假定你是李华,你的同学Jack来自英国,请根据以下写作要点写一篇周记记述你和家人...

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today I'd like to introduce my most favorite book to you- Five Thousand Years of Chinese Nation, which belonged to history book.

Selected important and famous figures and events in the history of China, the author organizes and cuts it according to historical materials. He writes with modern language to make them easy understand. This book opens a history gate to me but I feel more confident about my own country. I'm proud of being the Chinese and I will make greater efforts to build a more powerful country and make Chinese history more brilliantly. I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experiences. I do hope you will like it!Enjoy reading!

阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

Procrastination(拖延)is the avoidance of doing a task which needs to be done .Basically what that means is putting off until tomorrow what can be done today.Procrastination may result in late or incomplete work. With procrastination, many a result1.(occur). Procrastination has its advantages and2.(drawback), but too much procrastination can be harmful. Often we try to hide our avoidance by being very busy doing interesting, and even useful things,3.do not contribute to the main goal .One example would be writing this paper the night before the deadline. By waiting,the grammar, spelling, and even my name may4.(overlook) in a rush. This problem .can be solved by not procrastinating and allowing yourself enough time to proofread.

People procrastinate for5.range of reasons. Some people are often6.(forget)and procrastinate on getting the task7.(do)on time. By procrastinating a person could face a bigger task: the8.(origin) task plus possible new problems thanks 9.delay. Another reason is to avoid dislike. People who worry too much about what other people think of them, often feel embarrassed or worthless. When they believe they will not present10.(they) adequately, they often withdraw.

    Brenda Bongos was a girl with one big ambition- to play the drums in a band. But a(n)________lay in her way. To be good enough to play in a______, Brenda had to practice a lot, but she lived next-door to lots of_______people in a care home. The sound of beating drums would really annoy them.

Brenda was________. She always tried to find a way of practicing her drums without ________other people. But without success. However,________to practice as much as she could. Brenda________all kinds of ways.

One day, while watching a science documentary, she heard that________cannot travel in space without air. At that moment, Brenda bongos decided to become a________astronaut.

So Brenda built a space________connected with a machine, which drew out all air.Inside was a________of drums. Once inside, Brenda________the machine and played like mad!

It wasn't long before she had become________. Many people came to see her play in her space bubble.________ -afterwards she started giving________out of the bubble,________ Brenda became a real musical astronaut as the government asked her to be part of a space journey, and had gone far beyond her first________of playing drums in a band.

When asked how she had________all this, she said, "If those old people next-door hadn't________so much to me, I wouldn’t have gone to such ________to find a solution, and none of this would have ever happened.

1.A.obstacle B.question C.figure D.hand

2.A.match B.band C.talks D.scene

3.A.sick B.local C.elderly D.poor

4.A.delightful B.wonderful C.awful D.respectful

5.A.waking B.reaching C.embarrassing D.bothering

6.A.scared B.thrilled C.determined D.encouraged

7.A.tested B.tried C.played D.found

8.A.light B.sound C.air D.heat

9.A.musical B.classical C.medical D.physical

10.A.bag B.bubble C.container D.aircraft

11.A.set B.pair C.couple D.part

12.A.turned on B.put on C.got on D.held on

13.A.mature B.skillful C.famous D.confident

14.A.Hardly B.Shortly C.Rarely D.Swiftly

15.A.advice B.lessons C.speeches D.concerts

16.A.Suddenly B.Generally C.Finally D.Fortunately

17.A.effort B.performance C.ambition D.attempt

18.A.gained B.done C.got D.achieved

19.A.mattered B.related C.owed D.talked

20.A.classes B.places C.difficulties D.lengths

This app could checkmate dating game

George Church, a leading professor of genetics at Harvard University, is planning to create a dating app that can match users based on their genetic agreement.

1.Two people considering going on a date take out their smartphones first and check each other's genetic table to see whether there are any undesirable genes that cannot be determined from outward appearance. Genetic deficiencies that might lead to diseases in offspring will be screened out first. Heart disease? No. Immune deficiency? No.Hemophilia? No.

2.Eye color, height preference, curly or straight hair. In the end, only those with the genes that promise the users a perfect child will date.

It sounds terrible. If the app becomes a reality, it could split people into different camps based on the genes they carry.

Some might argue that even now people are not wholly equal to each other-there are the rich and the poor to begin with. 3.Genes, on the other hand, are fixed, with no hope of changing at least in the near future.

Church didn’t have this divisive goal in mind. In an interview, he said he hopes to let people know the genetic deficiencies(基因缺陷) in their mating partners so as to minimize the chances of giving birth to children with diseases.4.

The problem is not so much with genetic technology, which can help people find possible diseases before birth, and possibly even cure them through gene editing. But it would be a mistake to let everybody know of each other s genetic information and make choices on that basis.

5.Gene sequencing(基因排序)is becoming increasingly popular with many people choosing to know their genes better. It is reaching a stage when it becomes urgent for the law to protect such information and avoid possible leaks.

A. He will make it.

B. This is how it works.

C. That in turn calls for legislation(法律;法规).

D. The app will be popular with different people.

E. Then comes the turn of harmless appearance characteristics.

F. But he will not be able to stop the above- mentioned possibility.

G. However, one can always struggle to improve one's quality of life.

    With a bag on his back and his hands in his pockets, Ye Tian sneaked around the fence,trying to find an entrance to the abandoned coking works without being noticed.

However, a guard dog gave Ye second thoughts. I'm not afraid of the gatekeeper-at least I can negotiate with him. But a dog? Forget it. I'll find another way. "While planning his special(uninvited)visit to the Beijing site, the 25-year-old did some research, but still failed to locate the entrance.

Ye is among the thousands who are interested in “taking adventures”, which they call urban exploration, or “urbex”. The aim is to explore structures-usually abandoned ruins or “hidden components of the man-made environments”.

Venturing into abandoned structures is one of the most common examples of urban exploration. Although targets vary from one country to another, high-profile abandoned structures usually include amusement parks, factories, power plants, missile silos, fallout shelters, hospitals, asylums, schools and houses.

Urban explorers are interested in visiting such sites, as they can discover “other parts of a city”and get to understand its history from a different angle.

Ye, who worked as an intern for a German company in Beijing for six months, said he enjoyed the contrast between the city's two sides- modern and crowded, compared with old-fashioned and silent-and wanted to learn more about the capital during his short stay.

Ye said that he was able to finally sneak in through another entrance, yet he was still asked to leave by a gatekeeper shortly after. But he then managed to get into a newly built residential block, climbed to the top and took a picture of the factory ruins at sunset.

“I will come back another day,” he said.

1.What do we know about Ye Tian in the passage?

A.He enters a place easily every time.

B.He loves exploring natural environment.

C.He is afraid of nothing.

D.He is interested in old buildings.

2.What made Ye Tian fail to enter the entrance first?

A.The fence. B.The gatekeeper.

C.The dog. D.The bag.

3.Why are the urbe explorers keen on visiting the abandoned structures?

A.Because they can do all the research.

B.Because they can move from one country to another.

C.Because they can visit different kinds of places.

D.Because they can know the history of the city.

4.As an urbex explorer, what characteristic is probably most necessary?

A.Hesitation. B.Thoughtfulness.

C.Determination. D.Inspiration.