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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

On my way home from school last Friday，I saw a little dog on the sidewalk looking hopelessly. I was held it firmly up in my arms，took it home and feed some milk to it. However，my mom was unwilling to keep them，saying there was enough pets for us，two cats and a dog. I begged my mom not to let it go. Finally，we agreed that it would be deciding by my dad，whom didn’t return home from work. Just then the girl and her father drove near，searching for their lost pets. When they thanked us taking care of the dog，I felt very happy.

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Just now, I entered the website “Topic for Today” . I feel 1. (interest) in the report on middle school students’ using cell-phones on campus. In fact，more students now come to school 2. cell-phones. My schoolmates have different opinions. Some think 3.is convenient to get in touch with others with the cell-phone, 4.also makes them feel safe especially in time of trouble. Besides，it is nice to enjoy 5.(variety) functions of different cell-phones.

Others think differently. First，the cell-phone is not 6.must in school，as there are some IC phones there, 7.(make) it easy to call others. Second, many students often play e-games and send8. (message) with their cell-phones, even in class, which will surely have bad effects on their study. What’s more, a large amount of time and money will9.(waste).In my opinion, the cell-phone is a useful tool in our daily life. But it doesn’t mean we can use it 10.free) in school.

A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took part in a college course in French. Since I had learned to speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language.

    My first job was at a local restaurant, where I worked for seven years and learned so many lessons, especially from a fellow______.

Helen was in her 30s and had extraordinary self-confidence, something I was really _____. I looked up to Helen ____ she was doing what she loved— _____people better. She always made everyone, customers and co-workers,_______and feel good.

Being a waitress changed my life. One of my________customers was Fred Hasbrook. He always ate an omelet（炒蛋）, and when I saw him_______, I tried to have it on his table as soon as he sat down.

Thanks to the newfound confidence I ______from Helen, I dreamed of having my own_______. But when I called my parents to ask for a loan（贷款）, they said, “We just don’t have the money.”

The next day, Fred saw me and asked, “What’s _______? You’re not smiling today.” I ______my dream with him and said, “Fred, I know I can do more if somebody________just have faith in me.”

Before long he handed me checks_______$50,000—along with a note that I have to this day. It reads, “The only collateral（抵押品）on this loan is my trust in your_______as a person. Good people with a dream should have ______to make that dream come true.”

I took the checks to Merrill Lynch, where the money was provided for me. I______working at the restaurant, making_____ for the restaurant I would open. My plans soured, though, and I lost the _______.

Later I decided to apply for a job at Merill Lynch. Even though I had no experience, I was _____and ended up becoming a pretty good agent. ______. I paid back Fred the $50,000, plus 14-percent annual interest. Five years later, I was able to open my own firm.

1.A. friend B. waitress C. citizen D. customer

2.A. losing B. earning C. sharing D. lacking

3.A. while B. though C. because D. unless

4.A. helping B. respecting C. serving D. praising

5.A. work B. eat C. smile D. speak

6.A. regular B. favorite C. respected D. fresh

7.A. eating B. greeting C. smiling D. coming

8.A. found out B. picked up C. got back D. took away

9.A. restaurant B. work C. house D. money

10.A. ahead B. that C. there D. up

11.A. exchanged B. discussed C. shared D. explained

12.A. should B. would C. might D. must

13.A. counting B. totaling C. adding D. valuing

14.A. ability B. honesty C. responsibility D. identity

15.A. patience B. confidence C. choice D. chance

16.A. loved B. practiced C. continued D. enjoyed

17.A. tables B. plans C. decisions D. suggestions

18.A. faith B. honesty C. money D. friend

19.A. hired B. rejected C. encouraged D. determined

20.A. Fortunately B. Excitedly C. Personally D. Eventually

Wings of Angel

I used to hate myself because I wasn’t “normal”. Everyone else could play on the monkey bars and ride on a bicycle, but not _____ . I had a severe spinal cord disorder(脊髓病) and I knew I would always be much ______than others.

I hated going to school and I hated _______at me. I hated seeing others smiling broadly and standing ______and tall. And most of all, I hated looking in the_______and seeing an ugly and hunchback(驼背).

