假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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Last winter vacation，I went to Hainan with my parents on air. We first went to the beach. The sky was clearly，the sea was blue and the beach was very beautiful. What was impressed me most was diving. I saw so much colorful tropical fishes. It was so amazing. Then we pay a visit to the Ends of the Earth，which I had dreamed of go to. We appreciated the beautiful scenery all the way and took many photo. During the visit，I tasted various delicious local foods，among that I liked sea food most. The people there were friendly and smiling faces were around us all the way，which made us exciting.
We had a wonderful time there and it was unforgettable journey. I look forward to travelling there again.
语法填空
The Legend(传奇) of the White Snake is a famous tale among 1.(folk) in ancient China. It has since been presented in a number of major Chinese operas，films and television series. The earliest attempt to record the story 2. printed form appears in Feng Menglong's Stories to Caution the World.
The legend happened near the West Lake of Hangzhou. Visitors 3. admire this beautiful spot may still remember the story. More 4.(important)，a huge number of ancient traditional customs 5.(keep) in this legend have made it one of the oral heritages (遗产) containing the most abundant folk customs in China. And the story 6. (count) as one of China's Four Great Folktales now，the others 7.(be) Lady Meng Jiang，Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai，and The Cowherd and the Weaving Maid.
The Legend of the White Snake is handed down from generation to generation through 8.(variety) ways until now. It is so classical that there has been more than one 9.(adapt) and performance. This tale has become a symbol of Chinese folk literature and has earned 10. international recognition.
阅读短文，根据要求完成下面各小题。
You can seldom see homeless people on the street.So what could you do if you want to help them? Here are some ways.
Donate(捐赠) money.The easiest way to help the homeless is to donate your money.When you want to do that，you can donate your money to local organizations.Most charity organizations know where the most help is needed.
Donate things.Donating your used or new things is another easy way to help.Donate these things to local organizations which help the homeless or give them to homeless people you see often.The best things to donate include things like: professional clothing，new socks...
Provide food.52.There are lots of ways that you can help homeless people get food.You can donate fresh fruits and vegetables to local soup kitchens.You can also drop off bananas，apples，or sandwiches.
Call emergency(紧急)services.If you see someone who may be a danger to themselves or others，call emergency services.53.If someone is clearly having a serious problem，call for help also. If someone is in danger because of weather conditions，call Emergency Services also.
A)．50和51根据短文内容简要回答问题;
B)．52和53将短文中画线的句子译成汉语。
C)．54小题请给短文拟一个适当的标题。
1.What is the easiest way to help the homeless?
________________________________________________________________________
2.Where can you donate your used or new things?
________________________________________________________________________
3.________________________________________________________________________
4.________________________________________________________________________
5.________________________________________________________________________
A learned man always has a lot of riches in himself.
Simonides，a famous Greek poet，once made a tour around the well－known cities of Asia.Years later，he decided to_____ to his native land by sea.
However，he boarded a ship，which got _____ in a terrible storm.Together with its own poor condition，the ship began to _____ into the sea.Some passengers were busy _____ together their bags，and others _____ belongings.To everyone's surprise，Simonides was a(n) _____.One who was _____ curious，asked，“ Are you going to save _____ of your property，Simonides？” He made a reply，“All my possessions are _____ me.”
While a few made their ______ by swimming，the majority，being weighed down by their burdens，disappeared in the sea.______，some thieves appeared，and stole ______ the few lucky people had saved，leaving them nothing.
Clazomenae，an ancient city，chanced to be near the beach.Here lived a wealthy man ______ the pursuits(追求) of literature.He had often read the poems of Simonides，and was a very great ______ of him though he had never seen Simonides.______，Simonides was saved by this man shortly after he got to the beach.Knowing who he was from their brief conversation，the man ______ Simonides into his house with the greatest pleasure，and ______ him with clothes，money，and attendants.The other______ meanwhile were carrying their bowls，begging for food in the same city.One day，Simonides ______ to meet them.With much sympathy(同情)，Simonides remarked，“ I told you that all my property was about me; what you have ______ to save is lost now.”
