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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.    每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Ten years ago, I was in greatly depression. I worked hard at piano learning and devoted all my spare time to learn it. But I failed to pass the B level test, that made me quite disappointed. So I turned my mother for help when I got home. Hearing of what I told her, she smiled, “Test results sometimes cannot real show your ability and level. Thus, my progress should not be judged only by one test.” She encouraged me to work hard for the next year’s B Level Test. I take my mother’s advices. Now the B level test is in front of me, and I’ve realized that the process of learning is much important.

 

【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。作者在本文中讲述了自己曾经因考试失利而萎靡不振,后来在妈妈的鼓励下认识到一次考试失利并不能代表一个人的能力,学习的过程更重要,因而在后来的考试中取得成功。 1.考查形容词。句意:两年前,我很沮丧。根据depression是名词,通常形容词修饰名词,所以此处用形容词。故将greatly改为great。 2.考查动名词。句意:我努力地练习弹钢琴,而且把全部的业余时间都投入到练习中。devote…to doing“致力于,献身于”。to是介词。故将learn改为learning。 3.考查定语从句关系词。句意:但是我的B级考试不及格,这使我很失望。此处为非限制性定语从句,不能用that。故将that改为which。 4.考查固定搭配。句意:回到家,我就向我的妈妈求助。turn to sb. for advice“向某人征求意见”,是固定搭配。故在turned后加to。 5.考查动词。句意:听到我所说的之后,她笑了。hear为及物动词,意为“听到”。故去掉of。 6.考查副词。句意:测试结果有时不能显示你真正的能力和水平。此处要用副词修饰动词show。故将real改为really。 7.考查代词。句意:你的进步不应该由一次考试来决定。根据上一句中your ability and level可知,这里是妈妈对“我”的劝解,是以妈妈的口气说的。故将my改为your。 8.考查时态。句意:我采纳了妈妈的建议。根据本文主要使用了一般过去时,故动词要用过去式。故将take改为took。 9.考查名词。句意:我采纳了妈妈的建议。“建议”advice,是不可数名词。故将advices改为advice。 10.考查形容词的比较级。句意:我已经意识到学习的过程是更重要的。根据句意可知此处是形容词的比较级,important是多音节形容词,变为比较级要加more,而much放在形容词比较级的前面,表示程度更深。故加more。
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