My friends found me _______because I didn’t let other get close to me. I thought I was going to go on like this for the rest of my life ______Angela appeared.

That afternoon, I was sitting by myself in a corner of the school—a spot where no one would ____ me. That’s when I first heard your voice.

“Hi. Can I sit down?”

I raised my head and there she was, with an irresistible smile on her round face.

“What are you looking at?” you asked.

“Ants.”

“What are they doing?”

“No ______.”

“I bet they’re playing games and make friends. Don’t you think so?”

That was how our ______started and it didn’t stop. We talked about everything under the sun—the ants, the clouds, my little niche(处境)—until it was sunset.

Then suddenly, you saw my _______ She just stared.

My heart ______. What I feared most had happened and I knew for sure she would_______ me now.

She stood up, pointed at my back and said, “I know________your back is hunched.”

I closed my eyes like a criminal waiting to be_______. I begged in my heart for her to_______, but you just kept on going. “I know what you’ve got in there. Do you?”

“No,” I answered ______.

She bent and whispered in my ears.

“Your back is bunched because you’ve got a pair of wings from the angels.”

I was_______. I looked into your eyes and her______ touched my heart. From that day on, I started to learn to_______myself because I have the wings of an angel and a kind – hearted friend.

1.A. them B. it C. me D. her

2.A. sadder B. shorter C. weaker D. slower

3.A. looking B. smiling C. aiming D. glaring

4.A. still B. alone C. straight D. together

5.A. street B. sun C. corner D. mirror

6.A. distant B. stubborn C. hopeless D. unfortunate

7.A. after B. before C. since D. until

8.A. disturb B. seek C. interrupt D. ignore

9.A. wonder B. idea C. sign D. action

10.A. connection B. competition C. conversation D. comprehension

11.A. face B. back C. eyes D. shoulders

12.A. sank B. beat C. broke D. ached

13.A. care for B. rely on C. look down upon D. put up with

14.A. that B. how C. whether D. why

15.A. accused B. arrested C. punished D. sentenced(宣判)

16.A. relax B. leave C. stop D. pause

17.A. shyly B. weakly C. proudly D. firmly

18.A. astonished B. ashamed C. annoyed D. amused

19.A. wisdom B. generosity C. honesty D. kindness

20.A. control B. like C. comfort D. enjoy

    Here come some of the ways advised to keep delighted and a healthy mood by Harvard.

♦ Be grateful and say thanks often

1. the tiny purple flowers on the sidewalk, the beautiful sunset, and the smile in your partner’s eyes. When you have a grateful heart that is appreciative of life’s beauty, wonder and blessings, you’re automatically filled with delight. Always be appreciative of the blessings in your life. And it’s equally important to express your appreciation to those who’ve made your life better in some way.

♦ 2.

If your tendency is to imagine the very worst case whenever you have a trouble, train yourself to change that tendency. Ask yourself what good can come from the situation or what you can learn from it. Optimism surely fuels success and delight.3.. Try to find humor and laughter in life’s everyday struggles.

♦ Understand and forgive

Step into others’ shoes and understand a situation from another’s perspective, and we’re more likely to handle the situation with objectivity and effectiveness. There will be less conflicts and more delight.

Hate and anger are forms of self-punishment. When you forgive, you’re actually practicing kindness to yourself. Most importantly, learn to forgive yourself. Everyone makes mistakes.4..

♦ Keep learning and be a problem solver

Learning keeps us young and olive. When engaging our brains toward productive uses, we’re much more likely to feel delighted and fulfilled.

Delighted people are problem solvers. When facing a challenge in life, they don’t beat themselves up and fail into a depressive state.5.. By becoming a problem solver, you’ll build up your self-confidence and your ability to accomplish whatever you set to.

A. Be optimistic and laugh often

B. Pay attention to the little details in your life

C. Do what you love freely and live happily in the present

D. Laughter is the most powerful treatment to anger or depression

E. It’s through our mistakes that we learn and grow to be bigger and better

F. Only by making mistakes repeatedly will we realize it is normal to make mistakes

G. Instead they face the challenge and channel their energies to finding a creative solution