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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每句错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Before I started my winter holiday last year, I made a thoroughly plan. I make a list of what I should do during the holiday. Then I put them up on the wall in the room. Whenever I wanted to play with the mobile phone like I had done before, it reminded me to do what I supposed to do. As a result of, I spent a meaningful winter holiday. I finished my homeworks on time, read four novels or learned how to skate.

Later, I'm always convinced that take action is more important than making plans. Only by taking action can we get which we want.

 

【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了“我”把寒假期间应该做的事情列了一张清单,然后把它挂在房间的墙上以此提醒自己该做的事情,因此这个寒假“我”过得很有意义。 1.考查形容词。句意:去年寒假开始前,我做了一个周密的计划。形容词修饰名词plan作定语,thoroughly是副词,through是形容词。故将thoroughly 改为thorough。 2.考查时态。句意:我把假期应该做的事情列了一张单子。根据上一句中的时间状语last year可知,本句讲述的是过去的事情,应使用一般过去时。故将 make改为made。 3.考查人称代词。句意:然后我把它挂在房间的墙上。此处使用代词it指代前一句中的a list,them用于指代复数的名词。故将 them改为it。 4. 考查从属连词。句意:每当我想像以前那样玩手机时,它提醒我要做该做的事。此处使用连词as表示“像……一样”,引导方式状语从句。like作为“像……一样”讲时是介词,介词后面不能接句子“I had done before.”。故将like 改为as。 5.考查固定短语。句意:每当我想像以前那样玩手机时,它提醒我要做该做的事。讲述过去的事情应该使用一般过去时。be supposed to do sth 意为“被期望做某事,应该做某事”。从句主语是I,因此需加上was。故在supposed前加was。 6.考查固定短语。句意:结果,我度过了一个有意义的寒假。as a result of后面接名词、代词、动名词等作宾语,意为“由于,因为”。as a result后面一般用逗号将其与句子隔开,表示“结果,因此”,即as a result前的句子是原因,后面的句子是结果。故将 of去掉。 7.考查名词。句意:我按时完成了家庭作业,读了四本小说并学会了滑冰。homework是不可数名词。故将 homeworks改为homework。 8.考查并列连词。句意:我按时完成了家庭作业,读了四本小说并学会了滑冰。此处不表示选择,做作业、读小说、滑冰是并列关系。故将or 改为and。 9.考查动名词。句意:后来,我总是相信采取行动比制定计划更重要。that后面的从句的谓语动词是is,它的前面是主语,take是动词,应使用动名词短语taking action作主语。故将take 改为taking。 10.考查宾语从句引导词。句意:只有采取行动,我们才能得到我们想要的。分析句子结构可知,get后面是一个宾语从句,从句谓语动词want缺宾语,指想要的“东西”应使用what。故将which 改为what。
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