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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。

修改在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Though great progress has made in science these years, there are still many people lived in poor conditions. They make their living by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school because they have no enough money to send their children to there. Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing country once said: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to produce child without limit.” Although these few words sound simple enough, but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.

 

第一处: has后加 been 第二处: lived改成living 第三处: thing改成things 第四处: 去掉to 第五处: why之后加do 第六处: on改成in 第七处: us改成we 第八处: child改成children 第九处: 去掉but 第十处: clear改成 clearly 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。文章主要讲了这些年,许多人仍然过着贫穷的生活,并对其原因进行了分析。 第一处:考查语态。“进步”和“取得”之间是被动关系,用被动语态,所以has后加 been。 第二处:考查非谓语动词。因people与live构成主动关系,用现在分词短语修饰名词,所以lived改成living。 第三处: 考查名词单复数。句意:他们靠收集和出售用过的东西谋生。文中指“指用过的东西”,使用复数形式,所以thing改成things。 第四处:考查副词。句意:他们的孩子不能上学,因为他们没有足够的钱送他们的孩子去那里。there是副词,前面不需要用介词,所以去掉to。 第五处:考查句子结构。这是一个特殊疑问句,特殊疑问词后面使用一般疑问的形式,且do you think是插入语,所以why之后加do。 第六处:考查固定词组。句意:答案在于人口爆炸。lie in在于,该词组是固定词组,所以on改成in。 第七处:考查强调句。这是一个强调句,强调的是主语we,us是宾格,不能作主语,所以us改成we。 第八处:考查名词单复数。句意:我们应该为贫穷负责,因为我们过去常常无限制地生儿育女。使用复数形式,表示我们的孩子们,所以child改成children。 第九处:考查固定用法。although不能与but连用,所以去掉but。 第十处:考查副词。用副词修饰动词point,所以clear改成 clearly。  
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