假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because of the financial crisis, the situation of the employment have become very serious. Consider this, some people suggest graduates should have a lower career expectation, such as working in the western areas of China. I in favor of this idea. Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competition is not very fierce there, but graduates can easy get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all, going to the west may be bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is good for both our personal development and our country at present.
Two brothers decided to dig a deep hole behind their house. As they were working,a couple of older boys1. (stop) by to watch.
“What are you doing?” asked one of the 2. (visitor) curiously.
“We plan3. (dig) a hole all the way through the earth!”one of the brothers said 4. (excited).
The older boys began to laugh,telling the 5. (young) ones that it was impossible.
After a long 6. (silent), one of the diggers picked up 7. box full of spiders and insects. He showed the wonderful things 8. the older boys.
Then he said confidently, “Even if we don’t dig all the way through the earth, look at what we found along the way!”
9. (they) dream was far too big,but it did cause them to dig. And that is what a dream is for—to cause us to move in the direction we have chosen.
Not every dream will be realized. But when you couldn’t get what you wanted, perhaps you can say, “Yes,but look at the wonderful things 10. have come into my life because I tried to do something! ”
根据句意和括号内的提示，写出每个句子中划线部分单词的正确形式。
1.Life is like a long race where we ______ with others to go beyond ourselves. (to try to be more successful or better)
2.I shall be very likely to be _________ to my dream university.(allow somebody to become a member of a school)
3.They ________ their beloved old cars with expensive new sports cars.(put something new in the place of the old one)
4.He is a responsible writer, and _________to be respected.(get something because of what you have done)
5.The________ of Olympic Games is “Swifter，higher and further.”(short sentence or phrase expressing the beliefs of a person or group)
6.It is __________ visiting the art museum. (be useful, helpful, interesting, enjoyable etc.)
7.My father's ship was ______ in World War II.( goes below the surface of the water or sea, etc.)
8.She was upset that the valuable necklace __________ to her was lost yesterday. (be the property of)
9.Her parents died in the accident,but she _______.(to manage to live or continue in difficulties)
10.During the spring festival, you can see different kinds of _________.(the thing that makes something look more attractive on special occasions)
As she waited at the edge of the ice for her music to start, Peggy took a quick look at her father standing nearby with a group of parents and teachers. He smiled at her. Then she ____ out at the audience, ____ to see her mother. These two, Alvert and Doris Flemint, had ____ all the way from California more than 2,000 miles away, to see their ____ compete in this sports meet in Cleveland, Ohio.
The music ____ and Peggy moved onto the ice, letting the music ____ her along into her turns, and she began skating with much ____ in herself. The cold fear she always had in the ____ seconds before skating onto the ice was ____. She was feeling the movement of the ____ and letting it carry her. She skated easily, ____ did some jumps, a final turn and her performance was _____.
The crowd loved it and cheered ____ she skated off the ice. “Nice job,” said one of the other ____. It was the remark that ____ came after a free-skating performance. But what should the ____ say? Standing beside her father, Peggy ____ for the scoring to be finished. On all sides were other young skaters, some waiting _____ alone, others with a parent. Shortly before 10 o’clock the results were ____. The new United States Women’s Figure Skating Champion was Peggy Fleming of Passdena, ____.
1.A.looked B.watched C.found D.stepped
2.A.failing B.looking forward C.wanting D.hoping
3.A.bicycled B.driven C.run D.walked
4.A.friend B.children C.son D.daughter
5.A.started B.played C.developed D.sang
6.A.allow B.set out C.carry D.support
7.A.thought B.belief C.success D.design
8.A.following B.last C.recent D.past
9.A.lost B.present C.strong D.gone
10.A.music B.fear C.ice D.audiences
11.A.so B.or C.before D.then
12.A.satisfied B.unsatisfactory C.finished D.welcome
13.A.because B.until C.before D.as
14.A.skaters B.parents C.judges D.parents
15.A.always B.seldom C.again D.hardly
16.A.players B.audience C.judges D.parents
17.A.waited B.looked C.wished D.asked
18.A.comfortably B.hurriedly C.happily D.anxiously
19.A.cried out B.let out C.announced D.declared
20.A.England B.Cleveland C.Ohio D.California
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。The pine tree is a special kind of tree. 1. This is because many people put pine trees in their homes at Christmas time. They decorate the tree with colored lights, and put Christmas presents under the tree.Pine trees are different from other trees because most other trees lose their leaves in winter. 2.So pine trees are also called evergreens.3. They have hard, thin leaves called needles. Pine trees also have pine cones. Pine cones look like hard berries. If you walk in a forest, you will see many pine cones on the ground. 4. When the seeds fall to the ground, a new tree starts to grow.5. The wood is used to make furniture and boats. Many kinds of birds build their nests in pine trees. The seeds of pine trees are food for small animals such as squirrels and mice and for bigger animals such as rabbits and black bears. The needles are good food for large animals such as deer and moose when they cannot find anything to eat in the winter.If you walk in a forest of pine trees, the air has a wonderful smell. In winter, the white snow on the dark green trees looks very beautiful.
A. Pine trees stay green all year long, even in winter. |
B. Pine trees do not have soft leaves like the maple tree. |
C. Some people call the pine tree a Christmas tree. |
D. Pine trees are very beautiful all year round. |
E. Pine trees are valuable for many reasons. |
F. Inside the pine cones are seeds. |
G. The seeds inside the pine cones are the favorite food for some animals. |
A
Sport is not only physically challenging, but can also be mentally challenging. Criticism from coaches, parents and other teammates, as well as pressure to win can create too much anxiety or stress for young athletes. Stress can be physical, emotional, or psychological and research has indicated that it can lead to burnout. Burnout has been described as dropping or quitting of an activity that was at one time enjoyable.
The early years of development are critical years for learning about oneself. The sport setting is one where valuable experiences can take place. Young athletes can, for example, learn how to cooperate with others, make friends, and gain other social skills that will be used throughout their lives. Coaches and parents should be aware, at all times, that their feedback to youngsters can greatly affect their children. Youngsters may take their parents and coaches’ criticisms to heart and find faults in themselves.
Coaches and parents should also pay attention that youth sport participation does not become work for children. The outcome of the game should not be more important than the process of learning the sport and other life lessons. In today’s youth sport setting young athletes may be worrying more about who will win instead of enjoying themselves and the sport. Following a game many parents and coaches focus on the outcome and find faults with youngsters’ performances. Positive support should be provided regardless of the outcome. Research indicates that positive support motivates and has a greater effect on learning than criticism. Again, criticism can create high levels of stress, which can lead to burnout.
1.An effective way to prevent the burnout of young athletes is_____________.
A.to make sport less competitive
B.to increase their sense of success
C.to reduce their mental stress
D.to make sport more challenging
2.According to the passage, sport is positive for young people in that_____________.
A.it can help them learn more about society
B.it enables them to find faults in themselves
C.it can provide them with valuable experiences
D.it teaches them how to set realistic goals for themselves
3.Many coaches and parents are in the habit of criticizing young athletes_____________.
A.believing that criticism does good to their early development
B.without realizing criticism may destroy their selfconfidence
C.in order to make them remember life’s lessons
D.so as to put more pressure on them
4.According to the passage parents and coaches should_____________.
A.pay more attention to letting children enjoy sport
B.help children to win every game
C.train children to cope with stress
D.enable children to understand the positive aspect of sport
