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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day I happened to find chatting room on my QQ, that people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than mine. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time going by, I found that I could even communication with some college students free.

 

1. chatting前加a 2. that → where 3. surprised → surprise 4. were → was 5. advices → advice 6. But → So 7. practise → practising 8.去掉from 9. communication → communicate 10. free → freely 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。一天,作者偶然在QQ上发现了一个聊天室,那里的人正在用英语聊天。后来,作者每天都会花一个小时在QQ上练习自己的英语口语,他在英语方面也取得了巨大进步。 第一处: 考查冠词。此处泛指“一个聊天室”,应使用不定冠词,chatting是以辅音音素开头的,应使用a。故chatting前加a。 第二处: 考查定语从句。此处是非限定性定语从句,先行词是chatting room,关系词在从句中做地点状语,应使用关系副词where引导。故that改为where。 第三处:考查名词。固定短语:to one’s surprise“令某人吃惊的是”。故surprised改为surprise。 第四处:考查主谓一致。此处是宾语从句的谓语动词,主语是the oral English of some junior students(一些初中生的英语口语),谓语动词应使用单数形式。故were改为was。 第五处: 考查名词单复数。advice是不可数名词,不能用复数形式。故advices改为advice。 第六处: 考查连词。根据句意“所以在那之后的每一天我都会花一个小时在QQ上练习我的英语口语”可知,此处与上文不是转折关系,是因果关系。故But改为So。 第七处: 考查非谓语动词。固定搭配:spend time (in) doing sth.“花时间做某事”。故practise改为practising。 第八处: 考查实意动词。learn from“向……学习”,此处表示“学习了很多有用的词汇和习语”,from是多余的。故去掉from。 第九处: 考查动词。此处是宾语从句的谓语动词,位于could后,应使用动词原形。故communication改为communicate。 第十处: 考查副词。此处修饰动词communicate,应使用副词,意为“与一些大学生自由地交流”。故free改为freely。  
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