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假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My mother was driving me to school while we saw a cyclist fall over his bike onto the side of the road ahead. Without the second thought we pulled over and got out. He said he was OK but I could see his face bleed, so I returned to our car, taking out a case of first-aid supply like bandages. Cars were going by but we were safely on the side of the road and manage to tend to the injuries. Thankfully his head wasn’t hurt seriously. I was glad we happened have all those supplies in our car. Though we have never used them before, but we must prepare them in case anything like that happens again.

 

第一处: while→when 第二处: over→off或from 第三处: the→a 第四处: bleed→bleeding 第五处: supply →supplies 第六处: safely→safe 第七处: manage→ managed 第八处: happened之后加to 第九处:去掉but或者but→yet 第十处: anything→something 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲了我妈妈开车送我去学校的时候,我们帮助一个从自行车上摔下来的人的经历。 第一处:考查连词。句意:我妈妈开车送我去学校的时候,我们看见一个骑自行车的人从自行车上摔下来,摔在了前面的路边。when引导的时间状语从句,既可表示“一段时间”,又可表示“一点时间”,因此从句的谓语动词既可以是延续性的,也可以是非延续性的;while引导的时间状语从句只能表示“一段时间”所以while从句的谓语动词应是延续性动词(或状态动词),所以while改成when。 第二处:考查固定短语。句意:我妈妈开车送我去学校的时候,我们看见一个骑自行车的人从自行车上摔下来,摔在了前面的路边。fall off跌落,fall from自…跌落,所以over改成off或from。 第三处:考查固定用法。句意:我们毫不犹豫地靠边下车。Without a second thought毫不犹豫,该用法是固定用法,所以the改成a。 第四处:考查固定句型。句意:他说他没事,但是,我看到他的脸正在流血。see sb. doing看到某人正在做某事,所以bleed改成bleeding。 第五处:考查名词单复数。句意:于是我回到车里,拿出一箱急救用品,比如绷带。“急救用品”是复数意义,用名词复数,所以supply 改成supplies。 第六处:考查形容词。作were之后的表语,用形容词,所以safely改成safe。 第七处:考查时态。描述发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时,所以manage改成 managed。 第八处:考查固定句型。句意:我很高兴我们的车里碰巧有这些东西。happen to do sth.碰巧做某事,该句型是固定句型,所以happened之后加to。 第九处:考查常见用法。though与but不能连用,所以去掉but;也可以用副词yet,所以but改成yet。 第十处:考查不定代词。句意:虽然我们以前从未使用过,但我们必须做好准备,以防类似的事情再次发生。文中表示“一些事”,所以anything改成something。  
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2.A. recognized    B. acknowledged    C. admitted    D. insisted

3.A. instructed    B. attempted    C. wandered    D. disturbed

4.A. shape    B. duty    C. breath    D. action

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7.A. case    B. situation    C. direction    D. absence

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13.A. destinations    B. vehicles    C. equipment    D. advice

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16.A. window    B. wheel    C. seat    D. sky

17.A. clouded    B. shone    C. informed    D. previewed

18.A. cautious    B. tricky    C. grateful    D. innocent

19.A. inspiration    B. adventure    C. Performance    D. challenge

20.A. leave    B. remain    C. keep    D. spare

 

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Ideas

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5..

A. There are challenges each day in any workplace

B. When the team faces a particularly hard challenge

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D. When a task is handed to a well-trained and efficient team

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During test dives, SoFi moved alongside the ocean life at depths of 50 feet for up to 40 minutes at a time, taking photos and making videos. The researchers say sometimes the fish would swim alongside the strange-looking robot-fish out of curiosity, while at other times they took no notice of its existence.

While SoFi presently only records video, future versions will include sensors. The researchers also hope to make it more autonomous. “We imagine someday it might help us uncovers more secrets from the amazing underwater world that we know so little about,” says Rus.

1.What can we learn about SoFi?

A. Its tail is flexible.    B. It is the first AUV.

C. It is closely controlled.    D. Its presence scares sea animals.

2.What can be learned from paragraph 3?

A. Sound waves travel faster than radio.

B. Radio does not work well underwater.

C. Previous AUVs use radio to communicate.

D. A boat travels along with SoFi on the water.

3.How does SoFi differ from traditional AUVs?

A. It is controlled above.

B. It can avoid a collision.

C. It can smartly adjust its movement plan.

D. It is set for a collision-free path.

4.Where is the passage possibly taken from?

A. A news report.    B. A science fiction.

C. A social website.    D. A short biography.

 

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Today some American Indian languages are usually spoken by the older members of the tribes who still live on the reservations. In North America there are 150-170 languages that have at least one speaker. One ancient language spoken by the Northern Paiute tribe has over 100 speakers.

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A. To live in American cities    B. To occupy more living space

C. To have Indians speak English    D. To make Indian cultures disappear

2.What does the underlined word “They” refer to in Paragraph 3?

A. The experts    B. The recordings

C. The Indian cultures    D. The last speakers

3.What can we know about the Salish tribe?

A. It has its own language school.    B. It has given up speaking English.

C. Its next generation speaks English.    D. Its language is only learnt by adults.

4.What can be a suitable title for the text?

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