers of holidays stood in the way of the agriculture.

3.Which can best replace the underlined word “amplified” in paragraph 4?

A. lengthened    B. wasted

C. shortened    D. guaranteed

4.When did most employees get the whole Saturday off?

A. In 1879.    B. During the Great Depression.

C. In 1908.    D. In the 15th century.

 

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