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假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher, which spends too much time with his work every day. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried him.” That is what other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid a visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quiet I stepped into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

 

1. 第一句:which→who 2. 第一句:with→on 3. 第二句:去掉so 4. 第三句:have→has 5. 第四句:healthy→health 6. 第四句:worried后加about 7. 第六句:her→his 8. 第八句:Quiet→Quietly 9. 第九句:picture→pictures 10. 第十句:many→much 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。本文讲述了作者去看望因劳累过度而病倒的老师时,看到老师在病床上看着他们的照片,明白了老师和学生思念老师一样在思念学生们。 1. 考查定语从句。句意:约翰逊先生是一个努力工作的老师,他每天花太多的时间在工作上。这是一个定语从句,先行词为teacher,指人,并且先行词在从句中作主语,这又是一个非限制性定语从句,所以关系词只能使用who。故将which改为who。 2. 考查介词。句意同上。spend…on…“在……花费时间”。故将with改为on。 3. 考查连词。句意:他从早工作到晚,睡得很少,几乎没有休息。so是一个连词,连接两个并列的句子,而本句中with是一个介词,与后边的名词一起在句中作状语,不能构成一个分句。故去掉so。 4. 考查主谓一致。句意:烦劳的工作使得他生病了。“hard work(烦劳的工作)”为不可数名词,所以谓语动词使用第三人称单数形式。故将have改为has。 5. 考查名词。句意:他毁了他的健康。“健康”位于物主代词后,所以应使用名词形式。故将healthy改为health。 6. 考查介词。句意:我们很担心他。worry sb.意为“令某人担心”;worry about是一个短语,意思是“担心,烦恼”,be worried about表示一种状态。根据句意可知,我们担心老师,故选用be worried about这种结构。故在worried后加about。 7. 考查物主代词。句意:我很想见他,但是在他的房间外,我停住了。由Mr. Johnson可知,老师是一名男性老师。所以物主代词应使用his。故将her改为his。 8. 考查副词。句意:悄悄地我走进他的房间。“悄悄地”修饰动词stepped,应用副词形式。故将Quiet改为Quietly。 9. 考查名词的数。句意:我看到他躺在床上,看着我们一起拍的照片。“some of the…”结构中,of后用不可数名词或者可数名词的复数形式。“picture(照片)”为可数名词。故将picture改为pictures。 10. 考查副词。句意:我理解了他就像我们想念他一样想念我们。“as…as…”结构修饰动词missed,所以使用副词much(非常)。故将many改为much。  
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