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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I dream to be a popular teacher in the future because I hope I can bring knowledge and happinesses to children.

With time go bymy wonderful middle school life is coming to an end. Just when I entered in Sunshine SchoolI was childish boy who liked playing computer games and fail many subjects in my first midterm exam. I even thought about giving up. It was Ms Zhang which encouraged me to face the difficulties bravely. With the help of my teacherI overcame difficulties and now always do well in her school subjects. Thanks to Ms ZhangI have gained a lot both in my study or in my life. I hope I can be as excellently as my teacher.

Ms Zhang is happy about the fact which I want to become a teacher in the future. Now, I will make full use of every second and make my dream come true.

 

happinesses → happiness go→ going 去掉in was后面加上a fail→ failed which→ who/that her→ my or→ and excellently→ excellent which→ that 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了在张老师的帮助下,我的学习成绩有了很大的进步,我以后也想当一名像她一样优秀的老师。 第一处:考查名词。句意:我希望我能给孩子们带来知识和快乐。happiness是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故happinesses → happiness。 第二处:考查with的复合结构。句意:随着时间的流逝,我美好的中学生活即将结束。此处为with的复合结构,time与go by之间是逻辑上的主谓关系,用现在分词表示主动,故go→ going。 第三处:考查介词。句意:当我进入阳光学校的时候,我只是一个喜欢玩电脑游戏的小孩子,在第一次期中考试中有很多科目都没及格。enter是及物动词,后面直接接宾语,in是多余的,故去掉in。 第四处:考查冠词。boy是可数名词,此处用不定冠词表泛指,故was后面加上a。 第五处:考查时态。句意参考上题解析,讲述的是过去的事情,应该用一般过去时,故fail→ failed。 第六处:考查强调句型。句意:是张老师鼓励我勇敢地面对困难。此处为强调句型,其基本结构为it is+被强调部分+that+其余部分,当强调人,且人在句中作主语时,也可用who,故which→ who/that。 第七处:考查代词。句意:在张老师的帮助下,我克服了困难并且所有的科目都学得很好。根据句意可知此处表示“我的”,故her→ my。 第八处:考查连词。句意:多亏了张老师,我在学习和生活中都收获了很多。both…and…表示“两者都”,故or→ and。 第九处:考查形容词。句意:我希望我能像我的老师一样优秀。分析句子结构可知,此处用形容词作表语,故excellently→ excellent。 第十处:考查同位语从句。句意:张老师很高兴我将来想当一名老师。此处为同位语从句,解释the fact的内容,从句结构完整,故which→ that。  
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