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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

At the beginning of this term, we moved to the new school yard, where lies in the far north of the city. We were all on high spirits. It is much big than the old one. The classrooms are bright and clean. We have a lot of modern lab equipment, making convenient for students to do experiments. Now we can have various after-school activity on the new playground. Our teachers often play the basketball and soccer together with us. As spring approached, the flowers newly planting in the yard are so beautiful. With such many green trees and fragrant flowers around, we feel it less hardly to deal with the pressure of school work in the senior year.

 

1. where → which 2. on → in 3. big → bigger 4. making后加it 5. activity →activities 6. 去掉play后的the 7. approached→ approaches 8. planting → planted 9. such→ so 10. hardly→ hard 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章介绍自己的新校园。 1.考查定语从句。句意:在这个学期开始的时候,我们搬到了新校园,它位于城市的最北部。此处school yard是先行词,指物,放在后面的定语从句中作主语,且that不能引导非限制共性定语从句,故把where改成which。 2.考查固定词组。句意:我们都兴高采烈。固定词组:in high spirits“兴高采烈”。故把on 改成in。 3.考查比较级。根据than可知此处用形容词的比较级,故把big改成bigger。 4.考查it用法。句意:我们有很多现代化的实验设备,方便学生做实验。固定句式:make +it+形容词+to do sth.此处it作形式宾语,动词不定式作真正的宾语。故在making后加it。 5.考查名词复数。句意:现在我们可以在新操场上进行各种各样的课外活动。此处various“各种各样的”是形容词,后面用名词复数,故把activity改成activities。 6.考查固定搭配。句意:我们的老师经常和我们一起打篮球和踢足球。固定搭配:play basketball“打篮球”。此处basketball指“球类”,前面不用冠词。故去掉play后的the。 7.考查时态。句意:随着春天的临近,院子里新栽的花儿是那么美丽。此处as“随着”引导时间状语从句,这里指一种客观事实,所以从句用一般现在时态,且主语是spring,是单数第三人称,故把approached改成approaches。 8.考查过去分词作后置定语。句意:随着春天的临近,院子里新栽的花儿是那么美丽。此处the flowers和plant“种植”之间是一种被动关系,是过去分词作后置定语,故把planting 改成planted。 9.考查so和such的区别。句意:有这么多的绿树和芳香的花朵在周围,我们觉得它不那么难处理的压力在高中。名词前面如果有表示数量的many/much时应该用so来修饰。故把such改成so。 10.考查词义辨析。句意:在周围有这么多的绿树和芳香的花朵,在高中的时光我们觉得它不那么难对付学业的压力。hardly是副词,意思是“几乎不”;hard是形容词,意思是“困难的,努力的”或是副词,意思是“困难地,努力地”。固定句式:feel+ it+形容词+动词不定式,此句式中用形容词做宾语补足语,故把hardly改成hard。
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13.A.and B.or C.though D.as

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15.A.taken over B.thought about C.dealt with D.applied for

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17.A.alive B.healthy C.around D.together

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G. Gratitude helps us focus on the good things we have, and not on what we lack.

 

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A.They are very popular with users.

B.They can do harm to the users’ bodies.

C.They need to be replaced quite often.

D.They are really convenient to carry around.

2.What is special about the new supercapacitor?

A.It has electrodes on the outside.

B.It is made from a kind of protein material.

C.It can transform the energy from the body.

D.It helps save the carriers’ money and energy.

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A.The small size.

B.The small battery.

C.The energy harvester.

D.The bending and twisting characters.

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A.A New Technology to Downsize Batteries.

B.A New Battery-free Pacemaker.

C.A Smaller Battery-powered Pacemaker.

D.A Great Contribution Made by UCLA Researchers.

 

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The prolific author was loved for his vivid description of the lives of African American children, and for writing books for young people that covered different subjects. “Myers has written about all those subjects with deep understanding and a hard-won, qualified sense of hope,” said Leonard S. Marcus in 2008.

He was born in 1937 and was adopted by Florence Dean and Herbert after his mother died while giving birth to his younger sister. They loved him very much and his mother read to him from a very young age. Reading pushed him to discover worlds beyond his landscape.

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He dropped out of high school at 17 and joined the army. After finishing his service, he entered a dark period in his life. Myers began writing at night to pull himself through that miserable time.

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“I write books for the troubled boy I once was,” he wrote, “and for the boy who lives within me still.”

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A.How popular Myers was.

B.How Myers became successful.

C.What people think of Myers’ books.

D.What makes Myers’ works popular.

2.What does the underlined word “prolific” in Paragraph 2 probably mean?

A.Optimistc. B.Unfortunate.

C.Productive. D.Humorous.

3.Who discovered Myers’ writing talent?

A.James Arthur Baldwin. B.His mother.

C.Leonard S. Marcus. D.One of his teachers.

4.Why was the short story by James Arthur Baldwin so important to Myers?

A.It helped him survive the dark period.

B.It inspired him to pursue his writing career.

C.He learned many writing techniques from it.

D.The author of the story permitted him to write.

 

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