假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
It is universal accepted that filial duty (孝道) is an important virtue in China. It means respecting and caring parents and the elderly. Take my parents for an example, after my grandma passed away last year, my parents spent much more time chat with my grandpa, going out for a walk with him and cooking him delicious food. At first，my grandpa seemed to be happy. And as time went by, he became uneasy, because he was not used to leading so a comfortable life. Therefore，my parents encouraged him to join in some activity in our community. They also encouraged her to go to a drawing class in a school for the old , which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievement. He becomes very happy again.
My parents set a good example to me. In my opinion, the real filial duty is giving the old that they really need.
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式(每空至多3词)。
I will never forge the day when I went to a coming- of - age ceremony. Last month , an unforgettable adult ceremony 1. (hold) for all the senior 3 students in our school. It began at half past two in the afternoon . Decorated by colorful flowers and balloons, the stadium looked 2. (amaze) beautiful. All of us students were dressed 3.school uniforms with red ribbons on our wrists, showing the energy of youth . We walked into the stadium in high spirits, 4. (accompany) by our parents. Our principal delivered 5. inspiring speech at first, and we received 6. (congratulate) from our teachers. During the ceremony , we expressed our heart-felt gratitude to our parents by 7.(bow) to them . I was moved to tears when I got a photo album from my parents , 8. reminded me of my happy childhood. In the end , we raised 9. right hands and made a serious promise to become reliable and honest citizens.
As far as I ’m concerned , the ceremony indicates that we should take on more responsibilities to be 10. (independence ) and get away from the shelter of our family.
We ’d better discuss everything _____ before we work out the plan.
A. in delight B. in debt
C. in demand D. in detail
What we learn today in school will ______ whether we can meet our challenges in the future.
A. defend B. consume
C. determine D. consent
John _____ enormous credit for the way his team performed wonderfully, not only yesterday but throughout his first year in charge.
A. contributes B. deserves
C. convinces D. delivers
It doesn’t matter where the students associations get their money from ;what ____ is what they do with it .
A. Corners B. differs
C. directs D. counts
