假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）， 并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There are many people think that wealth is better than health．I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce．He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted． Therefore， in the last twenty years of his life， his health began to get worse and he led a miserably life．Although the best doctors called for him， he could still find no relief．I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world．If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health，you will not be able to do what you want to do．So I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself to trying to make money．Instead，take care of your body and be happy with which you do． Health is more important．
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式．
The cheongsam is a female dress with distinctive Chinese features and enjoys growing 1. （popular） in the international world of high fashion． The name "cheongsam"2. （mean） simply "long dress" entered the English vocabulary from the dialect of China's Guangdong Province． In other parts of the country including Beijing，however，it3. （know） as "qipao"，which has a history behind it．
After the early Manchu（满族的）rulers came to China，the Manchu women wore 4. （normal） a onepiece dress which came to be called"qipao"． 5. the 1911 Revolution ended the rule of the Qing Dynasty，the female dress survived the political change and，with later improvements，has become the traditional dress for Chinese women．
The cheongsam，6. neck is high，collar closed，fits well the Chinese female figure，and its sleeves may be either short，medium or full 7.（long），depending on seasons or tastes．In addition，it is not too complicated 8. （make）．Nor 9. it need too much material．Another beauty of the cheongsam is that it can be worn either 10.casual or formal occasions．In either case，it creates an impression of simple and quiet charm，elegance and neatness．
I had not yet had the opportunity to do work experience． Therefore， I was _____ to start it． I was a little nervous_____， but everybody was so friendly and welcoming that I felt at ease _____．
My first_____was to help with checking if the website links， telephone numbers and addresses were _____on the website． I also learned how to construct the weekly newsletter that is_____each Friday to all registered members．
During my work _____， the staff were always attentive and ready to _____， which really made me understand how to work _____at the job I was doing． I also feel that I have become more _____and confident with learning new skills， being punctual and _____according to the dress code （着装标准）．
I would advise anyone_____to do work experience to be on time and willing to learn new skills needed for an office _____． I can also say that although you will initially feel _____about your first day in work experience， _____ you have become familiar with your job and the staff， you will soon feel a part of the _____．
I have thoroughly_____my experience and I am very grateful to all the staff for giving me the opportunity to work at their office and for making me feel _____．
In conclusion， I would _____everybody to undertake work experience﹣it is an excellent way to _____ skills and experience of a work environment and will make you feel more confident for future careers．
1.A. eager B. confident C. patient D. scared
2.A. after all B. at first C. more or less D. now and then
3.A. frequently B. eventually C. immediately D. occasionally
4.A. plan B. dream C. task D. attempt
5.A. correct B. elegant C. smooth D. steady
6.A. turned over B. given away C. passed on D. sent out
7.A. absence B. interview C. application D. experience
8.A. help B. cheer C. accuse D. scold
9.A. regularly B. effectively C. comfortably D. quickly
10.A. satisfied B. popular C. familiar D. reasonable
11.A. analyzing B. dressing C. designing D. trading
12.A. affording B. wishing C. bothering D. happening
13.A. equipment B. building C. decoration D. environment
14.A. curious B. concerned C. nervous D. crazy
15.A. once B. before C. since D. as
16.A. team B. country C. job D. family
17.A. ignored B. enjoyed C. forgotten D. started
18.A. awful B. energetic C. awkward D. welcome
19.A. order B. force C. demand D. recommend
20.A. learn B. require C. acquire D. master
Americans use many expressions with the word dog． People in the United States love their dogs and treat them well．1.． However， dogs without owners to care for them lead a different kind of life． The expression， to lead a dog's life， describes a person who has an unhappy life．
Some people say we live in a dog﹣eat﹣dog world．2.． They say if a person wants to be successful he has to work like a dog． This means they have to work very， very hard． Such hard work can make people dog﹣tired． And， the situation would be even worse if they became sick as a dog．
3.． This means that every person enjoys a successful period during his or her life． To be successful， people often have to learn new skills． Yet， some people say that you can never teach an old dog new tricks． They believe that older people do not like to learn new things and will not change the way they do things．
4.． People who are unkind or uncaring can be described as meaner than a junkyard dog． Junkyard dogs live in places where people throw away things they do not want． But mean dogs are often used guard this property． They bark or attack people who try to enter the property． However， sometimes a person who appears to be mean and threatening is really not so bad． We say his bark is worse than his bite．
Dog expressions are also used to describe the weather． The dog days of summer are the hottest days of the year． A rain in summer may cool the weather． But we do not want it to rain too hard．5.．
A． We do not want it to rain cats and dogs．
B． Still， people say every dog has its day．
