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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.

 

【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在去年寒假期间和父亲去乡下拜访爷爷奶奶过程中的所见所闻,由此讲述了乡下的巨大变化。 1. countryside前加the 考查冠词。句意:去年寒假,我和父亲去乡下拜访爷爷奶奶。此处特指去的是乡下,故加定冠词the。 2. find改成found 考查动词时态。根据文章中的During my last winter holiday可知,事件发生在过去,故用过去时。故将find改成found。 3. another改成other 考查形容词的用法。句意:他们住在一个小房子里,院子里有狗、鸭子和其他牲畜。another后面只能跟单数名词,故改成other。 4. here改成there 考查副词及语意理解。句意:去年冬天我又一次去了那里。故将here改成there。 5. chicken改成chickens 考查名词复数。句意:他们拥有一个大的独立住宅,还养了许多只鸡。根据前文的dozens of可知,其后用名词复数形式。 6. which改成in which 或where 考查定语从句的关系词。句意:他们还有一个小池塘,里面养着鱼。此处a small pond是先行词,其在后面的定语从句中作地点状语,故把which改成in which 或where。 7. sell改成selling 考查动名词。句意:我爷爷说去年夏天他们通过卖鱼挣了一大笔钱。此处介词by后用动名词,故用selling。 8. happily改成happy 考查形容词作表语。句意:我很高兴他们的生活有了很大提高。此处形容词作表语,故将happily改成happy。 9. 删除for 考查介词的用法。时间名词有every,each,last等词修饰时,其前不用介词。故删除for。 10. but改成and 考查并列连词的用法。句意:我计划每两年回来一次,他同意了。此处是接连发生的动作,是顺承关系,故将but改成and。
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