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Welcome to the Great Wall. Measured more than 6,000 kilometers in length, the Great Wall is known as the long wall in the world. It had a long history of more than 2,000 years. That is amazing about the Great Wall is that it is main made of stones and bricks, and that all the construction was done by hand. As it was used to protecting the country from foreign invaders, every a few hundred meters along the Great Wall, there was a watchtower. Now, as a symbol of China, the Great Wall has become one of the most famous tourist attraction in the world. There is no wonder that the Great Wall attracts thousands foreign tourists every year.
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Workers in India are moving over 300 crocodiles from their home because they are too near a new tourist sight. They could be a danger to tourists 1. (visit) the new Statue of Unity which was opened to the public recently. It is 182 meters high and is the 2. (tall) statue in the world. It is next to a reservoir, which is also home to many crocodiles. Tourism officials want to have the crocodiles 3. (move) so seaplanes for tourists can land on4.reservoir. If the crocodiles stayed, they could be dangerous and attack tourists. Officials are using 5. (cage)to catch the animals. They are going to a new home in another part of Gujarat.
Animal lovers are angry about the moving. One said, “The government is disturbing their home and putting their lives 6.risk. The government hasn't thought out where it will set free the seized crocodiles safely.” So far, only 17 of the animals 7. (catch)and moved. Another said, “Have we collectively lost our minds? 8. any environmentalist will tell you, this is 9.(complete) crazy.” Moving the crocodiles could break India's wildlife protection laws. An official said the crocodiles had to go for “10. (secure) reasons”.
Steve was a seventh grader, a big boy, looking more like a teenager than a 12-year-old. Yet, he went unnoticed — he had been ____ every examination since first grade—until Miss Wilma.
In the middle of the first semester of school, the entire seventh grade was ____ for basic skills.
“You all did pretty well,” Miss Wilma told the class after going over the ____, “except for one boy. And it _____my heart to tell you this, but…” she ___ , “the smartest boy in the seventh grade is failing my class.” Steve ____ his eyes and carefully examined his fingertips.
After that, Steve still wouldn’t do his homework. Even if Miss Wilma ____punished him, he remained ___ .
“Steve, please! I care about you!”
____, Steve got it! “Someone CARES ABOUT ME?!”
One Monday a couple of weeks later, Miss Wilma gave a ____ on the weekend homework. Steve ____ through the test and was the first to hand in his paper. With a look of ____, Miss Wilma took his paper and began to look it over.
Miss Wilma’s face was in ____ shock! She glanced up at Steve, then ____, then up. The smartest boy in the seventh grade had just passed his first test!
From that moment, nothing was the same for Steve. He discovered that not only could he remember and understand_____, but he could translate what he learned into his life. He became______.
After high school, Steve enlisted in the Navy, and he had a(n)_____military career. During his naval years, he inspired many young people who might not have _____themselves without him.
A _____took place within the heart of a boy all because of one teacher, who ____.
1.A.missing B.failing C.passing D.skipping
2.A.tested B.classified C.separated D.reflected
3.A.questions B.effects C.lessons D.results
4.A.fills B.presses C.breaks D.destroys
5.A.stopped B.hesitated C.interrupted D.shouted
6.A.dropped B.raised C.covered D.closed
7.A.strangely B.steadily C.severely D.secretly
8.A.helpless B.stubborn C.flexible D.clumsy
9.A.Commonly B.Unwillingly C.Particularly D.Suddenly
10.A.quiz B.chance C.speech D.presentation
11.A.slept B.looked C.lived D.hurried
12.A.disappointment B.surprise C.satisfaction D.encouragement
13.A.adequate B.total C.precious D.absurd
14.A.down B.away C.out D.back
15.A.homework B.grades C.knowledge D.subjects
16.A.talented B.lazy C.outstanding D.rough
17.A.tiring B.ordinary C.hardworking D.successful
18.A.relied on B.looked after C.turned to D.believed in
19.A.competition B.choice C.change D.campaign
20.A.waited B.listened C.desired D.cared
Do you think you’ve lost your inspiration? Maybe the ups and downs of life and work have affected you. You're not alone. The majority of people across the world are trying newer and easier ways to get inspired. 1.They start thinking to themselves that they are no good. And only a handful of people can stay inspired for life. You can get inspired for life anytime you want. That's the potential of being human.
Alone time is just as important as socializing time. It is important to stay alone for you to understand your thoughts and emotions at a deeper level. 2.It's always inside of you, waiting to be used.
Do you have goals? If you don't, now is the time to write them down. A person without goals has no direction. And he or she can never know if he or she is making progress or not. Create your life goals and then break them down to yearly goals, monthly goals, weekly goals and daily goals, You can even go deeper to hourly goals.3.
When socializing, listen to the stories of other people, You’ll be happy to realize how fortunate you really are. Most of the people around you have gone through things you might never imagine. 4. Listen to their stories and how they settled their problems. You can also read an inspiring book or watch a movie to get the inspiration you need to move forward.
