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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意:1 每处错误及其修改仅限一词.

2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

Do you think a good student is someone whom gets good grades in exams In fact there is not right to judge only by the grades A good student is honesty and kind to others In another words he never betrays his friends and brave to admit his mistakes and then will quickly apologize A good student is always ready to helping his friends A good student focused on his studies both in and out of class Hard work comes first no matter what brilliant he is Except studying knowledge he also likes taking a part in afterschool activities In conclusion a good student develops in an allround manner

 

1. whom→who或that 2. there→it 3. honesty→honest 4. another→other 5. brave前面加is 6. helping→help 7. focused→focuses 8. what→how 9. Except→Besides 10. 去掉a 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。文章主要讲了不应该仅仅从学生的考试成绩来判定这个学生是否是一个好学生。 第一处:考查定语从句。这里含有一个定语从句,先行词是someone,关系词在定语从句中作主语,指人,用who或that引导,所以whom改为who或that。 第二处:考查不定式。不定式作主语放在后面,用it作形式主语,所以there改为it。 第三处:考查形容词。作表语,所以用形容词,所以honesty改为honest。 第四处:考查固定搭配。in other words换句话说,这是一个固定搭配,所以another改为other。 第五处:考查句子结构。加上is构成主系表结构,所以brave前面加is。 第六处:考查固定句型。be ready to do sth准备好做某事,该句型是固定句型,所以helping改为help。 第七处:考查主谓一致。主语为单数名词,所以用第三人称单数谓语,所以focused改为focuses。 第八处:考查常见用法。how修饰形容词、副词;what修饰名词,所以what改为how。 第九处:考查副词。句意:除了学习知识以外,他还喜欢参加课外活动。表示"除了…之外,还有"用besides;except表示"除了",不包含在内,所以Except改为Besides。 第十处:考查固定短语。take part in参加,该短语是固定短语,所以去掉a。  
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The tea culture of China is 1.amaze and has a long history Tea drinking was widespread in China for about one thousand years before 2.appear in Europe

Tea drinking in China enjoys wide 3.popular). Many people today go to expensively decorated tea houses to talk business However tea drinking is very complex4.pleasant experience of tea drinking is up to many factors(因素). It starts with the surroundings In the past tea drinking took place in an environment 5. people can enjoy antique beauty and natural beauty and relax6.   they). Nowadays in order to create such atmosphere tea houses 7. decorate with traditional paintings and furniture Besides there are often8. performance of traditional Chinese musical instruments such as the guzheng pipa and erhu

Black tea together9. green tea oolong tea and pu'er tea ranks the top four favourites The first three types of tea are processed using similar methods but pu'er tea is made with a 10.total different method

 

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    The life of George Washington was characterized by a high regard for punctuality For him being on time was a way of showing ______ to others and he ______ to be treated with the same level of respect ______

Once Washington asked a man to bring some ______ he was interested in buying at five in the morning______ the man arrived fifteen minutes late Washington's groom(马夫) told the man that the general(将军) had been ______ there at five but had now moved on to other business Washington said that he wouldn't be able to ______ the horses again until the following week The man left with his horses feeling a deep sense of ______

When he told Congress(国会议员) that he'd meet with them at noon he could almost always be found walking into the meeting room just as the clock was ______ twelve

Washington's punctuality extended to his ______ as well He ate dinner each day at ______ four o'clock When he ______ members of Congress to dine with him and they______ late they were often ______ to find the president halfway done with his meal or even leaving the table To his shocked late______ he would say "We are punctual here My cook never asks ______ the guests have arrived but whether the hour has come"

And when Washington's secretary arrived late to a meeting and blamed(责怪) his ______ for his lateness Washington quietly replied "Then you must get another watch or I another______"

Washington one of the most respected presidents in American history is a good example to us all Today punctuality is still an______ part of the character of a nice person So next time when you are struggling with arriving______ think of these stories about the punctual president

1.A. appreciation B. respect C. pity D. concern

2.A. hated B. decided C. expected D. refused

3.A. in return B. in time C. in exchange D. in total

4.A. weapons B. boots C. horses D. guns

5.A. Therefore B. Besides C. Or D. However

6.A. waiting B. looking C. searching D. standing

7.A. raise B. feed C. ride D. examine

8.A. honor B. shame C. joy D. sorrow

9.A. showing B. pointing C. striking D. telling

10.A. study B. bedtimes C. work D. mealtimes

11.A. completely B. exactly C. correctly D. strictly

12.A. invited B. enjoyed C. allowed D. remembered

13.A. called B. left C. arrived D. started

14.A. surprised B. disappointed C. calm D. excited

15.A. officers B. friends C. neighbors D. guests

16.A. when B. whether C. why D. where

17.A. phone B. bell C. alarm D. watch

18.A. secretary B. assistant C. colleague D. boss

19.A. active B. major C. essential D. leading

20.A. just now B. on time C. right away D. at last

 

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How to Love Your Parents

Even if you think that your parents are mean at times loving your parents is a normal and fulfilling part of life You love them for the fact that they created you raised you and are in part a source of who you are Here are some ways to love your parents

1. A gentle "good morning" and "I love you" will warm a coldest heart Remember that they brought you into this world Without your parents we might still wander at an unknown corner in an unknown world

Respect them more and cherish these moments You can use these moments to learn from them preparing yourself for when you're off on your own It's OK to get angry but angry actions don't help you or your parents Act calmly cool off write down your feelings or talk to a friend2.

