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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My mother is sixty-five year old, that devotes herself to the whole family and us three daughters. Today I still remember clearly that there was the time when life was really hard in a remote mountain village. People there had a strong prejudice that girls should not go to school and stay at home doing housework. However, my mother held a total opposite view that her three daughters should get educated no matter what others thought and no matter what hard life was. My mother got little education because the Chinese Cultural Revolution and she decided not to let the same thing to happen to her girls. To his delight, we three sisters went to college and got well-educated. And now, we all have our jobs and our own happy families. We are such grateful for what Mum has done for us.

 

1. 第一句 year→years 2. 第一句 that→who 3. 第二句 the→a 4. 第三句and→but 5. 第四句 total→totally 6. 第四句 what→how 7. 第五句because后加of 8. 第五句删掉happen前面的to 9. 第六句his→her 10. 第八句 such→so 【解析】 1. 考查名词。句意:我的妈妈65岁了。sixty-five years old 65岁,故year→years。 2. 考查非限制性定语从句的关系词。句意:我的妈妈65岁了,她把自己奉献给整个家庭以及我们三个女儿。这里构造非限制性定语从句,先行词是My mother,作主语,故用who指代妈妈,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,故that→who。 3. 考查冠词。句意:今天,我仍然很清楚的记得有一段时期,在遥远的乡村生活真的很困难。这里的time是可数名词,这里表示“一段时期”,故the→a。 4. 考查连词。句意:那儿的人们有很强的偏见,认为女孩不应该去上学而应该待在家里做家务活。根据句意可知and→but。 5. 考查副词。句意:然而,我的妈妈有完全不同的观点。用副词totally修饰形容词opposite,故total→totally。 6. 考查副词。句意:她的三个女儿应该受到教育,无论别人怎么想,无论生活多么地困难。用表示程度的副词修饰形容词hard。no matter how hard life was无论生活多么困难。故what→how。 7. 句意:由于文化大革命,我的妈妈没有受过什么教育。Because是连词,后接句子,because of是介词短语,后面接名词或名词短语,这里后面是the Chinese Cultural Revolution,故because后加of。 8. 考查固定搭配。句意:她决定不让同样的事情发生在她的女儿身上。let sb do sth 让某人做某事,故删掉happen前面的to。 9. 考查代词。句意:令她高兴的是,我们三姐妹都考上了大学,受到很好的教育。很明显,这里是“令妈妈高兴的是”,故his→her。 10. 考查副词。句意:我们很感激妈妈为我们做的一切。so修饰形容词,such修饰名词,根据后面是形容词grateful,故such→so。
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