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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday, I went to the largest bookstore where is near our school to buy a reference book. It was Saturday, so there was many people. Under the help of the shop assistants, I quickly got the book I needed. I was about to leave while I found someone trying to steal a man’s money. Although I was nervous, but I tried to think of a way to help. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to me. I stepped in the man’s foot on purposes. As expected, the man’s scream gives the thief a fright, who quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to him.

 

第一行where→that 第二行was→were 第二行Under→With 第三行while→when 第四行 去掉but 第五行in→on 第五行 purposes→purpose 第六行 gives→gave 第六行 hear→hearing 第七行 him→me 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者昨天去书店买书,结果发现了小偷并机智勇敢的吓走了小偷。 1. 考查定语从句。句意:昨天,我去了学校附近最大的书店买了一本参考书。分析句子可知,此处是一个限定性定语从句,先行词是bookstore为物,先行词前有形容词最高级,且在定语从句中作主语,只能使用关系代词that引导。故把where改为that。 2. 考查主谓一致。句意:那天是星期六,所以有很多人。分析句子可知,此处是there be句型,其谓语动词由后面的名词决定;因其后的名词是many people,故谓语动词应用复数;故把was改为were。 3. 考查固定搭配。句意:店员的帮助下,我很快就得到了我需要的那本书。with the help of…为固定搭配,意为“在……帮助下”。故把Under改为With。 4. 考查固定句型。句意:我正要离开时,突然发现有人想偷一个人的钱。be about to do…when…为固定句型,意为“刚要做……突然……”;分析句意可知,此处表示“我正要离开时,突然发现有人想偷一个人的钱。”故把while改为when。 5. 考查连词。句意:虽然我很紧张,但我还是想办法帮忙。分析句子可知,句中已有连接词although;although不能与but/and/or连用。故去掉but。 6. 考查介词。句意:突然,我想到了一个好主意。我故意踩了那人的脚。分析句意可知,此处表示“我故意踩那个人的脚”,故应该是才在“那个人的脚上而不是脚里”,故把in改为on。 7. 考查名词。句意:突然,我想到了一个好主意。我故意踩了那人的脚。on purpose为固定搭配,意为“故意地”。故把purposes改为purpose。 8. 考查时态。句意:不出所料,这名男子的尖叫声吓了小偷一跳,他迅速走出了商店。分析文章可知,本文叙述的过去发生的事情,故应用一般过去时。故把gives改为gave。 9. 考查动名词。句意:听了我的解释后,那个人笑了,对我表示了极大的感谢。分析句子可知,after为介词,其后应用动词的ing形式,故把hear改为hearing。 10. 考查代词。句意:听了我的解释后,那个人笑了,对我表示了极大的感谢。分析句意可知,那个人应是向作者表示感谢。故把him改为me。  
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