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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I used to be a person who hates exercising. But after I started playing baseball, I attracted by the sport. Therefore, I cut down on most of my spare time, like shopping. Though it wasn’t the hard process for me, I needed to make more of an effort than others. I enjoy the feeling of work with my teammates as well as the time we spend it together. There is a proverb that goes, “The process is much beautiful than the outcome.”

I am a beginner in this sport. Sometimes people will look down on me, and it doesn’t matter. It will only make me keep trying. Only with practising over and over again do I believe I can catch up with other fantastic player one day. The challenge encourages myself to go on.

 

【解析】 本文为记叙文。讲述了作者曾经是一个讨厌运动的人,但当开始打棒球后,就被这项运动吸引了。 第一处,考查时态。此处讲述作者过去的习惯,用一般过去时,故将hates改为hated。 第二处,考查被动语态。这里指作者被这项运动吸引,作谓语,表示被动,故在attracted前was。 第三处,考查冠词。对“我”来说这是一个很难的过程,表泛指,应用不定冠词,故将the改为a。 第四处,考查非谓语动词。由其前的介词of可知,此处应用动名词形式作宾语,故将work改为working。 第五处,考查定语从句。先行词为the time,在定语从句中作spent的宾语,因此it多余,应去掉。 第六处,考查比较级,根据其后的than可知此处为比较级,故在beautiful前加more,或者将much改为more。 第七处,考查并列连词。根据前后句意逻辑可知,此处为并列顺承关系,故将but改为and。 第八处,考查介词。作“通过某种方式”讲时,应用介词b y,故将with改为b y。 第九处,考查名词复数。根据句意逻辑,此处应用复数形式,故将player改为players。 第十处,考查代词。此处作宾语,用代词宾格,故将myself改为me。  
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5.A. wasted B. worked C. spent D. chatted

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    Scientists think that growing garden grass could be the secret to solving our energy needs, and we may soon be able to replace our gasoline with “grassoline”.

The team, including experts from Cardiff University in Wales, has shown that hydrogen can be taken from grass in useful amounts with the help of sunlight and a cheap catalyst(催化剂) —something that speeds up a chemical reaction without being used up.

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D. It works quicker than other metals during photocatalysis.

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“This explains most of the previous failures of drug trials against rhinovirus,” study leader Professor Ann Palmenberg at University of Wisconsin-Madison, US, told Science Daily.

Now, more than 10 years after the discovery of rhinovirus C, scientists have finally built a highly-detailed 3-D model of the virus, showing that the surface of the virus is, as expected, different from that of other cold viruses.

With the model in hand, hopefully a real cure for a common cold is on its way. Soon, we may no longer have to waste our money on medicines that don’t really work.

1.What does the author think of popular remedies for a common cold?

A. They are quite effective.

B. They are slightly helpful.

C. They actually have no effect.

D. They still need to be improved.

2.How do antiviral drugs work?

A. By breaking up cold viruses directly.

B. By changing the surface structures of the cold viruses.

C. By preventing colds from developing into serious diseases.

D. By absorbing different kinds of cold viruses at the same time.

3.What can we infer from the passage?

A. The surface of cold viruses looks quite similar.

B. Scientists have already found a cure for the common cold.

C. Scientists were not aware of the existence of rhinovirus C until recently.

D. Knowing the structure of cold viruses is the key to developing an effective cure.

4.What is the best title for this passage?

A. Drugs against cold viruses B. Helpful home remedies

C. No current cure for common cold D. Research on cold viruses

 

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