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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week I went to countryside to visit my parents.I enjoyed the warmly family atmosphere.That eveninga group of local actor came to give a performance in the village hall.When the news gets aroundexcitement filled the whole village.Unluckilymy glasses was broken.As a resultI couldnt go and watch it.All my parents went to the hallwhich many villagers had waited anxiously.I did nothing but sit on the sofalistened to English programs on the radio.Two hours laterI heard a knock over the door.The performance was finished and my parents returned back home.

 

countryside前面加上the warmly→warm actor→actors gets→got was→were All→Both which→where listened→listening over→at/on 去掉back 【解析】 本文为记叙文。文章记叙了上周作者去乡下看望父母所经历的一件事情。 第一处:考查冠词。countryside前必须要加定冠词,属于固定用法。故countryside前面加上the。 第二处:考查形容词。此处修饰family atmosphere,做定语,应使用形容词。故warmly改为warm。 第三处:考查名词复数。根据a group of 可知,此处应使用名词复数。故actor改为actors。 第四处:考查时态。根据语境可知,此处描述的是上周的事情,应使用一般过去时。故gets改为got。 第五处:考查主谓一致。主语是my glasses ,谓语动词应使用复数形式。故was改为were。 第六处:考查代词。all指“三者(或三者以上)都”,both“两者都”。此处指“我的父母都去大厅了”。故All改为Both。 第七处:考查定语从句。此处先行词是the hall,关系词在从句中做地点状语,应使用关系副词。故which改为where 第八处:考查现在分词。此处与主语I之间是逻辑主谓关系,应使用现在分词,表主动。故listened改为listening。 第九处:考查介词。knock over“打翻,撞倒”,knock at/on“敲(门、窗等)”。故over改为at/on。 第十处:考查动词用法。return“返回”,home是副词,back明显多余。故去掉back。
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