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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有5处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改5处，多者(从第6处起)不计分。

I’m a 18-year old boy from Sydney, Australia. Recently I had my first ride on a long-distance train. We got on in Sydney and we got off in Alice Springs, more than four thousands kilometers away. The food on the train was great. We eat great meals cooked by experts. For the first a few hundred kilometers of the journey, the scenery was colourful. After that, we saw abandoned farms which built over a century ago.

阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

1. is interesting to look at differences between schools in different countries. The relationship between teachers and students in many European countries is quite formal. This is true of France, Germany, and Spain, 2. respect for the teacher is considered very important. However, this relationship is much 3. (friendly) and more relaxed.

Another important difference is whether schools are state schools or private schools. State schools 4. (pay) for by the government, but in private schools, the parents pay for the 5. (educate) of their children. Most students in Germany and France go to state schools, which are very good.

    The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.- Eleanor Roosevelt.

My home is a place of great beauty and agricultural richness, as well as of war and natural disasters. When I was only fourteen years old, I was filled with ____ in spite of the terrible surroundings. The families living here, who tried to make their living from the land,____ great losses.

I felt sorry especially for the children , but I ____ to be hopeless, I decided that where I was, I could do ____ to help them. I began knocking on every door and saying to each person who ____ my knock, "I know that you are ____ and give the birds that come to your yard a little ____. Please consider me your bird. Give me only a handful of rice each week when I come to your ____ . I will take it to the temple where it can be given to the  ___ children."

No one seemed to mind giving me a handful of rice, even ____ they had little themselves. On Sunday, I would go to the ____ and give my handfuls of rice to the monks to give away to the children.

One day, I came to a house that had ____ kinds to give. I told my story and asked if I could be their bird. The woman called her daughters, and ____ gave me fifty cents, as well as the handful of rice! I began to ask for change and rice from the other "bird feeders", and they gave them to me. Everyone was happy to help those who were suffering, even ___ only this small way. The temple was soon able to help everyone who came to them for food and clothing. "Consider me your bird." My childish idea had not stopped the war, but anyway, it was ____ some peace.

1.A.sorrow B.hope C.comfort D.happiness

2.A.suffered B.survived C.covered D.made

3.A.wanted B.failed C.refused D.stopped

4.A.something B.everything C.anything D.nothing

5.A.said B.replied C.spoke D.answered

6.A.glad B.kind C.rich D.poor

7.A.water B.money C.nest D.rice

8.A.temple B.room C.door D.garden

9.A.brave B.hungry C.promising D.nervous

10.A.where B.that C.so D.when

11.A.village B.hometown C.temple D.house

12.A.much B.little C.many D.few

13.A.every B.each C.neither D.none

14.A.by B.with C.on D.in

15.A.creating B.mending C.shopping D.managing

    Everyone wants to be respected. Gaining the respect from your friends might not always be easy. But with understanding and patience, you can become someone who is respected.

Build your self-confidence by exploring the things you are good at, such as drawing, cycling or singing and devoting energy and time to them. 1.

Speak with honesty. Don’t think low of others or talk about them behind their backs. 2. However, they probably won’t respect you much after the conversation ends.

Listen actively to what your friends say. 3. During conversations with friends, sometimes repeating what they’ve said, asking questions and expressing your feelings about what they have said will make you a good listener.

4. Try not to be overly critical. If a friend comes to you with a new idea, help him/her explore how he/she can make it a reality. If another friend is feeling down, give him/her words of support and let him/her know you’re always there for him/her.

Keep your word and be trustworthy. 5. If you agree to meet a friend at noon, show up at noon. If you promise a friend you will watch her children for the evening, follow though, If you fail to meet your duty, your friends might become more careful of you, and you’ll probably feel uneasy around them until you can regain their trust.

A. Treat others the way they treat you.

B. Active listening helps create understanding.

C. It is easier for confident people to gain respect.

D. Encourage your friends to the best they can be.

E. People respect those who do what they say they will do.

F. Respect explains who you are and how you are remembered.

G. Your friends might be interested in your conversation for a very short time.

    After a busy day of work and play, the body needs to rest. Sleep is necessary for good health. During this time, the body recovers from the activities of the previous day. The rest that you get while sleeping enables your body to prepare itself for the next day.

There are four levels of sleep, each being a little deeper than the one before. As you sleep, your muscles relax little by little. Your heart beats more slowly, and your brain slows down. After you reach the fourth level, your body moves back and forth from one level of sleep to the other.

Although your mind slows down, from time to time you will dream. Scientists who study sleep say that when dreaming occurs, your eyeballs begin to move more quickly (Although your eyelids are closed). This stage of sleep is called REM, which stands for rapid eye movement.

If you have trouble falling asleep, some people recommend breathing very deeply. Other people believe that drinking warm milk will help make you drowsy.

There is also an old suggestion the counting sheep will put you to sleep!

1.A good title for this passage is ____.

A.Sleep B.Dreams

C.Good Health D.Work and Rest

2.The word drowsy in the last paragraph means ____.

A.sick B.a little sleepy

C.stand up D.lie down

3.During REM, ____.

A.you are restless B.you never dream

C.your eyes move quickly D.your eyes are moving fast before dreaming

4.The average number of hours of sleep that an adult needs is ______ .

A.about six hours B.around ten hours

C.about eight hours D.not described here