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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1. 格式正确,且每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I had been looking forward to go on holiday for a long time. It finally came and I could do that I had already planned. Fortunately, on the second day of the holiday, my father told me to learn music in the morning and he sent me to a holiday music school. In the afternoon, my mother sent me to the art training centre learn painting. There I met several of my classmates who was also sent to the centre to attend the art courses. After a day’s study, I felt very exhausting and fell asleep the moment when I lay on the bed. I has a dream where my friend and I were playing happily.

 

1.go→going 2.that→what 3.Fortunately →Unfortunately 4.the→an 5.在learn前加to 6.was→were 7.exhausting→exhausted 8.删去when 9.has→ had 10.friend→friends 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者以为能去度假,但是不幸的是,在假期的第二天,父亲告诉她早上送她去一个假日音乐学校学习音乐。下午,去艺术培训中心学习绘画。 1.考查动名词作介词宾语。句意:我盼望去度假已经很久了。根据looking forward to可知此处要用动名词作介词宾语。故将go改为going。 2. 考查宾语从句连接词。句意:它终于到来了,我可以做我已经计划的事了。此处是what引导的句子作do的宾语,what在宾语从句中充当had already planned的宾语。故将that改为what。 3. 考查副词。句意:不幸的是,在假期的第二天,我的父亲告诉我早上要去学习音乐,他送我去一个假日音乐学校。根据内容my father told me to learn music in the morning and he sent me to a holiday music school可知此处表示“不幸的是”,此处副词修饰句子。故将Fortunately改为Unfortunately。 4. 考查冠词。句意:下午,我妈妈送我去艺术培训中心学习绘画。此处表示泛指,“一个艺术培训中心”,名词art training centre,art首字母的发音为元音因素,所以用不定冠词an。故将the改为an。 5. 考查to作目的状语。根据learn painting可知此处表示目的,要用to。故在learn前加to。 6. 考查主谓一致。此处是who引导的定语从句,先行词为my classmates,关系词who,故从句谓语动词要用复数形式。故将was改为were。 7. 考查形容词。句意:经过一天的学习,我感到非常疲惫,一躺在床上就睡着了。此处主语为I,因此要用-ed形式形容词。故将exhausting改为exhausted。 8. 考查时间状语从句从属连词。此处是时间状语从句,但是the moment(立刻,马上,一…就…)和when(一…就,在…时候)都能引导时间状语从句,根据句意“经过一天的学习,我感到非常疲惫,一躺在床上就睡着了”可知,本句为the moment引导的时间状语从句。因此when多余。故将when删去。 9. 考查时态。句意:我做了一个梦,在梦里我的朋友和我玩得很开心。根据文章时态为一般过去时,主语为I。故将has改为had。 10. 考查名词单复数。根据were可知朋友不止一个,要用名词复数形式。故将friend改为friends。
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