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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)),并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线.并任该词下血面写出修改后的词.

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10.多者(从最11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have got to know your plan for volunteers in China through the Internet. Consider my advantages. I want to catch this opportunity.

I am a senior school student in China. I can speaking English very fluently. Thank to my work with an international event not long ago. I was confident that I can meet your request fairly well. In addition, I have the good command of knowledge about Chinese culture, that is a must for this event. More important. I am outspoken and always ready help others. Therefore. I am sure of I can make a good volunteer. I hope to work with him in the coming event.

Looking forward to your early reply.

 

Consider →Considering speaking→ speak Thank →Thanks was→ am the →a that→ which important →importantly 在ready后加to 将of去掉或改为that him →you 【解析】 这是一篇应用文。作者想要申请成为志愿者,文中对自己做了自我介绍。 第一处:考查现在分词。前后没有连接词,consider和句子主语之间是主动关系,所以用现在分词做状语。故将Consider改为Considering。 第二处:考查动词。can为情态动词,后跟动词原形。故将speaking改为speak。 第三处:考查固定搭配。句意:多亏了我在不久前的一次国际活动中所做的工作。thanks to多亏了,故将Thank改为Thanks。 第四处:考查时态。根据语境可知,描述现状,所以用一般现在时,故将was改为am。 第五处:考查固定搭配。have a good command of knowledge精通。故将the改为a。 第六处:考查非限制性定语从句。这是个定语从句,先行词Chinese culture指物,在非限制性定语从句中做主语,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,所以用which引导。故将that改为which。 第七处:考查副词。句意:更重要的是,我很坦率,总是乐于帮助别人。修饰句子,要用副词。故将important改为importantly。 第八处:考查固定搭配。be ready to do乐意做某事。故在ready后面加to。 第九处:考查固定搭配。be sure of后跟名词、代词;而此处是后跟句子,需去掉of。故去掉of。 第十处:考查人称代词。句意:我希望在接下来的活动中与您合作。给对方写信,因此,此处用you。故将him改为you。
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