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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last winter vacation，I went to Hainan with my parents on air. We first went to the beach. The sky was clearly，the sea was blue and the beach was very beautiful. What was impressed me most was diving. I saw so much colorful tropical fishes. It was so amazing. Then we pay a visit to the Ends of the Earth，which I had dreamed of go to. We appreciated the beautiful scenery all the way and took many photo. During the visit，I tasted various delicious local foods，among that I liked sea food most. The people there were friendly and smiling faces were around us all the way，which made us exciting.

We had a wonderful time there and it was unforgettable journey. I look forward to travelling there again.

阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

Nowadays 5G is very popular among customers，but China is looking past 5G and intending1.(build)a 6G network. China is starting research into 6G，2.(make) it one of the first countries to do so. The actual development of 6G wilt3. (official) begin in 2020，but the commercial use will have to wait.

The 4. (arrive)of 5G has attracted a lot of people. It not only brings fast mobile Internet，but also5. (enable)us to connect with machines. So 6.is 6G supposed to bring，especially for ordinary people? For one thing，7. will make mobile Internet work at a speed of 1 TB per second，which means you can download around 100 films  8. less than one second. For another，6G will connect our devices 9.(efficiently) than 5G，which makes Internet coverage much wider.

Of course，there is a long way to go yet，10.I believe tomorrow’s Internet is in our hands. Our life in the future will be wonderful and fantastic.

    I used to watch her from my kitchen window when she played with boys on the playground. She seemed so small as she _______her way through the crowd of boys. A sea of children，and yet to me，she_______ from them a11.She _______ to shoot jump shots just over their heads and into the net and no one could stop her.

I began to notice her practicing dribbling and shooting alone over and over again， sometimes until dark. One day I asked her why she practiced so much. Without _______ ，she said. “I want to play college basketball. My father told me if I was good enough，I would get a _______，which was the only way for me to go to college. My Daddy said if the dream was big enough，the facts didn’t _______.”

Well，she was really _______ —I watched her practicing playing through those junior  high years and into high schoo1.Every week，she _______her school team to victory.

One day in her senior year，I saw her _______ in the grass，head buried in her hands. I ________ her disappointment and I felt my own throat tighten. I sat down in the cool grass beside her and   ________ asked what was wrong. “OH，nothing , ” came a soft ________ .“I am just too   ________.”The coach told her that at 5.5 feet she would probably never get to play for a top ranked team. She was heartbroken.

But after a while，she ________ her head from her hands and told me that her father said those coaches were wrong. They just did not understand the ________of a dream. He told her that if she really wanted to play for a good college，if she ________ wanted a scholarship，nothing could stop her except one thing—her own  ________ .

The next year，as she and her team went to the Northern California Championship game，she was ________ by a college recruiter(招聘员)。She was indeed ________a scholarship to a Division I，NCAA women’s basketball team and her dream came true. The words ________in my ears again: If the dream is big enough，the facts don’t count.

1.A. felt B. lost C. inched D. muscled

2.A. stood out B. came out C. figured out D. made out

3.A. intended B. managed C. expected D. pretended

4.A. satisfaction B. effort C. hesitation D. doubt

5.A. scholarship B. budget C. allowance D. reward

6.A. care B. count C. spread D. control

7.A. positive B. negative C. outgoing D. determined

8.A. led B. provided C. drove D. pushed

9.A. roiling B. standing C. sitting D. relaxing

10.A. expressed B. touched C. sensed D. grasped

11.A. quietly B. anxiously C. initially D. simply

12.A. step B. reply C. relief D. sound

13.A. over-weighted B. tired C. disappointed D. short

14.A. nodded B. turned C. 1ifted D. shook

15.A. meaning B. weight C. power D. principle

16.A. gladly B. truly C. patiently D. bravely

17.A. habit B. attitude C. height D. interest

18.A. seen B. deserted C. punished D. adopted

19.A. required B. obtained C. chosen D. offered

20.A. inspired B. received C. discovered D. rang

The Things That Keep Us From Succeeding

We have always been told not to fear failure because it is essential to success. So we should embrace failure or at least the possibility of failure.1..If you’re not reaching the kind of success you imagine，one or more of the following things might well be true of you，too.

