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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As Christmas is coming, I plan to buy something for my parents. What I want to give back is a VIP card for a health club but neither of them is doing enough exercise. My father works hardly as a teacher, spent most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often bury herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on. I want to give them this card to express my love and thanks for them. I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends here. At the same time, I hope that they can take care their health.

 

1.去掉back 2. but → since / because 3. hardly → hard 4. spent → spending 5. bury → buries 6. all → both 7. for → to 8. relaxing → relaxed 9. here → there 10. their前加of 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了圣诞节快到了,作者打算送给父母一张健身俱乐部的贵宾卡作为礼物。父母由于工作或者爱好读书,所以没有时间锻炼身体。作者希望他们能在健身俱乐部放松一下,交更多的朋友,并且保持身体健康。 1. 考查动词。由上文“I plan to buy something for my parents”,可知我打算给父母买些东西,按照逻辑关系,下文应叙述我给父母一张健身俱乐部的贵宾卡,而不是give back“归还”,故去掉back。 2. 考查连接词。前面的句子是作者想送给父母一张健身俱乐部的贵宾卡作为礼物,后面的句子讲的是作者的父母都没有做足够的锻炼。显然后者是前面的一个“原因”,这里是一个原因状语从句,since/because都是“因为”的意思,引导原因状语从句。故将but改为since/because。 3. 考查副词。hardly意为“几乎不”,work hard意为“努力工作”,hard作副词用来修饰动词work,故将hardly改为hard。 4. 考查非谓语动词。句子的谓语动词是work,因此spent在句中是非谓语动词,它与句子主语My father为主动关系,应使用现在分词作状语,故将spent改为spending。 5. 考查主谓一致。句意:我妈妈喜欢读书,经常埋头读书。此处My mother是主语,指人,单数第三人称,句子是一般现在时态,often作副词时意为“经常”,对人称不影响,故将bury改为buries。 6. 考查形容词。both和all都同时具有形容词词性,both用在有两个选择的时候,而all用在有三个或三个以上选择的时候。them指的是我的爸爸和妈妈,故将all 改为both。 7. 考查介词。句意:我送给他们这张卡,表达我对他们爱和感激。show/express one's thanks to sb. for sth.意为“因某事对某人表达谢意”,故将for改为to。 8. 考查形容词。句意: 我希望他们在俱乐部将会很放松,并且在那里能交更多的朋友。relaxed “感到放松的”,常用来修饰人,relaxing“令人放松的”,常用来修饰物。故将relaxing改为relaxed。 9. 考查副词。here意为“这儿”,there意为“那儿”。该句描述的发生在过去的事情,所以该处应表示“我希望他们在那里能交更多的朋友”,故here改为there。 10. 考查固定短语。句意:我希望他们能照顾自己的健康。短语take care of含义为“照顾”,故在their前加of。
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