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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As the saying goes, chances favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.

I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Lucky, my best friend stopped me and pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was fully preparing and tried my best. As a result, I was selected but became an important player on our school team.

From this, I am firmly convinced that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared

 

1. favored →favor 2. experience →experiences 3. as 后加a 4. play →playing 5. Lucky →Luckily 6. which →that 7. on去掉 8. preparing →prepared 9. but →and 10. I →we 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。作者用自己打排球的经历证明了机会青睐于有准备的人。 1.考查时态。句意:俗话说,机会青睐于有准备的人。本句是一句谚语,俗语, 时态应用一般现在时,故将favored 改为favor。 2.考查名词。句意:我从我的一次经历中学到了这一点。本句中的experience意为“经历”,是可数名词,应该加s,故将experience改为experiences。 3.考查冠词。句意: 我没有被选为我们学校排球队的一员。本句中member为可数名词,泛指会员,且member首字母发音为辅音音素。所以应在前面加冠词a,故as 后加a。 4. 考查动名词做宾语。句意:因此,我决定放弃打排球。本句中give up短语后接动名词做宾语,意为“放弃做某事”,故将play改为playing。 5.考查副词。句意:幸运的是,我最好的朋友阻止了我,并指出是我的懒惰和准备不足导致了我的失败。本句中Lucky在句子修饰整个句子,中做状语,故将Lucky改为 Luckily。 6. 考查强调句。It is/was +被强调部分+that…为强调句型,去掉It is/was和that,句子仍然成立。本句去掉It is/was和that,句子变为my laziness and poor preparation led to my failure,句子成立,故为强调句型,故将which改为that。 7. 考查介词。句意:从那以后,我每天都练习打排球。Every day为作为时间状语修饰整个句子,不需要介词,故on去掉。 8.考查过去分词。句意:当另一次选拔到来的时候,我已经做好了充分的准备,尽了最大的努力。本句中的preparing为was的表语,意为准备好的,应用过去分词形式,be prepared“准备好的”。故将preparing 改为prepared。 9.考查并列连词。句意:结果,我被选中,成为我们学校球队的重要球员。本句为并列句,两句之间的关系为并列关系,故将but改为and。 10. 考查代词一致。本句that从句中的主语为we,而后面的as long as为that从句中的从句,所以as long as从句主要和we保持一致,故将I改为we。
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