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I have recently been told that listen to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she had turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gives a party she doesn’t have to invite a rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered certain electronic sounds have strangely effects on rats. He declares break down, almost paralyze(瘫) with their legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder that the same thing will happen to my neighbor someday.

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In my free time, I really like1.(surf) the Internet．When I get home from work, I turn on my computer, wait 2. it boots up completely, and then I go online．I usually check my email first and then write a few3.( message) to  my family and friends．I sometimes scan the local news headlines at my favorite news Website and read up on the latest local and international news.This Website often provides video news clips4.you can view online．I sometimes order products or service online to save money and time instead of going to 5.store and buying what I'm looking for．For example, I 6.(order)a digital camera online the other day and saved about ＄50．Whatever I do, I realize that there are problems 7.  using the Internet including scams,     identify theft, and viruses, so I'm very careful not to give out my  8.(person)information．Furthermore, I don't download or open files I don't recognize．

9. (use) the Internet can be fun and  a convenient way of shopping and finding out new information, 10. you just need to be careful.

    I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I have really changed. I have started to think about other people _______ I think about myself. I am happy that I am becoming a _______person:

I think my _______started when I was at Palomar College. At first, I just wanted to get my _______, and be left alone. I thought I was smarter everyone else, so I hardly ever _______to anyone in my classes. By the end of my first semester, I was really, _______. It seemed as if everyone but me had made friends and was having fun. So tried a(n) _______. I started asking people around me how they were doing, and if they were having trouble I _______to help. That was really a big _______for me. By the end of the year, I had several new friends, and two of _______are still my best friends today.

A bigger cause of my new _______, however, came when I took a part-time job at a Vista Nursing Home. One old lady there who had Alzheimer s disease became my _______. Every time I came into her room, she was so _______because she thought I was her daughter. Her real daughter never _______her, so I took her place. She let me _______. That making others feel good make me feel good, too. When she died, I was _______, but I was very grateful to her.

I think I am a much _______, person today than I used to be, and I hope I will not _______these experiences. They have _______e to care about other people more than about myself. _______who I am today, and I could not say that a few years ago.

1.A.since B.before C.or D.unless

2.A.famous B.simple C.different D.skilled

3.A.education B.career C.tour D.change

4.A.balance B.homework C.degree D.interest

5.A.talked B.wrote C.lied D.reported

6.A.careful B.lonely C.curious D.guilty

7.A.argument B.game C.experiment D.defence

8.A.dared B.offered C.hesitated D.happened

9.A.dream B.problem C.duty D.step

10.A.us B.which C.them D.whom

11.A.attitude B.hobby C.hope D.luck

12.A.friend B.partner C.guide D.guest

13.A.polite B.happy C.strange D.confident

14.A.bothered B.answered C.visited D.trusted

15.A.explain B.guess C.declare D.see

16.A.homeless B.heart broken C.bad-tempered D.hopeless

17.A.quieter B.busier C.better D.richer

18.A.forget B.face C.improve D.analyze

19.A.forced B.preferred C.ordered D.taught

20.A.miss B.like C.wonder D.expect

Tips on Young Adult Life

As you grow rapidly through your teenage years, you will experience a lot of changes. The changes may seem difficult. 1. Don’t panic! You will deal successfully with them! You are a young adult now!

With more responsibility, you will find more freedom to make your own choices. This is a time to be well informed about making choices. In this way you can make healthy balanced decisions. 2. You may already know your career path or you may have no idea at all what you want to do. Both situations are fine! Work hard and the right opportunity will show itself to you.

Young adulthood means greater freedom and more choices. 3. But try not to shut your family out of your life. You should learn to think of others even though you are old enough to look after yourself.

It is also perfectly natural at this time for you to spend more time with your friends than your family. 4. A true friend will stand by you no matter what happens.

This period is a part of the life cycle. There are some people who will be with you throughout life’s journey. There will be some people with whom you part and go separate ways. Leaving school can be hard. The reality is that you may not even see all of your classmates again.

You are a young adult. It is your life. No one can live it for you. 5. So making the right choices will be important to you. Life is for living. Enjoy your life wisely!

A. Choose your friends wisely.

B. They may seem to happen quickly.

C. They will help shape the future.

D. You may appreciate what you have in your own life.

E. You will probably want to be independent.

F. The choices that you make from now on will be your choices.

G. Your family has been with you since you came into this world.

    It has always been thought that alcohol causes people to put on weight because it contains a lot of sugar, but new research suggests a glass a day cold form part of a diet. Looking at past studies they found that, while heavy drinkers do put on weight; those who drink in moderation can actually lose weight.

A spokesman for the research team at Navarro University in Spain says, ＂Light to moderate alcohol intake, especially of wine, may be more likely to protect against, rather than promote, weight gain.＂ The International Scientific Forum on Alcohol Research reviewed the findings and agreed with most of the conclusions, particularly that data do not clearly indicate if moderate drinking increases weight.

Boston University’s Dr. Harvey Finkel found that the biologic mechanisms(生物学机制) relating alcohol to changes in body weight are not properly understood. His team pointed out the strong protective effects of moderate drinking on the risk of getting conditions like diabetes(糖尿病), which relate to increasing obesity. Some studies suggest that even very obese people may be at lower risk of diabetes if they are moderate drinkers.

The group says alcohol provides calories that are quickly absorbed into the body and are not stored in fat, and that this process could explain the differences in its effects from those of other foods. They agree that future research should be directed towards assessing the roles of different types of alcoholic drinks, taking into consideration drinking patterns and including the past tendency of participants to gain weight.

For now there is little evidence that consuming small to moderate amounts of alcohol on a regular basis increases one’s risk of becoming obese. What’s more, a study three years ago suggested that resveratrol(白藜芦醇), a compound present in grapes and red wine destroys fat cells.

1.The passage is mainly for those___________.

A. who produce wine

B. who have a drinking habit

C. who go on a diet

D. who are eager to lose weight

2.The underlined phrase＂ in moderation＂ in the first paragraph means ___________.

A. excitedly B. carefully

C. frequently D. properly

3.What can we learn from the passage?

A. Current data clearly show that moderate drinking increases weight.

B. Resveratrol is proved to increase the risk of becoming fat.

C. The research found moderate drinking has a strong protective effect.

D. The specific roles of different types of alcoholic drinks are very clear.

4.What is most likely to be discussed in the paragraph that follows?

A. How to do some easy experiments.

B. How to reduce the calories contained in wine.

C. How to prove the finding mentioned above.

D. How to make wine in a healthy way.