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请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有三处。每处错误仅涉及...

请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有三处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

This evening I went to Jim’s house to sing with some of my good friend, and we really had a happily time.

It was because of I got a bad score in the math exam that I had been in a low mood for the whole afternoon. But finally, I accepted Jim’s invitation. It was the first time that I have sung with my friends. All my friends enjoy singing, while I didn’t dare to show my voice. I was afraid I couldn’t sing well. After while, my friends noticed this. With our encouragement, I picked up the microphone and sang an English songs, whose name is “ I believe I can fly”. With the song went on, I cheered up and recovered my confidence gradual.

 

1. friend→friends;2.happily→happy;3.去掉of;4.have→had;5.enjoy→enjoyed;6.在while前加a;7.our→their;8.songs→song;9.went→going;10.gradual→gradually 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述作者去吉姆家和朋友们度过的一个愉快地晚上。 1.考查名词复数。句意:今天晚上我去吉姆家和我的一些好朋友一起唱歌,我们真的度过了一段快乐的时光。根据some of……“……中的一些”,可知此处名词用复数形式,故把friend改成friends。 2.考查形容词。句意:今天晚上我去吉姆家和我的一些好朋友一起唱歌,我们真的度过了一段快乐的时光。固定词组:have a happy time“有一段幸福时光”。此处用形容词修饰名词time。故把happily改成happy。 3.考查状语从句。句意:因为我数学考试考砸了,所以整个下午我都情绪低落。词组because of后面跟名词、代词宾格或动名词作宾语,而because是连词,后面跟完整的句子,引导原因状语从句,此处I got a bad score in the math exam是一个完整的句子,用because引导原因状语从句,故把because of中的of去掉。 4.考查固定句式。句意:这是我第一次和朋友们一起唱歌。固定句式:It was the first(second…) time that 主语+过去完成时态+……“某人第几次做某事”。前面是was则后面的从句中用过去完成时态,故把have改成had。 5.考查一般过去时态。句意:我所有的朋友都喜欢唱歌,而我却不敢发声。这里在叙述一件过去的事情,所以句子用一般过去时态,故把enjoy改成enjoyed。 6.考查固定词组。句意:过了一会儿,我的朋友们注意到了这一点。固定词组:after a while“过了一会”,故在while前加a。 7.考查形容词性物主代词。句意:在他们的鼓励下,我拿起麦克风,唱了一首英文歌,歌名是“我相信我能飞”。此处指“朋友们的”鼓励,故把our改成their。 8.考查名词单复数。句意:在他们的鼓励下,我拿起麦克风,唱了一首英文歌,歌名是“我相信我能飞”。这里指“一首歌曲”,故把songs改成song。 9.考查with的独立主格结构。句意:随着歌曲的继续,我振作起来,逐渐恢复了信心。此处是with的独立主格结构,with+宾语+doing,这里the song和go on之间是一种主动关系,是现在分词作宾语补足语,故把went改成going。 10.考查副词。句意:随着歌曲的继续,我振作起来,逐渐恢复了信心。此处recovered是动词,由福词修饰,故把gradual改成gradually。
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