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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the road was wet. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse, the bus ran out of gas and it is very cold in it. They could hard wait to get out of the bus.A man who lived nearby saw what had happened. He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally helps came. All of them were grateful with his help.

 

1. passenger→passengers; 2. 去掉because后的of;3. trapping→trapped; 4. is→was; 5. hard→hardly; 6. bus前加the; 7. but→and; 8. their→his;9. helps→help;10. with→for 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章叙述了在一个冬天下雪的夜晚,一辆载有45名乘客的公共汽车发生了事故,所有乘客都被困在车上而且车的汽油也用完了,里面很冷。住在附近的一个人和一些村民设法打开车门后,这个人把乘客们带回了家,给大家提供了食物和水,给小孩子提供暖和的衣服。两天后,终于有人来帮助大家离开,他们都对这名男子的帮助表示感谢。 1.考查可数名词。句意:一辆载有45名乘客的公共汽车出了事故。passenger为可数名词,因为前面有数字“45”,所以要用复数。故将passenger改为passengers。 2.考查从属连词。句意:公共汽车因为路面湿滑发生了事故。because是从属连词,后接一个句子作为从句,与主句一起构成主从复合句。 because of是介词短语,后接名词、代词、动名词、what 从句作宾语。故将because后的of去掉。 3.考查语态。句意:乘客都被困在公共汽车上。主语all of them 和谓语动词trap之间为被动关系。故将trapping改为trapped 。 4.考查时态。句意:车上很冷。事情发生在过去,应用一般过去时。故将is改为was。 5.考查副词。句意:乘客迫不及待地要下车。hard 意为“困难的,努力地”,hardly意为“几乎不”,can/could hardly wait to do sth=can/could not wait to do sth,意为“迫不及待地做某事”,故将hard改为hardly。 6.考查冠词。句意:住在附近的一个人和一些村民设法打开车门,并帮助他们下车。此处需要特指汽车,故在bus前加定冠词the。 7.考查连词。句意:他把乘客带回了家,并且给大家提供了食物和水。前后内容不是转折关系,而是并列关系,故将but改为and。 8.考查形容词性物主代词。句意:乘客在该男子的家中度过了两天。根据语意,可知乘客们在男子的家中度过了两天。故将their改为his。 9.考查名词。句意:两天之后,终于等来了救援。help是不可数名词,故将helps改为help。 10.考查固定短语。句意:乘客都对男子的帮助表示感谢。be grateful for sth意为“就某事表示感谢”,故将with改为for。  
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3.A.beds B.places C.turns D.sides

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5.A.wouldn’t B.shouldn’t C.couldn’t D.needn’t

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7.A.boring B.interesting C.pleased D.exciting

8.A.Finally B.Naturally C.Generally D.Especially

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10.A.matter B.everything C.trouble D.nothing

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12.A.changing B.studying C.quarreling D.imagining

13.A.What B.Which C.Why D.When

14.A.common B.ordinary C.regular D.normal

15.A.unhappiness B.loneliness C.memory D.emotion

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17.A.remembered B.thought C.felt D.lost

18.A.like B.as C.with D.on

19.A.suppose B.believe C.hope D.suggest

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A.On the beach. B.At the hospital.

C.At school. D.At home.

2.Who brought the writer the bad news that her mother was ill?

A.Her sister. B.The headmaster.

C.Her teacher. D.The police officer.

3.What did the headmaster tell the two teachers the next day?

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B.Her mother had been dead.

C.Her mother had gotten better.

D.Her sister came to see her.

 

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A.smoking is a serious problem among Chinese students

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D.most of smokers are young students

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