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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The Yangko Dance is a traditional Chinese folk dance creating by the farmers hundred of years ago. Many Chinese people take it as for an important method of relaxing, no matter when there is a spring festival and when there are some special celebrations.

Before the Yangko Dance starts, the music performed to build the dancers a festival atmosphere. As the dance’s content come from special folk legends, men and women performing the dance are dressed in colorfully clothes.

During the dance, the dancers are wagging to present old stories to the audience in the new style. The dance also shows our happy mood and life.

While the dancers are dancing on the ground, there is usually a big crowd around them, appreciated and sharing the feelings of the dancers there.

 

【解析】 这是一篇说明文。短文介绍了中国农民在几百年前创造的一种传统民间舞蹈---秧歌。 第一处:考查过去分词。句意:秧歌是中国农民在几百年前创造的一种传统民间舞蹈。分析句子可知,traditional Chinese folk dance与create在逻辑上是被动关系,所以用过去分词短语作后置定语。故creating改成created。 第二处:考查固定结构。句意:秧歌是中国农民在几百年前创造的一种传统民间舞蹈。hundreds of“数以百计”为固定用法。故hundred改成hundreds。 第三处:考查删除多余词。句意:不管是在春节还是在一些特殊的庆祝活动中,许多中国人把它当作一种重要的放松方式。take ... as“把...当成...”为固定短语。故去掉for。 第四处:考查连词。句意:不管是在春节还是在一些特殊的庆祝活动中,许多中国人把它当作一种重要的放松方式。分析句子可知,前后句子为选择关系,所以连词为or。故and改成or。 第五处:考查一般现在时的被动语态和主谓一致。句意:在秧歌开始之前,演奏音乐是为了给舞者营造节日的气氛。分析句子可知,本句为before引导的时间状语从句,主从句的时态都为一般现在时,主句的主语the music,且与谓语perform为被动,所以谓语为is performed。故music后加is。 第六处:考查主谓一致。句意:由于舞蹈的内容来源于民间的特殊传说,所以表演舞蹈的男女都穿着鲜艳的服装。分析句子可知,本句为as引导的时间状语从句,主从句的时态都为一般现在时,从句的主语为the dance’s content,所以谓语为第三人称单数comes。故come改成comes。 第七处:考查形容词。句意:由于舞蹈的内容来源于民间的特殊传说,表演舞蹈的男女都穿着鲜艳的服装。colorful为形容词名词clothes。故colorfully改成colorful。 第八处:考查冠词。句意:在舞蹈中,舞者们摇摆着身体,以一种新的方式向观众呈现古老的故事。根据句意可知,本句的冠词表示泛指而不是特指,且new首字母的发音为辅音音素,所以冠词为a。故the改成a。 第九处:考查代词。句意:舞蹈也展示了他们的快乐心情和生活。分析句意可知,舞蹈展示了舞者的快乐心情和生活,而不是我们的。故our改成their。 第十处:考查现在分词。句意:当舞者在地面上跳舞时,通常会有一大群人围着他们,欣赏和分享舞者的感受。分析句子可知,a big crowd 与appreciate在逻辑上是主动关系,所以用现在分词appreciating。故appreciated改成appreciating。
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