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My grandpa is a retired teacher． He used to teaching in the school of his village． At that time he was only teacher in the school which taught all the grades all the subjects． He worked there for nearly forty years． He was so busy that he hardly had time for his families． During those years， grandpa was willing devoted to his work． Since his retirement， great changes have been taken place in his village but a new school building has been completed． Today the students will move into the new building． For the invitation of the school， grandpa will give a talk to the teachers and students as a guest of honor． Grandpa is exciting about it． He will give a gift to the school， which is a name list of all the students he teaches．
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Summer vacation， although a welcome relief for students， is a worrying time for parents because they are afraid their children could become1.（addict） to video games during the July-August holiday． The2.（extraordinary） long time that students spend on video games is3.danger to not only their health but also their quality of life．
In recent years， video games4.（become） one of the most popular forms of5.（entertain） for children worldwide． They have also become a serious form of addiction for many children． In fact， the World Health Organization recently categorized video game addiction6.a mental health disorder．
Addiction to video games can have serious health effects on children． They can lead to visual problems， poor eating and7.（sleep） habits， social isolation （孤立）， and anger and aggressive behavior when asked to stop playing，8.can be dangerous to others． Children may also have difficulty making 9.（friend）．
It is the parents' responsibility10.（limit） their children's access to video games and computers， because it is the children's health and quality of life that are affected．
Despite the hard conditions and hands-on labor，______Australia's generous salaries and distribution of work permits doing agriculture work there is an incredibly_______way for backpackers to earn abroad．
My first_______in Australia was on Todd's Tomato Farm． My_______during my three months working were clearing the tomato field， weeding the peppers， and planting corn seeds．
During my second year visa in Australia I actually_______to go back and do some vegetable______． This time I worked at Brak Pak in the_______fields． That was by far the most physically_______job I have ever done．
Pumpkins were picked using a tractor． There would be one person driving， two people on the trailer sorting pumpkins and five people on the_______picking． Attached to the trailer was a long belt． As the tractor drove forwards we would have to run along_______it， pick the pumpkins and put them on the belt． This was hard - you had to pick all the pumpkins that were_______grown， put them on the belt，______for damaged/rotten ones and_______the tractor．
We used to change roles to give ourselves a_______and sometimes we would be sent off to do "cutting．" The stalks （茎秆） on pumpkins are so_______that we weren't able to break them by hand， so we had cutters． I was told that these cutters could cut straight through a_______so I was very_______at first． I got the hang of it but I was always_______of losing a body part!
I know that most people don't do as many different roles as I did! However， I really enjoyed being able to_______different parts of the farm and in the_______was able to see the whole season．
1.A. according to B. due to C. as to D. in addition to
2.A. hard B. serious C. complex D. popular
3.A. job B. trip C. lesson D. stop
4.A. suggestions B. duties C. regrets D. blessings
5.A. meant B. attempted C. chose D. began
6.A. planting B. shipping C. picking D. cutting
7.A. tomato B. pumpkin C. pepper D. corn
8.A. stressing B. pressing C. demanding D. exciting
9.A. belt B. tractor C. pile D. ground
10.A. behind B. across C. against D. for
11.A. fully B. hardly C. naturally D. possibly
12.A. watch B. care C. check D. look
13.A. keep up with B. get rid of C. hold on to D. set out for
14.A. chance B. try C. credit D. break
15.A. heavy B. thick C. soft D. fragile
16.A. plant B. finger C. vegetable D. trunk
17.A. curious B. confident C. upset D. nervous
18.A. terrified B. sure C. proud D. suspected
19.A. observe B. study C. assess D. experience
20.A. past B. beginning C. process D. distance
The Chapramari Forest lies in the eastern area of India．1.But a large group of elephants found still-green grasses along the railway line that crosses through the forest． As the elephants got near and on the tracks at dusk， a passenger train traveling at 50mph knocked into the herd． Seven elephants were killed， and 10injured．
2.The deaths occur at hotspots in a few Indian states where trains intersect （交叉） with elephant habitats． It's puzzling why this highly intelligent animal would wait on the tracks3.．
After a collision this past April in Odisha state that killed four elephants， Indian Railways lowered speed limits to as low as 18mph in several areas in the country's east4.Beginning late last year， railways officials in the east have fixed a kind of equipment s that loudly broadcast the buzz of honeybees， a sound they hope keeps elephants away for fear of the insects． In the northern state of Uttarakhand， the forest department is using drones （遥控飞机） to keep track of animal movement．5.