NO.1: You don’t have a goal. A lot of time we find ourselves struggling through a day-to-day routine that isn’t getting us anywhere because we don’t know where we want to go. Sometimes we had goals when we set ourselves on a particular path，but we’ve changed along the way and those goal s are no longer that important.2.，figuring out what your goals are is important.

NO.2: You don’t have a vision. Setting goals is important but isn’t enough to drive you to the finish line；it’s important，too，to be able to imagine yourself as the achiever of your goals. If goal s are the end result of a journey，your vision is the fuel to get you there.

NO.3: You don’t have a plan. If goals are your destination and a vision is your fuel，your plan is the map to get you there.3..The world is full of people with goals they have never accomplished because they didn’t have a plan—don’t be one of them.

NO.4: You’re too certain or not certain enough. Too much certainty creates inflexibility. If you’re sure that your plan is correct，and refuse to accept the possibility of error，you may well find yourself stuck when an unexpected change comes about. However strong your plan and however sure you are of your goals，make room for periodic reassessment.

4..If you refuse to take a step because you aren’t positive that it will move you towards success，you won’t make any better progress than if you had no goals at a11.Keep your eyes open and be willing to change，but have faith in yourself，too.

NO.5:5..Often we close ourselves off from other people not because we’re afraid that they will influence us but that we will influence them. We are afraid that our brilliant ideas will be taken up by someone else and no longer be solely ours. So we avoid sharing our passions，and spend our energy jealously guarding our “secret” rather than simply moving forward. In the end，we turn our passions into burdens that are difficult to carry instead of a joy.

A. Whatever the case

B. Whatever the cause

C. You worry about being copied

D. You don’t learn from your mistakes

E. At the same time，too little certainty will fail you

F. However，fear isn’t the only thing that keeps us from succeeding

G. Without it，you have no idea what immediate steps to take to achieve your goals

    Have you ever noticed that after about 6 months your perfectly new 1，000 dollar smartphone begins to slow down? What if I told you that it’s a sales strategy that pretty much all phone companies use to force people into buying new phones?

In late 2015，when Lisa Young was in charge of iOS security and beta software testing teams，her boss revealed a dark secret to her，saying that they were using a new strategy that would purposely slow down older phones every time the phone would upgrade to the latest opera ting system. This new method would force customers to buy the latest phone model，increasing sales by 70％.

She was a little disturbed to hear the news，but she just kept her head down and continued to do her job. After a while，the guilt of being involved with such a shady sales model started to weigh heavy on her. “How could a multi—billion dollar corporation continue to take advantage of the public like this?” she thought. In March of 2017，she contacted a reporter from CNN to finally leak the information concerning Apple slowing down phones.

The scandal(丑闻)went viral overnight，and every media outlet in the world，in every language was talking about it，making it one of the biggest controversies in consumer electronics history. A week later，she was secretly let go after her 8 years of service. Although she was taking a huge risk going against one of the most powerful corporations in the world，she felt a sense of relief exposing them. The public deserved to know and the fear became her motivation to find a way to destroy their shady sales model.

Several of her colleagues were fired with her. They quietly united，and after a year of extensive research they designed a unique product called Circa Charge that would reverse the negative effects of “software updates.” Phone companies have recently caught wind of their overnight success with CircaCharge and are trying to do everything they can to make this product illegal and ban it forever. Lisa and her team have ma de unbelievable progress in increasing battery life，battery health，and optimizing phone performance，and they will continue to develop new technology that will beat phone companies at their own game until they change their ways.

1.What can we learn about the new method mentioned in paragraph 2?

A. It is essential in the 1atest operating system.

B. It benefits users in upgrading their old phone.

C. It fool s customers into buying the latest model on purpose.

D. It is a successful sales strategy for advertising new soft wares.

2.What does the underlined phrase “kept her head down” in paragraph 3 refer to?

A. Lowered her head.

B. Nodded to show approval.

C. Pretended to know something.

D. Tried not to show she knows something.

3.How did Lisa Young feel after leaking the secret?

A. Disturbed. B. Relieved. C. Frightened. D. Disappointed.

4.From the passage，we know______________.

A. it's too tough for Lisa and her team to increase battery life

B. CircaCharge helps phone companies with software updates

C. Lisa struggles to force phone companies to change their current ways

D. phone companies find it essential to ban their illegal software for updating