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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

On the eve of the National Day, I together with a lot of people sing loudly and danced excitedly in the Tiananmen Square, celebrated the happy moment. Among us there were a large number of foreigners as well too. In the past few year our great motherland has been developing very fast that it gains a great reputation in the world , which attracts more foreign people to travel and study in China. And gradual they fall in love with the country and are determining to settle here too. All of us are very amazed or happy at these great changes because it really make our life much better. As consequence , we decide to work harder than ever before for a beautiful future of our country.

 

sing→sang celebrated→celebrating 把too去掉 year→years very→so gradual→gradually determing→determined or→and it→they As后加a 【解析】 这是一篇夹叙夹议文。文章讲述了作者国庆节前夕在天安门广场跳舞,许多外国人也在其中,作者感叹中国的发展壮大。 第一处:考查时态。根据时间状语On the eve of the National Day和全文时态可知,跳舞发生在过去,用一般过去式。故将sing改为sang。 第二处:考查非谓语动词。句意:国庆节前夕,我和许多人一起在天安门广场上又唱又跳,庆祝这快乐的时刻。分析句式可知,celebrated the happy moment 该部分是做句子的状语,根据句意可知,是正在跳舞,主语和动词celebrate是主动关系,用现在分词形式。故将celebrated改为celebrating。 第三处:考查副词。句意:我们中间也有许多外国人。as well和too重复使用,都表示“也”的意思,用于句末。去掉一个词,所以去掉too。故将too去掉。 第四处:考查名词。句意:在过去的几年里,我们伟大的祖国发展得很快,在世界上赢得了很高的声誉,这吸引了更多的外国人来中国旅游和学习。根据句意可知,是在过去的几年里,因此,year用复数形式。故将year改为years。 第五处:考查固定结构。so…that“如此…..以至于”的意思,引导结果状语从句。这是个固定结构,故将very改为so。 第六处:考查副词。句意:渐渐地,他们爱上了这个国家,并决定在这里定居。gradual在此处是修饰动词短语fall in love,需用其副词形式。故将gradual改为gradually。 第七处:考查固定用法。be determined to do sth“下定决心做某事”是固定结构,故将determining改为determined。 第八处:考查连词。句意:我们所有人都对这些巨大的变化感到惊讶和高兴,因为它真的使我们的生活变得更好。根据句意可知,前后之间是并列关系,用and连接。故将or改为and。 第九处:考查代词。句意同上。根据句意可知,此处的指代的是changes,需用it的复数形式,故将it改为they。 第十处:考查冠词。句意:因此,我们决定比以往任何时候都更加努力地工作,为了我们国家的美好未来。as a consequence是个固定短语,意思是“因此,结果”。故在As后加a。
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4.A.Unusually B.However C.Actually D.Therefore

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14.A.trouble B.plan C.heart D.sadness

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16.A.because B.when C.unless D.before

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18.A.ruin B.develop C.oppose D.change

19.A.character B.reputation C.study D.life

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Eat healthy foods. Learn what foods are good for you, and how much is the right amount. Eating right helps you look your best. When you treat your body right, you feel good about yourself.

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B. Meet your body’s needs.

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1.The underlined word “inhale” in Paragraph 2 probably means “__________”.

A.blow away B.spread out

C.give off D.breathe in

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B.E-cigarettes are not bad to smokers’ health.

C.E-cigarettes are less likely to cause nicotine addiction.

D.E-cigarettes do more harm to smokers’ brains than their lungs.

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B.Vaping makes them look cool.

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D.They think it’s safer and cheaper than smoking.

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D.They take e-sports just as a way of entertainment.

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B.The popularity of e-sports in the UK.

C.How e-sports are different from traditional sports.

D.How to start a career as a professional e-sports gamer.

3.What do many people believe e-sports are sports?

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B.They share rules and strategies with other sports.

C.It takes players time and money to learn and practice.

D.Players need to develop physical skills to perform well.

4.What is the author’s attitude toward the future of e-sports?

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