More permanent solutions include constructing overpasses or underpasses as safe crossing points for the elephants， elevating the railway track， or getting the track away from sensitive areas．
A． because they are attracted by the green grass．
B． Still， three elephants were killed in train accidents in that state since February．
C． Much of the plants here dries up in winter．
D． And the measures they take are working wonders．
E． In India trains have killed 281 elephants from 1987 to July 2018．
F． when it can feel the train's movement．
G． But train conductors often break speed regulations．
Reyes Clark， the owner of Yemaya a pop-up business， is part of a movement in El Salvador， composed of young chefs who are making traditional foods into contemporary cuisine．
"We used to go to McDonald's and Pizza Hut a lot when we were kids． We thought it was cool，" she says． "Anything from the U．S． was considered better than here． But attitudes about American fast food are changing． Salvadorans are becoming more curious about ancestral vegetables and herbs．"
Reyes Clark picks up a piece of paterna， a large seedy green pod （豆荚） that grows all over the country． "I'm going to make hummus （豆沙） out of the seeds，" she says． "The first time I made it for my friends， they thought I was crazy， but then when they tasted it， they were surprised by how good it was．"
Paterna， along with leafy green nutritional powerhouses - mora， chipilin and chaya - grow easily in the wild， but over the years they have been replaced with processed foods． You are not going to find paterna in the supermarket， Reyes Clark says．
"This is because most of El Salvador's food culture was wiped out，" says Luis May， a doctor who focuses on locally sourced food as medicine． He has a garden behind his office where he grows many local plants and teaches his visitors about their nutritional value． He says， "Nearly 500 years ago， the Spanish rulers abolished many local foods．"
Mirandal is a chefs at a newly opened restaurant Boca Boca， hidden in a tree-lined area of San Salvador， where they focus on what they call food nostalgia （乡愁）． "We take old plants from the farming areas and combine them in new ways． The taste is new and exciting for our generation， and brings back a flood of good memories for the older people，" Mirandal says．
Mirandal's 68-year-old grandmother， Elva Duran， is thrilled to see these foods making a comeback． " When I was young， we didn't have fast-food chains that have no health value，" she says． "I think it's incredible that this generation is taking steps to keep our roots alive．"
1.What is the best title of the text？ ______
A. Salvadorans are Struggling to Keep Their Roots Alive．
B. Attitudes Towards Fast Food Chains are Changing in El Salvador．
C. Young Chefs in El Salvador are Breathing New Life into Traditional Cuisine．
D. Local Food Culture in El Salvador is Passed Down From Generation to Generation．
2.What does the underlined word "it" in paragraph three refer to？ ______
A. Paterna． B. Pod．
C. Hummus． D. Seed．
3.What's the food in Boca Boca like according to Mirandal？ ______
A. It focuses on the nutritional value．
B. It is as convenient as fast food．
C. It sticks to the taste of old memories．
D. It combines tradition with new taste．
4.What's the old people's attitude towards the movement？ ______
A. Approving． B. Skeptical．
C. Objective． D. Neutral．
When I began my career as a jazz singer， I was told to start by covering the standards． But I didn't follow the path most new jazz artists take and produced original albums instead． I believe when you have something to say， you can't really keep it down．
Two of those original albums， Liquid Spirit and Take Me To The Alley， earned me a loyal fan base and two Grammys for best jazz album in 2014 and 2017 respectively．
My idol is Nat King Cole， whose music has an important place in our household． I could smell the greens on the stove and the cornbread in the oven when I hear Nat's music． I wanted to have his music come through my body and sing it as an expression of appreciation for him． My mother had always been a fan of his music． This is something I did one day： Imagine her coming home from some protest movement or march and putting on， "Smile though your heart is aching， smile even though it's breaking．" Imagine her putting on， "Pick yourself up， dust yourself off， start all over again．" I see the optimism and the strength in his music．
Writing from a personal experience can bring about my feelings and power of feelings that can be instantly connected to the instrument and my voice． When I sing Mother's Song， Insanity， even Holding On， I am expressing things I have a connection to．
The song Holding On is a soul song． It connects to Nat King Cole with its optimism， the optimism about the power and the strength of love． I like the fact that I can have 17 to 25-year-olds all over the world jumping and dancing to this song． They're still getting the message．
1.How did the writer start his career as a musician？ ______
A. By copying his idol． B. By singing for awards．
C. By covering the standards． D. By creating original music．
2.What's paragraph three mainly about？ ______
A. The writer's childhood experience．
B. Nat King Cole's contribution to jazz．
C. The writer's mother in the protest movement．
D. Nat King Cole's influence on the writer and his family．
3.What does the writer express in his songs？ ______
A. His personal emotions．
B. His strong love for jazz．
C. His attitude toward social injustice．
D. His memories of the good old days．
4.What conclusion can be drawn from the text？ ______
A. The dream of the writer's mother has come true．
B. The writer's music is influencing young people．
C. Nat King Cole's jazz music highly valued by all．
D. Optimism is the soul of the writer's original songs
