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请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个...

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;

2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tom,

I haven’t heard from you for a long time. What is everything going with you? To be honest, I amnot used the food here and the weather always makes me uncomfortably. Therefore, I find that difficult to concentrate on my studies. The new teachers are friendly and they speak so fast that I can’t quite understand them. This often discourages from me in class. What’s bad, I always feel lonely after school. I really want to go back to my previous school, studied together with you.

I was very worried, Can you give me some advices? I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Jack

 

1. What→How 2. used后加to 3. uncomfortably→uncomfortable 4. that→it 5. and→but 6. 去掉from 7. bad→worse 8. studied→studying 9. was→am 10. advices→advice 【解析】 这是一篇应用文。Jack向Tom写信,倾诉他在新的学校遇到的问题,并向Tom征求意见。 第一处:考查特殊疑问句。句意:你一切都好吗?这句话的句子主语是everything,询问事情的状态,所以应将What改为How。 第二处:考查动词短语。句意:说实在的,我不习惯这里的食物,并且这里的天气常常让我很不舒服。“习惯”应翻译为be used to sth.,故在used后加to。 第三处: 考查形容词。句意同上。“不舒服”在make后做me的宾语补足语,表达我的状态,所以应用形容词。故将uncomfortably改为uncomfortable。 第四处: 考查it作宾语补足语。句意:因此,我发现集中注意力学习是比较困难的。“发现……怎么样”可使用“find+sth.+形容词”的结构。这句话中将真正的宾语to concentrate on my studies放在了形容词后,所以使用的是it作形式宾语的结构。故将that改为it。 第五处:考查连词。句意:新的老师很友好但是他们说得太快,我不能太理解。根据句意,“老师很友好”与“他们说得太快,我不能太理解”之间是转折关系,故将and改为but。 第六处:考查介词。句意:这常常让我很沮丧。“discourage(使灰心,使泄气)”是及物动词,其后可以直接接宾语。故将句中的from去掉。 第七处:考查形容词比较级。句意:更糟的是,放学后我常常感到孤单。根据句意,这句话是与前边描述的情况相比而言,更糟糕的是放学后我常常感到孤单。所以使用形容词比较级。故将bad改为worse。 第八处: 考查现在分词作状语。句意:我真地想回到我原来的学校,和你们一起学习。这句话的谓语动词为want to,所以“和你们一起学习”应使用非谓语动词。句子主语I与study之间是主动关系,所以使用现在分词作状语。故将studied改为studying。 第九处: 考查一般现在时。句意:我很担心,你能给我一些建议吗?全文使用的是一般现在时,所以这句话也应使用一般现在时,描写作者现在的状态。故将was改为am。 第十处: 考查名词的数。句意同上。“advice(建议)”为不可数名词,故将advices改为advice。  
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