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假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你...

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序写一篇英文周记记述你们上周接待外国学生带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。

注意词数不少于60。

(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)

 

Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding. On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea. In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time. Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us. At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world. 【解析】本文为图片介绍类作文,这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛,可以是记叙文、说明文,也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知,是写一篇记叙文。 1. 认真读图,把握中心。 根据提示可知,内容是带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的全过程,介绍了茶具,泡茶,沏茶,品茶的过程,所以这是这组图画所要表达的中心。 2. 初步构思,考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。 在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容。本文是讲述上周发生的事情,故时态要以过去时为主,人称是第一人称,尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。 3. 连词成句,然后再连句成文。 运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。 串连时,要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句,不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象,更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。 4. 反复审核,修改错误。 一篇文章写好后,应进行检查,看短文中是否有错,如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。 5. 宜详则详,该略则略。 对于一些细节方面的内容,如果是文章必不可少的,在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。 如果是可有可无的细节,则可视具体情况进行增删。据此,我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容,看其是否影响文章的内容。 亮点说明: 巧妙使用定语从句,提升了文章档次:Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding. 使用非谓语动词,使句子表达更简洁: On arriving at the tea house… I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. 使用倒装句突出重点。 Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. 使用it做形式主语,使表达更地道。 It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.  
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