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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last weekend, I, along with some friend, went to climb Mount Tai. Because it was summer, we choose to climb it at night. At the foot of the mountain, we each bought a walk stick. There were many people along the way and we could see the route even without a flashlight. At first, we were exciting and talked to each other. When we had covered half of journey, we felt very tired and sleepless. But seeing the sky becoming brighter and brighter, we told us that we should carry on and hurry up; otherwise we wouldn’t be able to appreciate at the sunrise. We were very tired that we got to the top of the mountain, and the beautiful sunrise made it all worthwhile.

 

1. friend→friends 2. choose→chose 3. walk→walking 4. exciting→excited 5. of后加the 6. sleepless→sleepy 7. us→ourselves 8. appreciate at(去掉) the sunrise 9. that→when 10. and→but 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了上周末,作者和一些朋友去泰山爬山看日出的事件。 1. 考查名词的数。句意:上周末,我和一些朋友去泰山爬山。“friend(朋友)”为可数名词,当被some修饰时,应用名词的复数形式。故将friend改为friends。 2. 考查一般过去时。句意:因为是夏天,所以我们选择晚上爬山。由上句中的Last weekend可知,这个故事发生在过去,应用一般过去时。故将choose改为chose。 3. 考查动名词定语。句意:在山脚下,我们每人买了一根步行杖。“walk(走路)”是动词,不能直接修饰名词。walk描述的是stick的功能,性质,所以应使用动名词作定语。故将walk改为walking。 4. 考查形容词。句意:刚开始的时候,我们都很激动还互相交谈。这句话的主语是We,指人。动词+ed:表示情感和感觉,所以它只能用在人、动物身上。因为物体是没有感觉的,所以不能用在物体上。动词+ing:用来表达一种事物(包括人)的特征。可以用在人、动物、环境、物体、过程等方面。这些事物会给人带来某种情感。所以,本句话中应使用-ed形式的形容词,表达我们的感觉。故将exciting改为excited。 5. 考查定冠词。句意:当我们走了一半的时候,我们感到很累还想睡觉。由于段落前几句一直在描述这次旅行,所以当再次提到这次旅程一半的时候,应使用定冠词the特指这次旅行。故在of后加the。 6. 考查形容词。句意同上。根据句意,我们半夜爬山,所以爬了一半的时候,按常理应该会感到疲惫,这样才能与and前的tired意思相一致。“sleepless”意为“睡不着,失眠”,“想睡觉的”应翻译为sleepy。故将sleepless改为sleepy。 7. 考查反身代词。句意:但是看到天越来越亮,我们告诉我们自己我们应该继续并加快进度,否则我们可能就无法欣赏日出。“我们告诉我们自己”中,句子宾语与主语指代一致,所以宾语处应用反身代词,we的反身代词是ourselves,故将us改为ourselves。 8. 考查介词。句意同上。“appreciate(欣赏)”为及物动词,可以直接加名词作宾语。故将appreciate后的at去掉。 9. 考查状语从句的连词。句意:当我们到达山顶时我们很累,但是美丽的日出让这一切都变得很值得。这是一个时间状语从句,“当……的时候”应使用连词when/while,又由于从句中的谓语动词为非延续性动词,所以选择when。故将that改为when。 10. 考查并列连词。句意同上。根据句意,前后两个分句之间是转折关系,不是并列关系。故将and改为but。  
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