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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a bicyclethat was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers afterschool. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school by my own bicycle.

 

1. friend→ friends;2. it→ one;3.that→ which;4.the money前加for;5. He→ I;6. If→ when;7. after→ later;8. gives→ gave;9.去掉happy前的much;10. by→on。 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。上高中时,“我”的大多数朋友都有自行车。“我”希望也能拥有一辆。“我”靠卖报纸挣了一半的钱,爸爸给了“我”另外一半,然后买了一辆自行车。“我”高兴地骑着自行车去上学了。 1.考查名词的数。句意:当“我”上高中时,“我”朋友中的许多人都有自行车。most of后接可数名词时,可数名词使用复数形式。故将friend改为friends。 2.考查代词。句意:“我”也想拥有一辆自行车。it是代词,特指上文已经出现过的某一个东西。one也为代词,代指上文出现过的同一类事物,但是并不强调特指。根据句意“我”也想拥有一辆自行车,但是并没有特指拥有哪一辆自行车,故应用one代指。故将it改为one。 3.考查非限制性定语从句。分析句子结构可知,逗号后面为非限制性定语从句,先行词为a bicycle ,引导非限制性定语从句的关系代词代指a bicycle 在从句中充当主语。that不能引导非限制性定语从句,故应使用which引导。故将that改为which。 4.考查动词词组。句意:“我”向爸爸要钱。ask sb. for sth.为固定搭配,意为“向某人要某物”。故在the money之前加for。 5.考查人称代词。由“But he said he could only give me half of the money.”可知,爸爸只能给“我”一半的钱。由此可推知,“我”应该自己找到剩下的一半的钱,应将He替换为I。故将He改为I。 6.考查从属连词。句意:当“我”一个月后给爸爸钱时,爸爸非常高兴。when 为连词,意为“当……时”,引导时间状语从句。if 为连词,意为“如果”,引导条件状语从句。根据句意本句应为时间状语从句。故将if改为when。 7.考查固定搭配。句意:一个月之后,“我”给他展示“我”的钱。时间段+ later和after +时间段都是固定搭配,表达一段时间之后,通常用于一般过去时。本句中表示时间段的a month在前,其后应用later ,表示“一个月之后”。故将after改为later。 8.考查时态。本句的动作发生在作者上高中的时候,全句是对过去事实的简单陈述,故时态应为一般过去时。give的过去式是gave。故将gives改为gave。 9.考查宾语从句的引导词。句意:你能想像到当“我”骑着自己的自行车去学校时有多高兴。how much指“多少”修饰不可数名词,本句中happy为形容词,应用how来修饰,表示程度。故将much去掉。 10.考查介词用法。by bicycle为固定搭配,意为“骑自行车”,by和bicycle之间不能有其他的词语,应将by改为on,即on my own bicycle是正确的表达。故将by改为on。  
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