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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Tom is music lover. He knows beats (音乐节拍) quite good. Now, the teenager is used his talent to become a DJ—a person which mixes different music during shows. He often gives shows around his hometown. At shows, Tom had to deal with difficult people. Once, a couple invited him to be the DJ at our party. The husband wanted country music, so his wife asked for pop music. To make them all happy, Tom played music in both styles. After playing at different parties and shows, Tom has become more confident and better at meet people’s needs. Moreover, he has made of enough money to buy set of DJ equipment so he can practice at home.

 

第一处: music前加a 第二处: good→well 第三处:used→using 第四处: which→that/who 第五处: had→has 第六处: our→their 第七处: so→but/while 第八处: all→both 第九处: meet→meeting 第十处:去掉of 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了音乐爱好者汤姆利用他的天赋成为一名DJ,为别人演奏音乐的故事。 第一处:考查冠词。句意:汤姆是个音乐爱好者。lover是可数名词,此处用不定冠词表泛指,music的发音以元音音素开头,故在music前加a。 第二处:考查副词。句意:他很熟悉音乐节拍。修饰动词knows用副词,故good改为well。 第三处:考查时态语态。句意:现在,这个年轻人正在利用他的天赋成为一名DJ,在演出中将不同的音乐混合在一起。the teenager 与use之间是主动关系,is表明用的是现在进行时,此处用现在分词,故used改为using。 第四处:考查定语从句。句意同上,此处为定语从句,关系词指代先行词a person并在从句中作主语,故which改为that/who。 第五处:考查时态和主谓一致。句意:在演出中,汤姆不得不与很难相处的人打交道。陈述的是客观情况,用一般现在时,主语是Tom,谓语动词用第三人称单数形式,故had改为has。 第六处:考查代词。句意:有一次,一对夫妇邀请他在他们的聚会上做DJ。此处指代“一对夫妇的”,表示“他们的”而不是“我们的”,故our改为their。 第七处:考查连词。句意:丈夫想让他演奏乡村音乐,但(而)妻子想让他演奏流行音乐。根据句意可知前后是转折而非因果关系,也可用while表示对比,故so改为but/while。 第八处:考查代词。句意:为了让他们俩都高兴,汤姆演奏了两种风格的音乐。all指“三者及三者以上都”,both指“两者都”,此处指的是“夫妇二人都”,故all改为both。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。句意:在参加了不同的聚会和演出后,汤姆变得更加自信,更善于满足人们的需要。作介词at的宾语用动名词,故meet改为meeting。 第十处:考查介词。句意:而且,他赚了足够的钱买了一套DJ设备,这样他就可以在家练习了。made是及物动词,后面直接接宾语,介词of是多余的,故去掉of。  
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