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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Wang Kai lived next to Granny Liu, which depended on the ambulance to take him to hospital for treatments. However, things became difficult on cold snowy days. Though Wang Kai had cleared the driveway the week ago to make way for the ambulance, more snow fall on the ground last night. Wang Kai knew he had to help with his neighbor clean up the snow and couldn't finish it himself. So he called four of his friend for help. With five boys on hand, to clear the driveway only took 30 minutes. But it meant all the difference to Granny Liu. A snowstorm could easy turn into a dangerous situation for her. Thanks to boys, she was send to hospital in time.

 

which → who him → her ago → before fall → fell 删除help后的with and → but friend → friends easy → easily to后加the/these send → sent 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了王凯和他的朋友门帮助邻居刘奶奶扫雪,让她可以方便地使用轮椅去医院治疗的故事。 1. 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,此处是非限制性定语从句的关系词,先行词Granny Liu在从句中充当主语,故用关系代词who,故将which改为who。 2. 考查代词。结合上下文可知,Granny Liu是女性,应用her指代,故将him改为her。 3. 考查副词。根据had cleared判断此处用before表在过去之前,故将ago改为before。 4. 考查时态。由last night判断此处用一般过去时,故将fall改为fell。 5. 考查介词。help是及物动词,其后直接加宾语,故删除help后的with。 6. 考查并列连词。句意:王凯知道他必须帮助邻居把雪清扫干净,但是他自己完成不了。结合句意可知,上下文是转折关系,故将and改为but。 7. 考查名词的数。由four判断此处用friend的复数形式,故将friend改为friends。 8. 考查副词。此处应用easy的副词修饰动词短语turn into,故将easy改为easily。 9. 考查冠词。结合上下文可知,此处特指前文提到的男孩们,故应加冠词或定语进行修饰限定,故在to后加the/these 10. 考查被动语态。分析句子可知,此处是被动语态,应用be加过去分词,故将send改为sent。
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3.A.preparing B.paying C.searching D.struggling

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8.A.directed B.doubled C.rewarded D.required

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20.A.hope B.memory C.mark D.affection

 

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1.What is popular among oil companies these days?

A.Studying climate changes.

B.Launching forestry programs.

C.Working out carbon offset plans.

D.Attracting motorists to buy their petrol.

2.How will Shell Company make profits from its carbon offset projects?

A.By quitting the emissions of its products.

B.By reducing its carbon footprint by a quarter.

C.By limiting the oil used by its own operations.

D.By putting carbon credits it produces on the market.

3.What concerns some environmentalists about forestry project?

A.The projects can't really stop carbon emissions.

B.The projects are hard to monitor in poor countries.

C.The projects may lead to deforestation in other forests.

D.The projects haven't met strict biodiversity requirements.

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A.Discount. B.Cheat.

C.Decline. D.Change.

 

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C.They studied certain colors. D.They analyzed some data.

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B.By studying the data collected.

C.By travelling around the world.

D.By looking at color combinations.

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B.Yellow: Associated with Joy Conditionally.

C.Color: An Important Role in Good Feelings.

D.Color-emotion Data: Collected Internationally.

 

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