Obey their requests It will make your attitude better and earn you more respect from them It may seem like you are going through hell when you don't get what you want or you have to clean However you had better remember they are who struggle to keep a roof over your head when it's cold raining snowing or too hot Understand that parents are human beings and make mistakes3.

Keep company with them Do things with your parents together like watching TV or go somewhere with them Listen to their old stories and learn from them4. And then you will find they are your teachers in one way or another

Some people simply may not be able to love their parents5. Seek help if you are being abused(虐待) in any way Parents do not have a right to harm you

A And remember forgiveness is the key

B Parents will in turn express their love to you

C Tell them you love them every morning

D After this share your feelings with your parents

E Please remember parents are as important as friends

F Anyway spend as much time with them as you can

G There can be realistic reasons for this family violence for example

 

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    Over millions of years African penguins have developed a keen sense of where to find food Once they're old enough they set off from the shores on which they were hatched(孵化) for the first time and swim long distances in search of tasty fish like anchovies and sardines But they don't search directly for the fish themselves When African penguins head out to sea they look for areas with low surface temperatures and high chlorophyll(叶绿素). Because those conditions signal the presence of algae(藻类). And lots of algae means lots of plankton(浮游动物), which in turn means lots of their favorite fish Well that's what it used to mean

Climate change plus overfishing have made the penguin feeding grounds a mirage(海市蜃楼). The habitat is indeed planktonrich but now it's fishpoor Researchers call this an "ecological trap" "It's a situation where you have a signal that previously pointed an animal towards goodquality habitat That habitat has been changed usually by human pressures The signal stays but the quality in the environment gets worse"

Richard Sherley a zoologist at the University of Exeter and his team used satellite imaging to track the African penguins from eight sites along southern Africa Historically the birds benefited from tons of fish off the coasts of Angola Namibia and western South Africa but now they're going hungry

"I was really hoping we'd see them going east and finding areas which the fish had moved to but it ends up being quite a sad story for the penguins" said Richard

The researchers calculate that by falling into this ecological trap African penguin populations on South Africa's Western Cape have declined by around 80 percent

Some research groups are exploring the idea of moving them to a place where they can't get trapped like the Eastern Cape But Sherley thinks that a solution in the long run means making and carrying out rules to create more sustainable(可持续的) fishing industry which needs public support

1.How do penguins find their food

A. They discover fish with their keen sense

B. They swim long distances directly for fish

C. They make signals to each other when finding fish

D. They look for warmer and greener areas

2.What is an ecological trap for the African penguins

A. A trap set to catch penguins

B. A good fish habitat with few fish

C. A habitat rich in plankton

D. A mirage on the sea

3.What can be done to help the penguins in the long run

A. Move the penguins to other places

B. Create nature reserves for penguins

C. Keep a balanced fishing industry

D. Increase the population of penguins

4.What is the main idea of the passage

A. African penguins are losing their habitats

B. African penguins are falling into ecological traps

C. A sustainable development is needed

D. African penguin populations have declined

 

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    Most people can't live to 100 Those who do live so long can hardly walk let alone take part in any activities A few people however take part in dangerous activities even though they are more than 100 years old They keep going and going! There is a great grandmother who likes challenging herself although she is 101 years old this year

Mary Hardison believes that people should always be cheerful and more importantly take on all kinds of adventures while they physically still can So instead of celebrating her 101st birthday with a boring party she decided to go paragliding(滑翔跳伞)﹣ an idea she got from her 75yearold son who recently took it up as a hobby

So on her birthday cheered on by her big family she tied herself up together with expert instructor Kevin Hintze and jumped down fearlessly from the sky near her home in Ogden Utah And it was not just a simple jump either According to Kevin Hintze the grandmother encouraged him to turn around as they made their way down

This is not the first time that Mary has done something "wild" and "crazy" For her 90th birthday she rode all the adult rides at Disneyland And she is not done yet For her 102nd birthday she hopes to go down the 3000 feet Alpine Slide at Utah's Park City Mountain Resort!

Not surprisingly this great action has made Mary Hardison very famous and also earned her a place in the Guinness World Records where she broke a 2007 record set by a 100yearold British woman What an amazing lady!

1.What do we know about Mary Hardison

A. She took up paragliding as her hobby at the age of 75

B. She is a 101yearold lady who likes challenging herself

C. She was recorded in the Guinness World Records in 2007

D. She is the oldest woman in the Guinness World Records

2.From whom did Mary get the idea of going paragliding

A. A 100yearold British woman

B. Kevin Hintze

C. Her grandson

D. Her 75yearold son

3.How does the author feel about Mary's action

A. Amazed

B. Supportive

C. Doubtful

D. Worried

4.The text is likely to appear in    

A. a news report

B. an advertisement

C. a novel

D. a science report

 

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