C． Some people are compared to dogs in bad days．
D．There are many other expressions waiting for you to explore．
E． Dogs are their best friends and they are loyal to people．
F． That means many people are competing for the same things， like good jobs．
G． They take their dogs for walks， let them play outside and give them good food and medical care．
Standing on one leg is a simple way to assess someone's risk of suffering a stroke （中风）， suggests a new study．
Researchers have found struggling to balance on one leg for 20 seconds or longer is linked to an increased risk of small blood vessel （血管） damage in the brain and reduced thinking ability in otherwise healthy people with no symptoms．
"Our study found the ability to balance on one leg is an important test for brain health． Individuals showing poor balance on one leg should receive increased attention， as this may indicate an increased risk of brain diseases and cognitive （认知的） decline，" said Dr Tabara， a professor at Kyoto University Graduate School of Medicine in Japan．
The study， published in the journal Stroke， consisted of 841 women and 546 men， with an average age of 67． To measure onelegged standing time， they stood with their eyes open and raised one leg． The maximum time for keeping the leg raised was 60 seconds． The participants performed the examination twice and the better of the two times was used in the study analysis．
The researchers found that the inability to balance on one leg for longer than 20seconds was associated with brain diseases without symptoms． Overall， those with brain diseases were older and had high blood pressure than those who did not have such diseases．
Short onelegged standing time was also linked with lower cognitive score． Although previous studies have examined the connection between physical abilities and the risk of stroke， this is among the first studies to closely examine how long a person can stand on one leg as an indication of their overall brain health．
Dr Tabara and his team also found a strong link between struggling to stand on one leg and increased age．
1.Dr Tabara suggested that one who couldn't stand on one leg for more than 20 seconds ．
A. try to improve his physical abilities
B. receive medical treatment for brain diseases
C. be given special attention to prevent accidents
D. be examined for other symptoms of brain diseases
2.Which of the following factors might decrease onelegged standing time according to the text？
a． Heart diseases．
b． Cognitive decline．
c． High blood pressure．
d． The aging process．
e． Brain diseases．
A. a， b， d
B. a， c， d
C. b， c， e
D. b， d， e
3.What can we learn about the study from the fourth paragraph？
A. It was led by Dr Tabara．
B. It included more than 1，300 people．
C. It examined people of different age groups．
D. It required the participants to close their eyes first．
4.Which of the following might be the best title for the text？
A. Overall Brain Health Deserves Close Attention
B. Brain Diseases Without Symptoms Require Attention
C. Can't Stand on One Leg？ You May Be at Risk of Stroke
D. Can't Keep Your Balance？ You May Have Brain Damage
Working up a credit score for Walter Cavanagh has got to be a mathematical nightmare ﹣ the man has nearly 1，500 valid credit cards to his name and holds the Guinness Record for the most credit cards． Mr． Plastic Fantastic ﹣ a title given to him by Guinness World Records ﹣ is also the proud owner of the world's longest wallet， which can hold about 800 cards． But he uses it only to carry a few cards， while the rest are safely kept in bank safedeposit boxes．
Cavanagh started collecting credit cards in the late 1960s． "One of my best friends and I made a silly bet： the guy who could collect the most credit cards by the end of the year would win dinner，" he said． " I got 143 cards by the end of the year， and my friend gathered 138．" After winning that bet， Cavanagh decided to simply keep going with his unusual collection． He got credit cards from gas stations， airlines， bars， and even ice cream stores．
If there's one card missing from Cavanagh's collection， it's that from the Newberry Company． They repulsed his application for a card in the early 1970s， even though he'd collected over 100 by then． They said he had too much credit． Therefore， so far he hasn't had a Newberry card in his collection．
Cavanagh hasn't stopped applying for new cards ﹣ he's held the Guinness Record since 1971 and has no intention of letting go of it． He copies whole pages from a U．S． directory of businesses and keeps sending applications． If he receives a rejection， he writes back to the company explaining his goal and ambition． But he doesn't count useless cards in his total collection．
Thanks to all the cards to his name， Cavanagh has access to about ＄1.7 million at any moment． Despite this privilege， he has managed to maintain an excellent credit score．
The 72﹣year﹣old retired financial planner and credit expert has only one piece of advice to share： "Never use a card to buy anything you can't pay off in a couple of months． If you don't have the discipline， you shouldn't have the cards．"
1.Cavanagh began to collect credit cards when he ．
A. owned a very long wallet
B. made a bet with his friend
C. wanted to create a Guinness Record
D. was treated to dinner by his friend．
2.What does the underlined word "repulsed" in Paragraph 3 probably mean？
A. Rejected．
B. Recalled．
C. Repeated．
D. Recognized．
3.What do the underlined words "the discipline" in the last paragraph probably refer to？
A. Having many cards to your own name．
B. Buying things by card and paying off in time．
C. Managing to own more privileges for your card．
D. Using a card to buy things as many times as possible．
4.What do we know about Cavanagh's cards？
A. Some of them are useless．
B. They are safely kept in his long wallet．
C. They have brought him fame and privilege．
D. Fewer new cards are added to his collections．