1.A. get B. come C. visit D. return
2.A. caught B. hit C. struck D. seized
3.A. break B. drown C. sink D. fall
4.A. keeping B. gathering C. joining D. carrying
5.A. common B. formal C. precious D. previous
6.A. exception B. example C. fool D. millionaire
7.A. slightly B. gradually C. extremely D. generally
8.A. nothing B. none C. few D. no one
9.A. of B. around C. about D. for
10.A. escape B. effect C. effort D. attempt
11.A. In fact B. In brief C. After all D. Worse still
12.A. that B. which C. what D. when
13.A. related to B. adapted to C. determined to D. devoted to
14.A. adviser B. admirer C. listener D. buyer
15.A. Unluckily B. Frequently C. Naturally D. Fortunately
16.A. ordered B. invited C. forced D. begged
17.A. afforded B. offered C. showed D. provided
18.A. survivors B. writers C. stealers D. villagers
19.A. hoped B. happened C. managed D. demanded
20.A. struggled B. failed C. encouraged D. succeeded
A child can be molded (塑造) in the way that you want him or her to be.For giving the best education to the child，it is very important to teach him or her in a positive atmosphere.1.So to let a young child have patience is very important.
To do this，first of all，educators need to establish a sense of trust for children.2.However，as the child grows，it becomes easier to introduce the practice of patience.It is often seen that a child is able to practice learning patience with a positive attitude.Teaching the lessons of patience to children can be milestones of development of different age levels of children.3.
If you really want to teach your kid these basic qualities，there are so many creative ways which might help you.4.If parents start telling them patience in their day－to－day life，children do catch it and implement (实施) it in their lives.Babies can sense，see and hear reactions.Small children are already very aware of their surroundings and more sensitive to actions and reactions adults make.
Parents can show them examples of enduring patience and introduce them to famous people.5.Teach them how to handle the situations with more patience so that they can become a better person later on.
A．How can you teach patience lessons to a child?
B．Every parent dreams his child can practice a bit of patience.
C．It also reflects what a child is able to do and cannot yet do.
D．Following heroes' lifestyles could be an interesting method too.
E．It is difficult to teach a child how to have patience when he is young.
F．Children really like doing whatever they want to do without being instructed.
G．The best way to sow the seeds of patience in children is through their parents.
Amber has a degree in business management and economics.She put her skills to good use when she spent eleven months in Cambodia (柬埔寨) through World Hope International as a volunteer working with a local micro－finance (小额信贷) company to help the poor get financial services.
Amber's first few weeks in Cambodia was busy and difficult as she tried to learn the language，understand the culture and get used to her new surroundings.Her volunteer service involved working with a local micro－finance company.In addition to writing plans，preparing international marketing materials and building donor (捐赠人) relations，Amber met with company clients.During these visits she learned how the small loans they received transformed their lives.She learned first－hand the benefits of micro－finance，which by providing farmers and small－business owners with affordable working capital (such as money to buy a sewing machine) helped them to earn their way out of poverty (贫穷)．
“It never stopped amazing me when a client would show me a new home that was built because of a loan he received or the way a client's business had improved and thus allowed his children to be sent to school，” Amber said.
Amber recalled that one client called Paul walked her all around his house，pointing to what he had done with each of eight loans he'd received.He explained how every loan had improved his family's quality of life.Amber said he was one of the hardest－working men she had ever met.He had suffered greatly in the Cambodian Civil War and became disabled，but not once did he let it kill his dreams of realizing a better life for his family.His latest purchase，a sound system that he rented out for weddings and other parties doubled his income!
Amber said，“Living and working in Cambodia helped me see the world in new ways and made me aware of the hardship and suffering that many people around the world face every day.Those eleven months were some of the most meaningful months of my life.”
1.What's the best title for this passage?
A.World Hope International
B.Benefits of Micro－finance
C.Amber's Volunteer Experience in Cambodia
D.Poverty in Developing Countries
2.Amber's volunteer work in Cambodia included all of the following things EXCEPT ________．
A.teaching the language
B.meeting with company clients
C.writing plans
D.building donor relations
3.It can be inferred from the passage that ________．
A.Amber met with no difficulties after she arrived in Cambodia
B.Amber is the leader of World Hope International
C.few children go to school because there aren't enough schools in Cambodia
D.many local people in Cambodia changed their lives with the loans
4.Which of the following statements about Paul is TRUE?
A.Each of the loans he had received helped him a lot.
B.He was poor because he didn't work as hard as others.
C.He became disabled because of a car accident.
D.He bought a sound system for his wedding.
