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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 As the su...

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

As the sun shone through Poltu’s window, he was already wide awake in his bed. He got up and ran straight to his study table. There, in an empty jam bottle, was the treasure. A colorful little butterfly. How difficult it had been to catch it in the backyard of his house. It had kept flying away from his grasp. But catch it he did. And now it was going to be part of his biology project in school.

The biology project required Poltu to submit the study of a living creature every month. Most of his classmates drew diagrams from their books as part of this exercise. But Poltu was going to do something different. He was going to present a live creature—this butterfly.

Poltu loved the different colours on the wings of the butterfly. Red, green and blue. How beautiful it looked when it fluttered the wings. Poltu had made a few holes on the cap of the bottle to let air pass through, and added tender leaves for the butterfly to nibble (小口的咬) on. He might have trapped the creature, but he cared for it.

Excited about displaying his exhibit to the biology teacher, Poltu dressed hurriedly, and left for school. His school was walking distance from his house. He took a short cut and when he arrived, the gate wasn’t wholly open yet.

He walked straight into his class, opened the bench window and placed the bottle on the windowsill. The golden rays of the sun streamed through the glass, on the delicate wings of the butterfly. Poltu’s butterfly looked simply gorgeous. In a few minutes, the area was full of boys, even from other classes, gazing fondly at it.

That day’s biology class was the most interesting in a long time. Pleased with Poltu’s initiative (主动性), the teacher asked everyone in the class to thank him as he made it possible for them to study a butterfly so closely. Poltu felt like a star for being treated like royalty.

On the way home, whatever small creature Poltu came across, he felt like putting into the bottle. But he checked himself as he wanted to give breathing space to his butterfly.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

However, when he returned home, he found the butter fly not moving. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

He ran outside, holding the bottle tightly in his hand.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

However, when he returned home, he found the butterfly not moving. Suspecting that it could be sleeping, he patted the cap of the bottle lightly, but no response. Poltu was scared all of a sudden. A disturbing thought flashed across his mind that the butterfly might have been exhausted to death after being displayed the entire day. He poured a little water into the bottle, which seemed to help as the butterfly shivered a little. Then followed a long period of utter stillness of the poor creature, leaving Poltu even more unsettled. He ran outside, holding the bottle tightly in his hand. The air in the backyard was refreshing from the scent of the green grass. He quickly unscrewed the cap of the bottle and started shaking it gently. His heart pounded as he waited for the butterfly to come alive. Then slowly, as if waking from a deep slumber, the butterfly started to move. Poltu watched as it fluttered its wings and rose gently up into the air. Staring at the empty bottle for an instant, he had a feeling of emptiness himself. But it was a delight to send the butterfly back to where it belonged—nature. 【解析】 这是一篇读后续写。阅读短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 1.速读全文,获取大意 读后续写大多为记叙文,我们可以用五个W和一个H问题来获取文章大意,即用when、where、who、what、how、why来说明“何时何地谁发生了何事,事件是如何发展的,为什么会这样发展。” 2.细读原文,理清脉络 续写是对原文的延伸,学生续写时要遵循原文的思路、风格和语言;要做到故事情节烂熟于心,人物性格准确把握。为此,学生有必要细读原文,了解原文的风格,用笔划出原文主要情节,次要情节,矛盾的冲突点、高潮处或可续写点,从而理清原文脉络。同时也应关注原文好词好句,细节描写和有效对话。 3.分析逻辑,构思情节 读后续写可以从两方面构思情节。一是分析文章结尾和两个段落首句间的逻辑关系,根据五所思维,即“所见,所闻,所想,所感,所做”,运用问题链设置相关问题构思情节。 二是搭建中文支架构思情节。合理且有创意的结尾能让阅卷老师回味无穷。 4.细节描写,优化语言 学生续写时应运用朴实、地道、恰当的词语,不必追求高大上的生僻词汇。续写情节应是原文的延续。续写手法叙述为主,描写为辅。当然,如学生能适时添加动作描写,肖像描写,环境描写,修辞表达和花样表达情节等细节描写,便能优化语言表达,让故事情节充满画面感。 5.检查修改,誊写终稿 完成续写初稿后,学生要检查、修改、润色自己的作文。自查情节是否合理,结尾是否有创意;语法、词汇、人称、时态运用是否准确;是否使用五个关键词;是否有细节描写和品质词句。最后用工整、端正的字迹誊写语篇续写,吸引阅卷教师的眼球。
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