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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划横线,并在该下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A photo on my desk always takes me back to the moment that I gave a talent show for foreign friend. In the picture, I can be seen delicate performing Erhu. When I introduced myself at English, the audience applauded encourage me. I was no longer nervous. I devoted myself wholeheartedly to play. My performance was quite a success. Before the performance, an American was named Amy, who was of my age, sang the song God Is a Girl to me. We even make a deal that we would teach each other my mother tongues.

 

1.that→when ;2.friend→friends;3.delicate→delicately ;4.at→in ;5.applauded后加to;6.play→playing ;7.Before→After;8.去掉was ;9.make→made;10.my→ our 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。作者桌上的一张照片让她想起为外国朋友才艺表演的那一刻,作者回忆了表演的过程。 1.考查定语从句。句意:桌上的一张照片总是让我想起我为外国朋友举办才艺表演的那一刻。此处moment是先行词,在后面的定语从句中作时间状语,故把that改成when。 2.考查名词复数。句意:桌上的一张照片总是让我想起我为外国朋友举办才艺表演的那一刻。此处friend是可数名词,外国朋友不止一个,所以要用名词复数,故把friend改成friends。 3.考查副词。句意:在这幅画中,我可以看到我正在演奏二胡。此处是副词delicately修饰动词performing,故把delicate改成delicately。 4.考查介词。句意:当我用英语自我介绍时,观众鼓掌鼓励我。固定搭配:in+语言,“用某种语言”。故把at改成in。 5.考查动词不定式作目的状语。句意:当我用英语自我介绍时,观众鼓掌鼓励我。此处是动词不定式作目的状语。故在applauded后加to。 6.考查动名词。句意:我全身心地投入到游戏中。固定搭配:devote oneself to sth./doing sth.“致力于某事或做某事”。故把play改成playing。 7.考查介词。句意:表演结束后,一个叫艾米的美国人,她和我同龄,给我唱了一首歌《上帝是女孩》。结合句意可知把Before改成After。 8.考查过去分词作后置定语。句意:表演结束后,一个叫艾米的美国人,她和我同龄,给我唱了一首歌《上帝是女孩》。此处是过去分词作后置定语,故把was去掉。 9.考查时态。句意:我们甚至达成协议,我们要互相教母语。这里指过去的事情,所以用一般过去时态,故把make改成made。 10.考查形容词性物主代词。句意:我们甚至达成协议,我们要互相教母语。此处指作者和Amy互相教母语,所以应该用“our”,故把my改成our。  
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