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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today I am talking to my dad Matthew, my hero. The reason why I admire him is because he starts every day with smile. And his smile always brings happy to my families. He has been looked after us carefully since many years ago. He often encourages me to keep going and not give it up. What’s more, he real does care and show his love to everyone he meets. I believe that he is a true person of compassion or carefulness. He had so many good personal quality that we all respect him.

 

1.to→about 2.because→that 3.wih smile之间加a 4.happy→happiness 5.looked→looking 6.give it up中去掉it 7.real→really 8.or→and 9.had→has 10.quality→qualities 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述作者的英雄——爸爸马修。 第一处:考查介词。句意:今天,我要谈谈关于我的父亲Matthew ,他是我的偶像。talk to意为“和……交谈”,talk about意为“谈论……”。结合句意,故应将to改为about。 第二处:考查表语从句。句意:我崇拜父亲的原因是他每天都是带着微笑开始新的一天。“that he starts very day with smile”是表语从句,该从句结构意思完整,故要用that引导该从句。故应将because改为that。 第三处:考查冠词。smile意为“微笑”,是可数名词。结合语境,该处应在smile前加不定冠词a。 第四处:考查名词。happiness是名词,做bring的宾语。故应将happy改为happiness。 第五处:考查语态。句意:自从多年以前,他一直在照顾我们。since引导时间状语,主句要用现在完成进行时或现在完成进行时态。且主语he和look after us之间是主动关系,故该处应用现在完成进行时态。因此,故应将looked改为looking。 第六处:考查固定短语。句意:他经常鼓励我们要一直亲近,不要放弃。由语境可知,该句中的it无指代对象,多余,应去掉。故去掉give it up中的it。 第七处:考查副词。really是副词,修饰动词do。故应将real改为really。 第八处:考查连词。句意:I believe that he is a true person of compassion or carefulness我认为他是一个真正充满爱心和细心的人。根据句意,compassion和carefulness是并列关系,不是选择关系,故应将or改为and。 第九处:考查时态和主谓一致。由上文语境可知,该文是对作者父亲的客观介绍,故该句应用一般现在时态。且主语为第三人称单数,故应将had改为has。 第十处:考查名词。quality意为“品质”,是可数名词,前面有many修饰,故应将quality改为qualities。  
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4.A.problems B.questions C.ideas D.comments(评论)

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7.A.for example B.such as C.so as D.so that

8.A.make B.turn C.let D.change

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10.A.for B.but C.so D.or

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13.A.learn B.rescue C.struggle D.separate

14.A.experiences B.difficulties C.fears D.problems

15.A.success B.happiness C.failure D.height

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