5. If you’re lost your inspiration, you can put to practice these tips any time. It's time to start living with passion.
A. Inspiration comes from inside.
B. Inspiration also comes from your success.
C. But they give up along the way gradually.
D. And there they are standing in front of you.
E. Everyone needs inspiration to succeed in life.
F. But they always keep their experiences a secret.
G. Having a sense of direction will keep you inspired.
In the classic marriage vow (誓约), couples promise to stay together in sickness and in health. But a new study finds that the risk of divorce among older couples rises when the wife- not the husband –becomes seriously ill.
“Married women diagnosed with a serious health condition may find themselves struggling with the impact of their disease while also experiencing the stress of divorce, " said researcher Amelia Karraker.
Karraker and co-author Kenzie Latham analyzed 20 years of data on 2, 717 marriages from a study conducted by Indiana University since 1992. At the time of the first interview, at least one of the partners was over the age of 50.
The researchers examined how the onset (发生) of four serious physical illnesses affected marriages. They found that, overall, 31% of marriages ended in divorce over the period studied. The incidence of new chronic ( 慢性的) illness onset increased over time as well, with more husbands than wives developing serious health problems.
“We found that women are doubly vulnerable to marital break-up in the face of illness,” Karraker said, "They’re more likely to be widowed, and if they’re the ones who become ill, they’re more likely to get divorced.
While the study didn't assess why divorce is more likely when wives but not husbands become seriously ill. Karraker offers a few possible reasons. “Gender norms and social expectations about caregiving may make it more difficult for men to provide care to sick spouses(配偶),” Karraker said. "And because of the imbalance in marriage markets, especially in older ages, divorced men have more choices among prospective partners than divorced women.”
Given the increasing concern about health care costs for the aging population, Karraker believes policymakers should be aware of the relationship between disease and risk of divorce.
“Offering support services to spouses caring for their other halves may reduce marital stress and prevent divorce at older ages.” she said. “But it's also important to recognize that the pressure to divorce may be health-related and that sick ex-wives may need additional care and services to prevent worsening health and increased health costs.”
1.What can we learn about marriage vows from the passage?
A.They may not guarantee a lasting marriage.
B.They are not taken seriously any more.
C.They are as binding as they used to be.
D.They may help couples tide over hard times.
2.What did Karraker and co-author Kenzie Latham find about elderly husbands?
A.They are generally not good at taking care of themselves.
B.They can become increasingly vulnerable to serious illnesses.
C.They can develop different kinds of illnesses just like their wives.
D.They are more likely to contract serious illnesses than their wives.
3.Why is it more difficult for men to take care of their sick spouses according to Karraker?
A.They are more accustomed to receiving care.
B.They find it more important to make money for the family.
C.They think it more urgent to fulfill their social obligations.
D.They expect society to do more of the job.
4.What does Karraker think is also important?
A.Reducing marital stress on wives.
B.Stabilizing old couples' relations.
C.Providing extra care for divorced women.
D.Making men pay for their wives’ health costs.
When she first started learning about the climate change from one of her elders, Fawn Sharp was invited on a helicopter flight over the the Olympic Mountains to survey the Mount Anderson glacier. But the glacier was gone, melted by the warming climate. Sharp had a deep sense of loss when she discovered the glacier wasn't there anymore.
Loss is a growing issue for people working and living on the front lines of climate change. And that gave Jennifer Wren Atkinson, a full-time lecturer at the university of Washionton Bothell, US, an idea for a class.
This term, she taught students on the Bothell campus about the emotional burdens of environmental studies. She used the experiences of Native American tribes(部落), scientists and activists, and asked her 24 students to face the reality that there is no easy fix--that “this is such an intractable problem that they're going to be dealing with it for the rest of their lives.”
Student Cody Dillon used to be a climate science skeptic(怀疑论者)， Then he did his own reading and research，and changed his mind.
Dillon wasn't going into environmental work- he was a computer-science major. Yet, the potential for a worldwide environmental catastrophe seemed so real to him five years ago that he quit his job and became a full-time volunteer for an environmental group that worked on restoration projects.
Six months into the work he decided that Atkinson’s class was just what he was looking for--a place where he could discuss his concerns about a changing climate.
Atkinson said she hopes the class helped her students prepare themselves for the amount of environmental loss that will happen over their lifetimes .
“We are already changing the planet--so many species are going to be lost, displaced or massively impacted, "she said, “The future isn't going to be what they imagined.”
1.Why did the author mention the case of Fawn Sharp?
A.To lay a basis for Fawn Sharp’s further research.
B.To prove Fawn Sharp's work is similar to Atkinson's.
C.To lead into the issue of loss caused by climate change.
D.To show scientists’ concern about the Mount Anderson glacier.
2.What's the main purpose of Atkinson’s class?
A.To explore how different people deal with climate change.
B.To get students more concemed about the environmental Issue.
C.To find solutions to the environmental issue of Olympic Mountains.
D.To teach students how to conduct research about environment.
3.Which of the following best explains "intractable" underlined in Paragraph Three?
A.Simple. B.Difficult.
C.Common. D.Interesting.
4.How did Atkinsons class influence Dillon?
A.It made him work as a part-time volunteer for restoration Projects.
B.It made him realize a planet-wide climate disaster would happen.
C.It encouraged him to be more involved in environmental protection.
D.It discouraged him from protecting the environment.
